| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde interrupted gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.41 | | leniency | 0.821 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 80.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1040 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1040 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "gleaming" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "furrowed" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "potential" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "grave" | | 13 | "enigmatic" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "intensity" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "grappling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "a spark of determination" |
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| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1051 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 612 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.45 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 8 | | Aurora | 15 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 14 | | Seer | 1 | | Immediately | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.275 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 91.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "hum that seemed to vibrate through her very bones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1051 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.28% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 32.84 | | std | 14.85 | | cv | 0.452 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 68 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 21 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.08% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick with the earthy, floral scent of the blooms, and a faint, shimmering distortion clung to the periphery of her vision — the Veil, Nyx had called it, the boundary between this world and the realms beyond." | | 1 | "The moment Aurora's foot touched the grass within the circle, a sensation washed over her — a deep, resonant hum that seemed to vibrate through her very bones." | | 2 | "Immediately, an image materialized — a swirling vortex of shadow and flame, its edges flickering with unearthly energy." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 530 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.016981132075471698 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009433962264150943 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 13.83 | | std | 8.44 | | cv | 0.61 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 71.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4342105263157895 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Immediately, an image materialized —" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a step forward," | | 1 | "she said, her voice carrying" | | 2 | "She rose gracefully to her" | | 3 | "She gestured to the standing" | | 4 | "Her heartbeat slowed, and the" | | 5 | "She raised one hand, tracing" | | 6 | "She gestured, and the image" | | 7 | "She extended her hand, and" | | 8 | "It was cold to the" | | 9 | "She gestured to the shimmering" | | 10 | "Her mind raced, grappling with" | | 11 | "she said, her voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.24 | |
| 30.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "The thickly wooded path gave" | | 1 | "Clusters of wildflowers dotted the" | | 2 | "Aurora paused at the edge" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 4 | "Aurora nodded, the pendant at" | | 5 | "She took a step forward," | | 6 | "Nyx drifted ahead, gliding across" | | 7 | "Aurora followed, her eyes darting" | | 8 | "The air was thick with" | | 9 | "Isolde the Seer looked up" | | 10 | "she said, her voice carrying" | | 11 | "Aurora hesitated, her fingers tracing" | | 12 | "Isolde inclined her head, a" | | 13 | "She rose gracefully to her" | | 14 | "Aurora's brow furrowed." | | 15 | "Isolde interrupted gently" | | 16 | "She gestured to the standing" | | 17 | "Aurora glanced at Nyx, who" | | 18 | "Nyx followed, their form flickering" | | 19 | "The moment Aurora's foot touched" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx followed, their form flickering and solidifying as they crossed the barrier." | | 1 | "The moment Aurora's foot touched the grass within the circle, a sensation washed over her — a deep, resonant hum that seemed to vibrate through her very bones." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper on the light breeze" | | 1 | "She took, her boots crunching softly on the grass" | | 2 | "she said, her voice carrying the cadence of a whisper" | | 3 | "Aurora repeated, her mind racing" | | 4 | "She gestured, and the image shifted, revealing a sprawling network of shimmering rifts, scattered across the countryside" | | 5 | "she said, her voice steady" |
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| 47.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde interrupted gently (interrupt)" | | 2 | "Aurora repeated (repeat)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.205 | |