"The hinges groaned like an old man’s knees, and the scent of spiced curry and something smoky—old books, maybe—filled the air before she could step inside."
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"The amber eye on his left side gleamed with something that wasn’t quite amusement, not quite irritation—just the way it had the night he’d walked into her life like he owned it."
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"The flat was exactly as she’d left it—chaos."
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"She just stood there, watching as he closed the distance between them, his cane tapping against the floorboards until he stood so close she could feel the heat of him, the way his cologne—something spicy and dark—lingered in the air between them."
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"Aurora touched her face, half-expecting to find scars or something—proof that time had changed her."
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"The scar on her left wrist—small, crescent-shaped, from the accident when she was a kid—was nothing compared to the way her heart raced under his touch."
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"It was Lucien—demanding and sure and impossible to resist."
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"He grinned, and for a second, she forgot about everything else—the past, the hurt, the way they’d torn each other apart."
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"But she knew one thing—she wasn’t going to let herself forget how dangerous he was."
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"The amber eye on his left side gleamed with something that wasn’t quite amusement, not quite irritation—just the way it had the night he’d walked into her life …"
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"The same reckless, stubborn, stubbornly hopeful girl who’d thought she could handle him."
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"She just stood there, watching as he closed the distance between them, his cane tapping against the floorboards until he stood so close she could feel the heat …"
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"Knew the way he’d looked at her that night, the way he’d made her feel like she was the only thing in the world that mattered."
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"His hand slid around her waist, pulling her against him, and she melted into him, her fingers tangling in his hair as she kissed him back with a hunger that sur…"
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"She could feel the heat of him, the way his heart raced against her chest, the way his fingers dug into her hip as if he was afraid she’d disappear."
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"She forgot about everything except the way he made her feel, the way he looked at her like she was the only thing in the world that mattered."
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"She could feel the weight of him, the way he filled the room, the way he made her feel like she was the only thing in the world that mattered."
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"She walked down the street, her steps quick and sure, her mind racing with everything that had happened, everything that could have happened."
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"She just walked, her fingers tightening around her messenger bag, her heart pounding in her chest."