| 38.0952% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva admitted, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]" | | 1 | "Harlow said, sighing heavily [heavily]" |
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| 50.0000% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 600 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "nervously" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.6667% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 600 | | totalAiIsms | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 27 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 27 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | | |
| 47.0786% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 40 | | std | 12.59 | | cv | 0.315 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 16 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't adding" | | 1 | "were delving" | | 2 | "was telling" |
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| 94.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 412 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, freckle-faced woman" |
| | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.024271844660194174 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019417475728155338 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 35 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 95.0914% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 35 | | mean | 17.14 | | std | 6.65 | | cv | 0.388 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 16 |
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| 78.0952% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 35 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva pleaded, gesturing to the odd symbols scrawled on the walls in what appeared to be a mixture of blood and soot (plead, gesture scrawl appear be)" | | 1 | "Eva admitted, her voice barely above a whisper (admit)" | | 2 | "Harlow said, but her tone lacked conviction (say, lack)" | | 3 | "Harlow said, sighing heavily (say, sigh heavily)" | | 4 | "Eva said, biting her lip (say, bite)" |
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