Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1229
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.024410089503661515
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.008950366151342554
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
67
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
67
mean
20.45
std
8.38
cv
0.41
sampleLengths
0
18
1
28
2
35
3
38
4
20
5
17
6
25
7
29
8
20
9
9
10
16
11
26
12
32
13
18
14
17
15
14
16
31
17
24
18
33
19
19
20
20
21
22
22
7
23
35
24
13
25
23
26
14
27
10
28
17
29
9
30
14
31
25
32
10
33
38
34
24
35
27
36
27
37
4
38
20
39
24
40
11
41
1
42
14
43
11
44
9
45
22
46
30
47
16
48
29
49
13
54.7264%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.373134328358209
totalSentences
67
uniqueOpeners
25
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
18
fancyCount
15
fancyTags
0
"she replied, her voice steadier than she felt (reply, feel)"
1
"he said, the understatement hanging between them, heavy with unspoken history (say, hang)"
2
"she said, shouldering her way past him into the flat (say, shoulder)"
3
"Rory remarked, her eyes scanning the room, avoiding Lucien's steady gaze (remark, scan avoid)"
4
"Lucien replied, his voice a low rumble that seemed to resonate in the cramped space (reply, seem resonate)"
5
"she said, the name sour on her tongue (say, sour)"
6
"Rory admitted, her voice barely above a whisper (admit)"
7
"he said, the promise resonating with a power that was as much a part of him as his half-demon blood (say, resonate be)"
8
"she replied, her trust in him a fragile thing, carefully mended and still vulnerable to the storms that had torn it asunder before (reply, carefully mend tear asunder)"
9
"she echoed, the word a vow between them (echo)"
10
"Lucien confessed, his voice barely more than a whisper (confess)"
11
"she admitted, the words a surrender to the connection that had never truly severed between them (admit, does not never truly sever)"
12
"he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips (say, play)"
13
"Rory agreed, the corners of her own mouth lifting in response to the warmth in his voice (agree)"
14
"he said, extending his hand to her in a gesture that was both a peace offering and a declaration of partnership (say, extend be)"