Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMEXVNSQYF5M6DECF39YWK

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Duration:
25.3s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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AI
The door swung open with a reluctant creak that seemed to echo the weariness in Aurora Carter's bones. She had been leaning against the doorframe of Eva's flat, her fist still raised from the knock that had just sent a hollow thud through the wooden barrier. There he was, Lucien Moreau, standing in the dimly lit entrance, his tall silhouette backlit by the meager light filtering through the grimy windows of the cramped one-bedroom above the curry house on Brick Lane. Rory's breath caught, not because the sight of him was unexpected—she had come here for him, after all—but because the months since their parting had dulled neither his magnetic pull nor the sharp sting of their last encounter. His heterochromatic eyes met hers, one amber, one black, and for a moment, the world seemed to hold its breath. "Rory," Lucien said, the French lilt in his voice a familiar melody that stirred something within her. The sound of her name on his lips brought back memories she had tried to bury—moments of tenderness amidst the chaos they had navigated together. She took him in, from the slicked-back platinum blond hair that glinted with an ethereal sheen to the tailored charcoal suit that clung to his frame with impeccable precision. Even the way he leaned on his ivory-handled cane spoke of a grace that belied the dangerous edge it concealed. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steadier than she felt. Her heart thrummed in her chest, a wild rhythm that threatened to betray her cool exterior. She had rehearsed this moment in her mind a hundred times, but now, face-to-face with him, the words seemed to slip from her grasp like smoke. His gaze lingered on her, tracing the contours of her face, the straight shoulder-length black hair that framed it, and the bright blue eyes that had once reflected his own conflicted desires. "I didn't expect to see you here," he said, the understatement hanging between them, heavy with unspoken history. Rory's gaze hardened, the memory of their last conversation—a tangle of heated words and hurt feelings—still fresh. "We need to talk," she said, shouldering her way past him into the flat. The familiar scent of aged paper and the musk of old magic enveloped her, a stark contrast to the crisp autumn air that had accompanied her climb up the narrow staircase. Lucien stepped aside, allowing her to enter, and the door clicked shut behind them, sealing them in the cluttered sanctuary that Eva called home. Books and scrolls lay strewn about, a testament to her friend's relentless pursuit of knowledge, while Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, regarded them with bored indifference from his perch atop a pile of parchment. "I see Eva's still buried in her research," Rory remarked, her eyes scanning the room, avoiding Lucien's steady gaze. "She's away at a conference," Lucien replied, his voice a low rumble that seemed to resonate in the cramped space. "I'm watching the flat... and Ptolemy." He gestured towards the cat, who flicked his tail in acknowledgment before returning to his nap. Rory nodded, her gaze finally meeting his. "I need your help, Lucien." The admission cost her; pride was a stubborn beast, and hers had kept her from seeking him out long after she had realized she couldn't face her current troubles alone. A flicker of surprise crossed Lucien's features, quickly replaced by a guarded neutrality. "What kind of help?" he asked, the wariness in his tone a stark reminder of the trust that had been fractured between them. Rory took a deep breath, the weight of her situation pressing down on her. "It's Evan," she said, the name sour on her tongue. "He's back, and he's not... himself." She hugged herself, the chill of fear seeping into her bones. "He's changed, Lucien. There's something dark inside him now." Lucien's expression hardened, his demon heritage surfacing in the predatory sharpness of his eyes. "Has he hurt you?" The question was a growl, a possessive edge that hinted at the protector role he had once assumed in her life. "Not yet," Rory admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. "But I can feel it... the threat. He's stalking me, Lucien. I see him outside my flat, outside the restaurant. He watches me, and when I look into his eyes, I don't recognize the person I once knew." Lucien's hand tightened around the head of his cane, the only outward sign of the turmoil she knew her words had ignited within him. "I won't let him harm you, Rory," he said, the promise resonating with a power that was as much a part of him as his half-demon blood. "I know you won't," she replied, her trust in him a fragile thing, carefully mended and still vulnerable to the storms that had torn it asunder before. "That's why I'm here." They stood there, the air charged with the tension of their shared past and the uncertainty of what lay ahead. Lucien took a step towards her, his movements deliberate, as if he were approaching a skittish animal that might bolt at any sudden move. "We'll figure this out," he said, his voice low and soothing. "Together." Rory's eyes searched his, looking for any hint of hesitation, any shadow of doubt. All she found was resolve, a mirror to her own determination. "Together," she echoed, the word a vow between them. The distance between them seemed to shrink, the invisible barriers they had erected slowly crumbling under the force of their rekindled alliance. Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a silent acknowledgment of the trials they had faced together and those yet to come. Rory's breath hitched at his touch, the contact sending a jolt of electricity up her arm. She had forgotten the way his nearness could unsettle her, the way her heart raced when he looked at her like she was the only person in the world. "I missed you, Rory," Lucien confessed, his voice barely more than a whisper. The walls he had built around himself seemed to crumble, revealing the vulnerability he had kept hidden since their parting. The admission caught her off guard, and for a moment, she couldn't speak. The raw honesty in his eyes stripped her of her defenses, leaving her exposed and aching with the truth of her own feelings. "I missed you too, Lucien," she admitted, the words a surrender to the connection that had never truly severed between them. The air between them seemed to crackle with renewed intensity, the years of denial and distance evaporating in the wake of their shared confession. Lucien's hand moved to cup her face, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw with a tenderness that belied his formidable appearance. Rory leaned into his touch, her eyes fluttering closed as she savored the feeling of his skin against hers. It was a moment of quiet in the midst of the storm that raged around them, a precious fragment of time in which nothing else mattered but the two of them, bound by the threads of a shared destiny. When she opened her eyes again, she found Lucien's gaze fixed on her, a depth of emotion reflected in his mismatched eyes that left her breathless. "We have a lot to catch up on," he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "We do," Rory agreed, the corners of her own mouth lifting in response to the warmth in his voice. "But first, we need to deal with Evan." Lucien nodded, the playful light in his eyes giving way to a steely determination. "Then let's get to work," he said, extending his hand to her in a gesture that was both a peace offering and a declaration of partnership. Rory took his hand, their fingers intertwining with a sense of rightness that she had almost forgotten. Together, they turned to face the cluttered chaos of Eva's flat, ready to dive headfirst into the maelstrom of their shared future. For better or worse, they were in this together, and no matter what darkness lay ahead, Rory knew they would face it as one—a united front against the world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.2593% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory admitted, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
1"she replied, her trust in him a fragile thing, carefully mended and still vulnerable to the storms that had torn it asunder before [carefully still]"
2"Lucien confessed, his voice barely more than a whisper [barely more]"
3"she admitted, the words a surrender to the connection that had never truly severed between them [truly]"
63.8728% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1384
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"slowly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1384
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"testament"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count1
7
word"stark"
count2
8
word"fractured"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"amidst"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"testament"
2"sanctuary"
3"flicker"
4"flicked"
5"unspoken"
6"magnetic"
7"stark"
8"fractured"
9"weight"
10"amidst"
11"echo"
12"echoed"
13"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
96.0729% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
42.9786% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean45.67
std13.72
cv0.3
sampleLengths
081
158
242
349
451
550
662
757
819
942
1042
1136
1250
1339
1448
1551
1631
1744
1812
1934
2052
2145
2233
2357
2447
2558
2645
2727
2840
2968
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"was unexpected"
1"been fractured"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs183
matches
0"were approaching"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1229
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.024410089503661515
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008950366151342554
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean20.45
std8.38
cv0.41
sampleLengths
018
128
235
338
420
517
625
729
820
99
1016
1126
1232
1318
1417
1514
1631
1724
1833
1919
2020
2122
227
2335
2413
2523
2614
2710
2817
299
3014
3125
3210
3338
3424
3527
3627
374
3820
3924
4011
411
4214
4311
449
4522
4630
4716
4829
4913
54.7264% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.373134328358209
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners25
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"she replied, her voice steadier than she felt (reply, feel)"
1"he said, the understatement hanging between them, heavy with unspoken history (say, hang)"
2"she said, shouldering her way past him into the flat (say, shoulder)"
3"Rory remarked, her eyes scanning the room, avoiding Lucien's steady gaze (remark, scan avoid)"
4"Lucien replied, his voice a low rumble that seemed to resonate in the cramped space (reply, seem resonate)"
5"she said, the name sour on her tongue (say, sour)"
6"Rory admitted, her voice barely above a whisper (admit)"
7"he said, the promise resonating with a power that was as much a part of him as his half-demon blood (say, resonate be)"
8"she replied, her trust in him a fragile thing, carefully mended and still vulnerable to the storms that had torn it asunder before (reply, carefully mend tear asunder)"
9"she echoed, the word a vow between them (echo)"
10"Lucien confessed, his voice barely more than a whisper (confess)"
11"she admitted, the words a surrender to the connection that had never truly severed between them (admit, does not never truly sever)"
12"he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips (say, play)"
13"Rory agreed, the corners of her own mouth lifting in response to the warmth in his voice (agree)"
14"he said, extending his hand to her in a gesture that was both a peace offering and a declaration of partnership (say, extend be)"
77.1124%