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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMEF10FA3M77882R8TDAXH
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Model:
Cohere Command R+ (Aug. 2024)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
33.0s
Cost:
$0.015062
Provider:
Cohere
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned tube station, her boots clicking on the concrete platform. The stale air, heavy with the scent of rust and decaying leaves,
sent a shiver down
her spine—not from the cold, but from the eerie feeling that lingered in this hidden place. The faint glow of gas lanterns
flickered
, casting long shadows that danced like malevolent spirits. This was the Veil Market, a supernatural black market that defied earthly norms, and it held secrets she
was determined
to unveil. She had received an anonymous tip about a disturbance at this location, and her instincts, honed over 18 years in the Metropolitan Police, told her it was no ordinary crime scene. As she scanned the deserted platforms, the absence of any market activity
confirmed that something
had indeed gone
very
wrong. "Detective Quinn!" A familiar voice called out from the shadows, and a figure stepped forward. It was Detective Constable Walker, her trusted colleague and the officer who had been first on the scene. "DC Walker," Quinn acknowledged with a nod, her sharp eyes taking in the surroundings. "What have we got here?" Walker, a younger man with a nervous twitch to his eye, rubbed his hands together as if trying to generate warmth in the damp underground space. "A real odd one, ma'am. Looked like the Market was setting up shop, but something spooked them. E
very
one scattered, and it's been dead quiet since." Quinn's gaze darted around, taking in the evidence. Abandoned stalls lined the platform, displaying wares ranging from mundane to the
otherworldly
: a crystal ball, vials of shimmering liquid, and ancient-looking tomes. A forgotten cup of tea had gone cold, steam no longer rising from its surface—a detail that suggested a hasty departure. She stooped to inspect a peculiar item, a small brass compass with an
intricate
face. "The Veil Compass, crafted by a Shade artisan," she murmured, recognizing the tool from her research. Its needle spun
lazily
, seemingly confused by the absence of the supernatural energy it
was attuned
to. "This device points toward the nearest rift or portal. The Market's location jumps around because of its
otherworldly
connections, and the compass helps them
navigate
." "Right, ma'am," Walker said, a hint of impatience creeping into his voice. "So, they packed up and skipped town. Maybe a rival gang got wind of their operation." Quinn straightened, her eyes narrowing. The explanation was too simple, too convenient. A woman's intuition told her this wasn't just another turf war. "Show me where they set up the stalls." They walked down the platform, their
footsteps
echoing
off the curved walls. "Here, see? They were getting ready for business. Customers started arriving, but then..." Walker's voice trailed off as he gestured at the abandoned items. "Something made e
very
one run." Quinn nodded, her keen eyes noticing the fine layer of dust that covered the goods. She traced a finger through it, disrupting the delicate pattern. "This dust is fresh, kicked up from the tracks beneath us. The Market hadn't been here long before they took off." "Makes sense they'd keep moving, hard to pin down like a ghost," Walker mused. "Not much we can do if they don't want to be found." "That's where you're wrong," Quinn said firmly. Her belief that justice could be served, even in this shadowy world, burned bright. "This place is more than an illicit trade hub. It's a community. And someone scared them off." Walker's brows knitted together, his confusion evident. "But nothing's been touched, no signs of a fight. If someone had spooked them, why wouldn't they take their goods and go? Valuable stuff here, someone would've pocketed a trinket or two." Quinn's brown eyes scanned the distant tunnels, her mind racing. "That's because it wasn't an external threat. No rival gang or police raid caused this evacuation. It was something from within. Perhaps a dispute or..." She trailed off, her face hardening. "You remember the Thorne case?" A look of understanding flashed across Walker's face. "The disappearances a few years back, linked to that abandoned warehouse near the river. Rumors of occult activity. Someone messed with forces they didn't understand." "Exactly. And DS Morris," Quinn said, her voice turning steely, "my partner, was one of the casualties. The official report was inconclusive, but I've always suspected supernatural involvement." Walker nodded, his face a mix of empathy and confusion. "I'm sorry, ma'am. But what does this have to do with the Veil Market?" "The Market's bone tokens," Quinn continued, her mind connecting the dots. "Entrance is granted to those who possess one, but the tokens are passed down within families or sold for steep prices. They're a closely guarded secret. So, how did our perpetrator access this hidden world, and why did they flee without a trace?" As if on cue, a chill wind snaked its way down the tunnel, rustling the papers of a stall and sending a shiver down Walker's frame. Quinn's eyes glinted with determination, the cold having no effect on her. "Check the security cameras, see if they caught anything that can help us identify who or what caused this disturbance." "Yes, ma'am," Walker replied, his breathing visible in the frigid air as he ventured down the platform. Quinn remained, her gaze fixed on the spinning needle of the Veil Compass. Her intuition, sharpened by years of policing, told her a familiar evil was at play, one that she had chased for too long without answers. She would not rest until the truth
was brought
to light, even if it lay in the darkest corners of London's underworld. As the quiet station
seemed to
hold its breath, Detective Harlow Quinn stood resolute, ready to confront the mysterious forces that had entered her jurisdiction, knowing full well that in this unusual world, nothing was ever as it seemed.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
59.2593%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Quinn said firmly [firmly]"
1
"Quinn said, her voice turning steely [steely]"
79.4661%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
974
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"lazily"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"lazily"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
28.1314%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
974
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
2
word
"intricate"
count
1
3
word
"footsteps"
count
1
4
word
"echoing"
count
1
5
word
"navigate"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"otherworldly"
2
"intricate"
3
"footsteps"
4
"echoing"
5
"navigate"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"sent a shiver down"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
41
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
41
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
56
matches
0
"confirmed that something"
68.9182%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
23
mean
42.22
std
16.52
cv
0.391
sampleLengths
0
85
1
51
2
33
3
19
4
51
5
52
6
73
7
28
8
31
9
40
10
46
11
26
12
38
13
39
14
46
15
33
16
28
17
24
18
54
19
58
20
17
21
60
22
39
84.5528%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
41
matches
0
"was determined"
1
"was attuned"
2
"was brought"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
101
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
606
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
17
adverbRatio
0.028052805280528052
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.009900990099009901
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
56
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
56
mean
17.34
std
8.72
cv
0.503
sampleLengths
0
16
1
32
2
15
3
22
4
31
5
20
6
15
7
18
8
14
9
5
10
26
11
25
12
8
13
23
14
21
15
15
16
16
17
17
18
25
19
12
20
16
21
5
22
7
23
11
24
8
25
12
26
24
27
4
28
15
29
10
30
21
31
14
32
12
33
7
34
14
35
17
36
7
37
32
38
10
39
31
40
5
41
8
42
25
43
28
44
10
45
14
46
11
47
43
48
26
49
12
87.5000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.5357142857142857
totalSentences
56
uniqueOpeners
30
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"Quinn acknowledged with a nod, her sharp eyes taking in the surroundings (acknowledge take)"
1
"she murmured, recognizing the tool from her research (murmur, recognize)"
2
"Walker said, a hint of impatience creeping into his voice (say, creep)"
3
"Walker mused (muse)"
4
"Quinn said firmly (say firmly)"
5
"Quinn said, her voice turning steely (say, turn steely)"
6
"Quinn continued, her mind connecting the dots (continue, connect)"
7
"Walker replied, his breathing visible in the frigid air as he ventured down the platform (reply, venture)"
82.8134%