Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMEF8YSYV1XHHBAADZ7MTX

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19.8s
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$0.040830
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Azure

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the air around her shimmering like a heat haze. She felt a slight tug in her chest, as if the world itself was pulling her forward. Her bright blue eyes widened as she took in the sight before her. The Fae Grove was unlike anything she had ever seen. Wildflowers of every imaginable color carpeted the ground, their petals glistening with dew despite the absence of rain. The air was thick with the scent of blooming jasmine and honeysuckle, mingling with the earthy aroma of moss and damp soil. The sky above was a patchwork of twilight hues, a perpetual dusk that cast everything in a soft, ethereal glow. Rory glanced over her shoulder at Nyx, the Shade's faintly glowing violet eyes the only feature visible in their shadowy form. They moved silently, their presence more felt than seen, a whisper of darkness against the vibrant backdrop of the grove. "Isolde said she'd meet us here," Rory murmured, her voice barely louder than the rustle of leaves in the gentle breeze. Nyx's voice, a whisper carried on the wind, replied, "Patience, Rory. Time flows differently here. She will come." Rory nodded, her fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habit she had when she was anxious. She took a deep breath and continued forward, the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant cool against her skin. The deep crimson gemstone pulsed faintly, a steady rhythm that matched her heartbeat. As they ventured deeper into the grove, the wildflowers gave way to towering trees with silver bark and leaves that shimmered like spun glass. The ground beneath their feet was soft, almost spongy, and Rory had the unsettling sensation that it was breathing, expanding and contracting with each step they took. A sudden rustling in the underbrush made Rory freeze. She reached for the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, the moonsilver dagger cold to the touch. Nyx melted into the shadows, their form blending seamlessly with the darkness. A figure emerged from the foliage, her silver hair cascading down to her waist, pale lavender eyes gleaming with an otherworldly light. Isolde Varga, the Seer, moved with a grace that seemed almost unnatural, her feet leaving no trace on the ground. "Welcome, Aurora," Isolde said, her voice melodic and soothing. "And you, Nyx. It is good to see you both." Rory relaxed, though she kept her hand on the hilt of the dagger. "Isolde. It's good to see you too." Isolde's gaze flicked to the Heartstone Pendant. "You have brought the artifact. Good. It will be needed." Rory frowned. "Needed for what?" Isolde smiled, a cryptic expression that gave nothing away. "All in due time, child. For now, follow me." They followed Isolde deeper into the grove, the trees growing denser, their branches intertwining to form a natural canopy. The light grew dimmer, the air cooler, and Rory felt a shiver run down her spine. She glanced at Nyx, who seemed unaffected, their form gliding effortlessly through the shadows. They reached a clearing where a circle of ancient stones stood, their surfaces etched with runes that glowed faintly in the twilight. In the center of the circle was a pool of water, its surface perfectly still, reflecting the sky above. Isolde gestured to the pool. "This is the Mirror of Truth. It will show you what you seek, but be warned, the truth is not always what you wish to see." Rory stepped forward, her reflection wavering in the water. She took a deep breath and looked into the pool. The surface rippled, and an image began to form. She saw herself, standing in a place she didn't recognize, a vast landscape of rolling hills and dark forests. She was holding the Heartstone Pendant, its glow illuminating the darkness around her. Suddenly, the image shifted, and she saw a figure approaching her. It was Evan, her ex, his face twisted with anger and malice. Rory's heart pounded in her chest, and she took a step back, the image dissolving into the still water. Isolde's voice was gentle. "The Mirror shows what is, what was, and what could be. It is up to you to discern the meaning." Rory swallowed hard, her mind racing. "What does it mean? Why did I see Evan?" Isolde's expression softened. "The past has a way of haunting us, Aurora. You must confront it if you are to move forward." Rory nodded, her resolve hardening. "I understand." Nyx stepped forward, their violet eyes fixed on the pool. The water rippled again, and an image of a vast, shadowy realm appeared. It was a place of darkness and whispers, a realm between worlds. Nyx's form seemed to waver, as if drawn to the image. Isolde watched them with a knowing look. "You seek to understand your nature, Nyx. The Mirror shows you the path, but it is one you must walk alone." Nyx's voice was a whisper. "I know." Rory turned to Isolde. "What do we do now?" Isolde smiled, a hint of mischief in her eyes. "Now, we prepare. The Veil is weakening, and soon, the realms will align. You will need the Heartstone and the Fae-Forged Blade. There are forces at work that seek to disrupt the balance, and you must be ready to face them." Rory's grip tightened on the dagger. "We're ready." Isolde nodded. "Good. Then let us begin." As they moved to the edge of the clearing, Rory felt a sense of unease settle over her. The grove was beautiful, but it was also a place of secrets and hidden dangers. She glanced at Nyx, who seemed lost in thought, their form flickering like a candle in the wind. They followed Isolde through the grove, the path winding and twisting, leading them deeper into the heart of the Fae-touched realm. The air grew colder, and the light dimmer, until they reached a place where the trees parted to reveal a stone archway covered in ivy. Isolde turned to them, her lavender eyes serious. "Beyond this archway lies the path to the Veil. Once you cross, there is no turning back." Rory took a deep breath, her heart pounding. "We're ready." Nyx nodded, their form solidifying. "We are." Isolde stepped aside, allowing them to pass through the archway. As they crossed the threshold, Rory felt a strange sensation, as if the very fabric of reality was shifting around her. The air grew heavy, and the light took on a surreal quality, casting everything in sharp relief. They emerged into a landscape that was both familiar and alien. The sky was a warm amber, and the ground was covered in lush, verdant grass. Sprawling vineyards and orchards stretched out before them, the air filled with the scent of ripe fruit and blooming flowers. Rory's eyes widened in wonder. "Is this... Dymas?" Nyx's voice was a whisper. "Yes. The realm of Gluttony." Rory took a step forward, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing faintly against her chest. She felt a sense of awe and trepidation as they moved deeper into the realm, the beauty and excess of the place both enchanting and unsettling. As they walked, they passed grand feasts and culinary competitions, the helbound souls contracted from Earth working tirelessly to create masterpieces of flavor and indulgence. The air was filled with laughter and the clinking of glasses, but there was an undercurrent of desperation, a sense that the revelry was a mask for something darker. Rory glanced at Nyx. "What now?" Nyx's violet eyes glowed faintly. "We find Belphegor. He holds the key to the portal." Rory nodded, her resolve hardening. "Let's go." They moved through the realm with purpose, their steps quick and sure. The path ahead was uncertain, but they were ready to face whatever challenges lay in their way. The Veil was weakening, and the balance of the realms was at stake. They had to succeed. As they ventured deeper into Dymas, Rory couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched. She glanced over her shoulder, but saw nothing. The sense of unease grew, but she pushed it aside, focusing on the task at hand. They reached a grand palace, its walls covered in vines and flowers. The air was thick with the scent of roses and jasmine, and the sound of music drifted from within. Rory took a deep breath and stepped forward, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing steadily. Nyx's voice was a whisper. "Be careful, Rory. Belphegor is not to be underestimated." Rory nodded, her grip tightening on the Fae-Forged Blade. "I know." They entered the palace, the opulence and excess of the place almost overwhelming. The walls were lined with gold and silver, and the floors were covered in rich, plush carpets. The air was filled with the scent of exotic spices and the sound of laughter and music. At the far end of the grand hall, a figure sat on a throne, his eyes gleaming with a predatory light. Prince Belphegor, the ruler of Dymas, watched them with a calculating gaze. "Welcome, Aurora Carter," he said, his voice smooth and honeyed. "I have been expecting you." Rory took a deep breath, her heart pounding. "We're here for the portal." Belphegor's smile was cold. "Of course you are. But nothing in Dymas comes without a price." Rory's grip tightened on the dagger. "Name your price." Belphegor's eyes gleamed. "A simple challenge. A test of your resolve. If you succeed, the portal is yours. If you fail... well, let's just say the consequences will be dire." Rory nodded, her resolve unwavering. "We accept." Belphegor's smile widened. "Excellent. Let the games begin." As the challenge unfolded, Rory felt a sense of determination and purpose. The path ahead was fraught with danger, but she was ready. With Nyx by her side and the Heartstone Pendant and Fae-Forged Blade in her possession, she knew they could face whatever lay ahead. The fate of the realms rested in their hands, and they would not fail.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory murmured, her voice barely louder than the rustle of leaves in the gentle breeze [barely]"
82.1109% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1677
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.5176% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1677
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count2
5
word"cascading"
count1
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"surreal"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count1
11
word"trepidation"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"flicked"
2"shimmered"
3"glistening"
4"gleaming"
5"cascading"
6"wavering"
7"otherworldly"
8"surreal"
9"calculating"
10"unwavering"
11"trepidation"
12"etched"
0.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches6
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
2
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
3
label"air was thick with"
count2
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
2"a sense of unease"
3"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences105
matches
0"was anxious"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"work that seek"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean27.85
std17.49
cv0.628
sampleLengths
058
160
241
321
418
553
651
737
842
919
1020
1117
125
1318
1449
1541
1631
1760
1842
1924
2015
2122
227
2346
2428
257
269
2750
288
297
3051
3146
3225
3310
347
3548
3646
378
3810
3939
4054
416
4215
437
4446
4540
4644
4714
4811
4947
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"was covered"
1"was filled"
2"were lined were covered"
3"was filled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs232
matches
0"was pulling"
1"was breathing"
2"was holding"
3"was shifting"
4"was weakening"
5"were being"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1352
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02440828402366864
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.011094674556213017
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean12.11
std7.42
cv0.613
sampleLengths
018
117
213
310
418
522
620
721
820
921
1018
1121
1219
1313
1424
1527
169
1716
1812
1922
2020
219
2210
2313
247
257
2610
272
283
299
309
3119
3216
3314
3422
3519
365
3726
389
3910
409
4119
4213
4311
4412
4519
464
4720
486
499
46.3768% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2753623188405797
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners38
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured, her voice barely louder than the rustle of leaves in the gentle breeze (murmur, leave)"
1"Nyx's voice, a whisper carried on the wind, replied, (carry on reply)"
2"he said, his voice smooth and honeyed (say, honey)"
75.8238%