| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said firmly [firmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.423 | | leniency | 0.846 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 89.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 973 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 973 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "down her spine" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "determined" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "otherworldly" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "navigate" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "disrupting" | | 14 | "firmly" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 971 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 603 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.99 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 12 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Detective | 3 | | Constable | 1 | | Walker | 10 | | Compass | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Police" | | 3 | "Constable" | | 4 | "Walker" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.505 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to generate warmth in the damp underground space" | | 1 | "e spun lazily, seemingly confused by the abs" |
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| 97.01% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.03 | | wordCount | 971 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the cold, but from the eerie feeling" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "confirmed that something" |
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| 68.92% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 42.22 | | std | 16.52 | | cv | 0.391 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 39 |
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| 79.59% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "was determined" | | 1 | "was attuned" | | 2 | "was brought" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "The stale air, heavy with the scent of rust and decaying leaves, sent a shiver down her spine—not from the cold, but from the eerie feeling that lingered in this hidden place." | | 1 | "A forgotten cup of tea had gone cold, steam no longer rising from its surface—a detail that suggested a hasty departure." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 606 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.028052805280528052 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009900990099009901 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 56 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 56 | | mean | 17.34 | | std | 8.72 | | cv | 0.503 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 43 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 87.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5357142857142857 | | totalSentences | 56 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "She had received an anonymous" | | 1 | "It was Detective Constable Walker," | | 2 | "She stooped to inspect a" | | 3 | "she murmured, recognizing the tool" | | 4 | "Its needle spun lazily, seemingly" | | 5 | "They walked down the platform," | | 6 | "She traced a finger through" | | 7 | "Her belief that justice could" | | 8 | "She trailed off, her face" | | 9 | "Her intuition, sharpened by years" | | 10 | "She would not rest until" |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into" | | 1 | "The stale air, heavy with" | | 2 | "The faint glow of gas" | | 3 | "This was the Veil Market," | | 4 | "She had received an anonymous" | | 5 | "A familiar voice called out" | | 6 | "It was Detective Constable Walker," | | 7 | "Quinn acknowledged with a nod," | | 8 | "Walker, a younger man with" | | 9 | "Quinn's gaze darted around, taking" | | 10 | "A forgotten cup of tea" | | 11 | "She stooped to inspect a" | | 12 | "she murmured, recognizing the tool" | | 13 | "Its needle spun lazily, seemingly" | | 14 | "Walker said, a hint of" | | 15 | "Quinn straightened, her eyes narrowing." | | 16 | "The explanation was too simple," | | 17 | "A woman's intuition told her" | | 18 | "They walked down the platform," | | 19 | "Walker's voice trailed off as" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The stale air, heavy with the scent of rust and decaying leaves, sent a shiver down her spine—not from the cold, but from the eerie feeling that lingered in thi…" | | 1 | "The faint glow of gas lanterns flickered, casting long shadows that danced like malevolent spirits." | | 2 | "This was the Veil Market, a supernatural black market that defied earthly norms, and it held secrets she was determined to unveil." | | 3 | "It was Detective Constable Walker, her trusted colleague and the officer who had been first on the scene." | | 4 | "Walker, a younger man with a nervous twitch to his eye, rubbed his hands together as if trying to generate warmth in the damp underground space." | | 5 | "As if on cue, a chill wind snaked its way down the tunnel, rustling the papers of a stall and sending a shiver down Walker's frame." | | 6 | "As the quiet station seemed to hold its breath, Detective Harlow Quinn stood resolute, ready to confront the mysterious forces that had entered her jurisdiction…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "A familiar voice called out, and a figure stepped forward" | | 1 | "Quinn acknowledged, her sharp eyes taking in the surroundings" | | 2 | "Walker said, a hint of impatience creeping into his voice" | | 3 | "She trailed, her face hardening" | | 4 | "Quinn said, her voice turning steely," | | 5 | "Quinn continued, her mind connecting the dots" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "A familiar voice called out (call out)" | | 1 | "Quinn acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Quinn continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |