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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMEV7FKXYZS0053DHPDHZC
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
27.1s
Cost:
$0.000586
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The night air was thick with the smell of rain and the distant hint of smoke from the city's chimneys. Detective Harlow Quinn stood on the corner of St. Martin's Lane, her sharp
jaw clenched
tight as she surveyed the slick, black pavement. Her worn leather
watch
told her it was just past midnight, and the city slept under a blanket of darkness, broken only by the feeble light of the streetlamps. She had been tracking Tomás Herrera for the better part of a week, and tonight, she finally had him in her sights. She knew he was involved with the clique, a group of criminals who trafficked in supernatural contraband. She had been following him since he left The Raven's Nest, a dimly lit bar in Soho that served as the clique's headquarters. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance
flickered
in the rain, casting an eerie glow over the alley where she had been waiting. Her heart raced as she saw him turn the corner, his Saint Christopher medallion
glinting
under the lamplight. She had to act fast. She broke into a run, her feet pounding against the wet pavement, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her forehead. She didn't care about the rain anymore; all she cared about
was catching
him. He must have heard her
footsteps
because he
started to
run too. He ran like a man possessed, his olive skin
glistening
with sweat as he
navigated
the twists and turns of the city streets. He ran through the heart of Camden, dodging market stalls and late-night revelers, and Harlow followed, her lungs burning with every breath. She saw him disappear into an abandoned Tube station, and without hesitation, she followed. The entrance to the underground market was well hidden, and she had to rely on her instincts to guide her through the labyrinth of tunnels. The deeper she went, the darker and more claustrophobic it became.
The air was thick with
the smell of damp and decay, and she could hear the scurrying of rats in the shadows. Finally, she found herself in a vast chamber, the walls lined with stalls selling every conceivable supernatural artifact and alchemical substance. The market was bustling with activity, and she knew she had to act fast or risk losing Tomás in the crowd. She saw him up ahead, talking to a vendor at one of the stalls. Without thinking, she reached for her gun, but then she hesitated. She knew she was out of her jurisdiction, and any action she took here could have serious consequences. But then she saw something that made her blood run cold. On the vendor's table lay a vial of a shimmering blue liquid, and she knew immediately what it was. She had heard rumors of a banned alchemical substance that could give the user supernatural abilities, and now she had the proof right in front of her. She knew she had to make a decision. She could walk away now and report what she had seen to her superiors, but she knew they would never believe her. Or she could confront Tomás and the vendor right here and now, and risk everything. In the end, she decided she had no choice. She drew her gun and pointed it at Tomás and the vendor. "Metropolitan Police," she said, her voice
echoing
in the chamber. "Step away from the stall and put your hands where I can see them." Tomás looked at her in surprise, and then he
started to
laugh. "You're out of your depth, detective," he said, his warm brown eyes
glinting
with amusement. "This is no place for you." She tightened her grip on her gun. "I said step away from the stall," she repeated, her voice more urgent this time. But instead of complying, Tomás reached for the vial. In a flash, he had uncorked it and
was drinking
its contents. As she
watch
ed in horror, his body
started to
change. His skin
started to
shimmer and his muscles
started to
swell. He roared with pain and pleasure, and then he
started to
run. She gave chase, but she knew she was no match for his
newfound
abilities. He ran through the market, knocking over stalls and sending people flying. She could hear the screams and cries of the vendors as they
tried to
flee, but she didn't let up. She knew she had to stop him before he hurt anyone else. But it was no use. He was too fast and too strong. He disappeared into the darkness of the tunnels, and she knew she had lost him. She stood there, breathing heavily, her gun still in her hand. She knew she had failed, but she also knew she had uncovered something much bigger than she ever could have imagined. She had to report back to her superiors and tell them what she had seen, but she knew they would never believe her. But she also knew she couldn't give up. She had to find out more about the clique and their activities, and she had to stop them before they hurt anyone else. She had lost Tomás tonight, but she swore to herself that she would find him again, and she would make him pay for what he had done. With a heavy heart, she turned and made her way back to the surface, the
echoes
of the underground market still ringing in her ears. She knew the road ahead would be difficult, but she also knew she had no choice. She had to follow the trail, no matter where it led her, and she had to uncover the truth, no matter the cost.
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2/17/2026, 1:47:22 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
3
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she repeated, her voice more urgent this time [more]"
100.0000%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
951
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
951
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"glistening"
count
1
2
word
"glinting"
count
2
3
word
"newfound"
count
1
4
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
5
word
"footsteps"
count
1
6
word
"echoes"
count
1
7
word
"echoing"
count
1
8
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"glistening"
2
"glinting"
3
"newfound"
4
"jaw clenched"
5
"footsteps"
6
"echoes"
7
"echoing"
8
"navigated"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"jaw clenched"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
58
matches
(empty)
99.7001%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
6
narrationSentences
58
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
1
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
60
matches
(empty)
42.2299%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
18
mean
52.67
std
15.68
cv
0.298
sampleLengths
0
72
1
86
2
58
3
57
4
72
5
42
6
43
7
57
8
45
9
45
10
33
11
22
12
54
13
58
14
27
15
55
16
58
17
64
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
58
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
164
matches
0
"was catching"
1
"was drinking"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
916
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
34
adverbRatio
0.03711790393013101
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.008733624454148471
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
60
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
96.3893%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
60
mean
15.8
std
6.18
cv
0.391
sampleLengths
0
20
1
9
2
14
3
29
4
22
5
17
6
23
7
24
8
18
9
5
10
21
11
14
12
12
13
23
14
22
15
14
16
25
17
11
18
22
19
21
20
21
21
14
22
11
23
18
24
11
25
19
26
27
27
8
28
22
29
15
30
9
31
12
32
10
33
14
34
12
35
15
36
6
37
7
38
15
39
9
40
12
41
10
42
11
43
12
44
14
45
12
46
20
47
12
48
5
49
7
33.3333%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.35
totalSentences
60
uniqueOpeners
21
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"she said, her voice echoing in the chamber (say, echo)"
1
"he said, his warm brown eyes glinting with amusement (say, glint)"
2
"she repeated, her voice more urgent this time (repeat, voice more)"
74.1495%