| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 963 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 963 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "trepidation" | | 1 | "otherworldly" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "fascinating" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "tapestry" | | 12 | "pang" | | 13 | "yearning" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "unreadable" | | 16 | "throb" | | 17 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 18.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 960 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.60% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 803 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 8 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Silas | 5 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Courts | 1 | | Veil | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.566 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like riddles spun from silver thre" | | 1 | "stones that seemed to change color with every step, her boots making no sound on the smooth surface" | | 2 | "beauty that seemed to throb in time with the Heartstone's pulse, and then turned to follow her companions back to the world she had always known—but which now seemed somehow smaller and less vibrant than the wonders that lay hidden just beyond the Veil" | | 3 | "seemed somehow smaller and less vibrant than the wonders that lay hidden just beyond the Veil" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 960 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.65% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 48 | | std | 19.57 | | cv | 0.408 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 81 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 67 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 53 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "They flared at her touch, reacting to the pendant, and a sudden rush of images flooded Rory's mind—a glimpse into the tapestry of worlds beyond her own." | | 1 | "Rory blinked, the visions fading but leaving an imprint on her heart—a yearning for the wonders that lay beyond the Veil." | | 2 | "She took one last look at the clearing, memorizing the wild beauty that seemed to throb in time with the Heartstone's pulse, and then turned to follow her companions back to the world she had always known—but which now seemed somehow smaller and less vibrant than the wonders that lay hidden just beyond the Veil." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 809 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "large, flat-topped boulder" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.032138442521631644 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009888751545117428 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 53 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 53 | | mean | 18.11 | | std | 8.66 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 72.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4716981132075472 | | totalSentences | 53 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 74.07% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Tentatively, she reached out, her" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at Silas, who" | | 1 | "they whispered, more to themselves" | | 2 | "She knelt to cup her" | | 3 | "They came to a clearing" | | 4 | "It thrummed in her bones," | | 5 | "They flared at her touch," | | 6 | "She saw the opulent vineyards" | | 7 | "She turned to find Isolde" | | 8 | "She looked to Silas, whose" | | 9 | "they promised, and Rory was" | | 10 | "She took one last look" |
| | ratio | 0.244 | |
| 37.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "The party of four stood" | | 1 | "Rory, her dark hair tied" | | 2 | "Silas, the stoic warden, ran" | | 3 | "Isolde warned in a voice" | | 4 | "Rory nodded, clutching the Heartstone" | | 5 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 6 | "She glanced at Silas, who" | | 7 | "The moment they passed the" | | 8 | "The grove bloomed with wildflowers," | | 9 | "The air was heavy with" | | 10 | "Nyx, ever the explorer, drifted" | | 11 | "they whispered, more to themselves" | | 12 | "Rory walked along a path" | | 13 | "She knelt to cup her" | | 14 | "Silas commented, his voice low" | | 15 | "Rory straightened, looking where he" | | 16 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 17 | "Isolde, moving with a grace" | | 18 | "They came to a clearing" | | 19 | "Isolde explained, her pale lavender" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 37.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at Silas, who gave a curt nod, his hand resting on the hilt of his Fae-Forged Blade, a weapon rare and coveted, its moonsilver leaf-shaped dagger co…" | | 1 | "Isolde, moving with a grace that belied her three centuries, led them deeper into the grove, her silver hair catching the light in ways that made Rory think of …" | | 2 | "Prince Belphegor lounged on a throne of carved mahogany, his tables laden with delicacies that would put earthly banquets to shame." | | 3 | "Rory stared after her, feeling as though the ground had shifted beneath her feet, revealing a chasm of possibilities and dangers she had never imagined." | | 4 | "She took one last look at the clearing, memorizing the wild beauty that seemed to throb in time with the Heartstone's pulse, and then turned to follow her compa…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, more to themselves than the others" | | 1 | "Silas commented, his voice low and gravelly" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice taking on the cadence of prophecy" | | 3 | "Rory admitted, her voice small in the face of Isolde's pronouncement" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Silas commented (comment)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Rory admitted (admit)" | | 5 | "they promised (promise)" | | 6 | "he advised (advise)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.778 | | effectiveRatio | 0.778 | |