| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.696 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 39.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 996 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "carefully" | | 5 | "suddenly" | | 6 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 996 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "intensity" | | 3 | "lilt" | | 4 | "furrowed" | | 5 | "fleeting" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "encounter" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "comforting" | | 15 | "charged" | | 16 | "pang" | | 17 | "unspoken" | | 18 | "dance" | | 19 | "magnetic" | | 20 | "racing" | | 21 | "apprehension" | | 22 | "stomach" | | 23 | "grave" | | 24 | "lurching" | | 25 | "tinged" | | 26 | "measured" | | 27 | "determined" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 81.14% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "a twinge of regret" | | 1 | "felt a twinge" | | 2 | "a flicker of relief" |
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| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 992 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally, he sighed and moved to sit on the edge of the worn cushions, his fingers tightening around the ivory handle of …" |
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| 56.10% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 852 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Lucien | 15 | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Rory | 16 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Laila" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.561 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien winced visibly at her words, and R" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to cling to him" | | 2 | "as if weighing the risks of confiding in her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 992 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.71% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 47.24 | | std | 12.49 | | cv | 0.264 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 79 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 31 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 8.93% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien's mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—danced with a familiar intensity as they roamed her face." | | 1 | "The very same cane she remembered—a thin blade concealed within, a mark of his dual nature as a half-demon." | | 2 | "Eva, her closest friend, the one who had helped her escape the nightmare of her past—gone missing?" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 861 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped mark" |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03948896631823461 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019744483159117306 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 15.5 | | std | 6.24 | | cv | 0.402 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 79.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.484375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Once, she'd been able to" | | 1 | "Finally, he sighed and moved" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 98.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She opened her mouth to" | | 1 | "he murmured, the French lilt" | | 2 | "he admitted, his gaze dropping" | | 3 | "It had been nearly three" | | 4 | "she echoed, narrowing her eyes" | | 5 | "he said, his voice barely" | | 6 | "he murmured, a small smile" | | 7 | "she said quietly, the words" | | 8 | "she asked, steeling her voice" | | 9 | "he said, his words chosen" | | 10 | "she pressed, the knot of" | | 11 | "he admitted, his gaze drifting" | | 12 | "she said, gesturing towards the" | | 13 | "he said, his voice low" | | 14 | "she demanded, her voice trembling" | | 15 | "he said, his words measured" | | 16 | "she said, her voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 58.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory Carter stared at the" | | 1 | "She opened her mouth to" | | 2 | "Lucien's mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 3 | "he murmured, the French lilt" | | 4 | "The name he'd called her" | | 5 | "Rory cleared her throat, willing" | | 6 | "The words came out more" | | 7 | "Lucien's brow furrowed slightly, and" | | 8 | "he admitted, his gaze dropping" | | 9 | "The very same cane she" | | 10 | "Rory's mind raced, trying to" | | 11 | "It had been nearly three" | | 12 | "she echoed, narrowing her eyes" | | 13 | "Lucien winced visibly at her" | | 14 | "he said, his voice barely" | | 15 | "Rory studied him for a" | | 16 | "Lucien's eyes widened slightly, and" | | 17 | "Rory closed the door behind" | | 18 | "he murmured, a small smile" | | 19 | "The cat lifted its head," |
| | ratio | 0.804 | |
| 89.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been nearly three years since their last encounter, a confrontation that had left scars far deeper than the small crescent-shaped mark on her wrist." | | 1 | "Rory studied him for a long moment, taking in the weary slump of his shoulders and the shadows that seemed to cling to him." | | 2 | "Rory felt the familiar pull, the magnetic attraction that had always existed between them, despite the complicated history that had driven them apart." | | 3 | "Lucien hesitated for a moment, his eyes searching her face, as if weighing the risks of confiding in her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The words came out, a defensive edge creeping into her tone" | | 1 | "he said, his voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "he murmured, a small smile tugging at the corner of his lips" | | 3 | "she said quietly, the words slipping out before she could stop them" | | 4 | "she pressed, the knot of apprehension in her stomach tightening" | | 5 | "he admitted, his gaze drifting away from hers" | | 6 | "he said, his voice low and grave" | | 7 | "he said, his words measured and precise," | | 8 | "she said, her voice steady and resolute" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she pressed (press)" | | 4 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 5 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.609 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |