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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMFD4804GSV8ETV5FM0E1K
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.002187
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn pounded the pavement, her shoes slapping against the rain-slicked streets of Soho. Ahead, the suspect darted into an alley, his dark jacket billowing behind him like the wings of some great bird of prey. Quinn raced after him, her breath coming in short gasps. The suspect was quick, but she had years of experience on her side. She couldn't let him escape, not after what she'd seen at the crime scene. Her name is Detective Harlow Quinn, and she's been tracking this suspect for weeks. The murder of a prominent businessman had led her to the Raven's Nest, a bar with a reputation for catering to an unusual clientele. She
suspected that the
killer was part of a larger conspiracy, but she needed proof. The alley was narrow and poorly lit, the walls closing in on either side. A faint green glow emanated from a sign above a door at the end of the alley. The Raven's Nest. She'd been here before, but never through the back entrance. Quinn reached for her radio, but hesitated. If she called for backup now, the suspect might hear her and bolt. She had to get closer, find out what he was up to. She edged forward, keeping to the shadows. The suspect had stopped at the door, his hand hovering over the knob. Quinn held her breath, waiting for him to make his move. The door swung open, spilling light into the alley. Quinn caught a glimpse of the interior: wood-paneled walls, a long bar crowded with patrons. The suspect slipped inside, merging with the crowd. Quinn followed, her hand resting on the butt of her gun. She elbowed her way through the throng, ignoring the angry looks and muttered curses. The suspect was just ahead, moving towards the back of the bar. She had to hurry. If she lost him now, she might never get another chance. The bar was a sea of noise and motion, the air thick with the scent of beer and sweat. Quinn pushed forward, her eyes locked on the back of the suspect's head. He stopped at a bookshelf, his fingers
dancing
over the spines of the books. A hidden door? Quinn had heard rumors about places like this, bars and clubs with secret rooms where all manner of illicit activities took place. The bookshelf swung open, revealing a dimly lit corridor. The suspect stepped through, the shelf swinging shut behind him. Quinn hesitated. If she followed him through that door, she'd be leaving the relative safety of the bar behind. But if she didn't, she'd lose her best lead in the case. She made up her mind. She had to know where he
was going
, what he was up to. She'd come too far to turn back now. Quinn stepped forward, her hand brushing the spines of the books. The hidden door swung open, and she stepped through, the door closing behind her with a soft click. The corridor was narrow, the walls rough stone. The air was cool and damp, with an earthy smell that made Quinn
think
of caves and tunnels. She followed the corridor, her
footsteps
echoing
in the silence. The tunnel sloped downward, deeper into the earth. Quinn's heart raced, her hand tight on the grip of her gun. She had no idea where she
was going
, what she might find at the end of this tunnel. The corridor ended in a heavy wooden door, banded with iron. Quinn pushed it open, blinking in the sudden light. She was in a cavern, the walls rising up to a vaulted ceiling high above. Stalls and booths crowded the floor, merchants hawking their wares to the crowds that thronged the aisles.
The air was thick with
the scent of spices and incense, and the sound of a dozen languages filled the air. Quinn moved forward, her eyes scanning the crowd for the suspect. The market was a maze of twisting alleys and hidden corners, the perfect place for a man to disappear. She caught a glimpse of him up ahead, slipping between two stalls. Quinn hurried after him, dodging around the crowds of shoppers. She
was closing
in on him when a hand grabbed her arm. She spun around, her hand going to her gun, but froze when she saw who it was. "Detective Quinn," Tomás Herrera said, his face grave. "You shouldn't be here." Quinn stared at him, her mind racing. She'd met Herrera before, during the course of another investigation. He'd always struck her as a good man, but what was he doing here? "I'm following a suspect," she said, her voice low. "I can't let him get away." Herrera shook his head. "You don't understand. This place, it's not safe for you. You need to leave, now." Quinn pulled her arm away. "I can't
do that. I'm
close to cracking this case, I can feel it." Herrera sighed. "You're a good cop, Quinn, but you're in over your head here. This market, the people who come here, they're not like you and me. They play by different rules." Quinn hesitated. Herrera was right, she was out of her depth here. But she couldn't
let that stop
her. She had a job to do. "I appreciate the warning," she said. "But I have to do this. I can't let him get away." Herrera nodded, his face grim. "Then let me come with you. I know this place, I can help you
navigate
it." Quinn hesitated, then nodded. She didn't trust Herrera entirely, but she needed all the help she could get. They set off together, pushing through the crowds. Quinn kept her eyes locked on the spot where she'd last seen the suspect, her hand tight on the grip of her gun. They
were making
progress when the suspect
suddenly
appeared in front of them, his eyes wide with fear. He turned to run, but Quinn was faster. She tackled him to the ground, her knee in his back as she cuffed him. "You're under arrest," she said, her voice harsh. "For the murder of Jameson Grey." The suspect struggled, but Quinn held him down. She'd done it. She'd caught her killer. But as she pulled him to his feet, she
couldn't help but feel
a sense of unease
. Herrera had been right. This place, these people, they were part of a world she didn't understand. And she had a
feeling that this
was just the beginning.
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2/17/2026, 1:48:42 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
90.7407%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1080
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
62.9630%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1080
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"dancing"
count
1
1
word
"footsteps"
count
1
2
word
"echoing"
count
1
3
word
"navigate"
count
1
highlights
0
"dancing"
1
"footsteps"
2
"echoing"
3
"navigate"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
2
label
"couldn't help but"
count
1
highlights
0
"a sense of unease"
1
"The air was thick with"
2
"couldn't help but feel"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
87
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
87
filterMatches
0
"think"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
4
totalSentences
95
matches
0
"suspected that the"
1
"do that. I'm"
2
"let that stop"
3
"feeling that this"
60.5530%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
37
mean
29.14
std
10.55
cv
0.362
sampleLengths
0
37
1
37
2
53
3
44
4
32
5
31
6
32
7
37
8
15
9
32
10
39
11
19
12
31
13
26
14
29
15
36
16
38
17
20
18
53
19
30
20
22
21
29
22
12
23
31
24
15
25
19
26
19
27
32
28
25
29
18
30
21
31
18
32
31
33
41
34
14
35
15
36
45
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
87
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
167
matches
0
"was going"
1
"was going"
2
"was closing"
3
"were making"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
964
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
19
adverbRatio
0.01970954356846473
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.004149377593360996
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
95
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
95
mean
11.35
std
5.47
cv
0.482
sampleLengths
0
15
1
22
2
10
3
13
4
14
5
14
6
24
7
15
8
14
9
17
10
3
11
10
12
7
13
13
14
12
15
7
16
13
17
11
18
9
19
15
20
8
21
11
22
14
23
12
24
4
25
11
26
19
27
13
28
14
29
3
30
22
31
9
32
10
33
2
34
17
35
12
36
5
37
13
38
8
39
11
40
18
41
8
42
18
43
10
44
8
45
12
46
18
47
11
48
9
49
15
40.5263%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.2
totalSentences
95
uniqueOpeners
19
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
87.5363%