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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMFFWPV78GRRXFR8XM1FF5
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
32.1s
Cost:
$0.000853
Provider:
DeepInfra
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The party of four stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary between the mortal world and the realm beyond. Rory, her dark hair tied back, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist, stared into the clearing with bright blue eyes full of
trepidation
and curiosity. Beside her, Nyx shifted from solid shadow to an incorporeal silhouette, their violet eyes glowing faintly. Silas, the stoic warden, ran a hand through his graying hair, his expression grim. And Isolde,
ethereal
and
otherworldly
, smiled enigmatically at the threshold. "Time moves differently within," Isolde warned in a voice that sounded like riddles spun from silver threads. "An hour may be minutes or days without." Rory nodded, clutching the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. The deep crimson gem pulsed with a faint inner warmth, a compass guiding her through the unknown. She glanced at Silas, who gave a curt nod, his hand resting on the hilt of his Fae-Forged Blade, a weapon rare and coveted, its moonsilver leaf-shaped dagger cold and luminescent. As one, they stepped across the threshold, the air shimmering like a mirage around them. The moment they passed the standing stones, a sense of otherness washed over Rory, a feeling of
being untethered
from the world she knew. The grove bloomed with wildflowers, vibrant and
otherworldly
, their petals shimmering like mother of pearl.
The air was heavy with
the scent of jasmine and honeysuckle, intoxicating and lush. Nyx, ever the explorer, drifted ahead, their shadowy form passing through patches of dappled sunlight. "The time distortion is fascinating," they whispered, more to themselves than the others. "It's like the fabric of reality is woven differently here." Rory walked along a path made of iridescent stones that
seemed to
change color with every step, her boots making no sound on the smooth surface. To her left, a stream meandered
lazily
, its waters clear and sparkling. She knelt to cup her hands, the water icy and sharp, tasting of mint and something ineffable, like the essence of magic itself. "The Veil is thin here," Silas commented, his voice low and gravelly. Rory straightened, looking where he pointed. The air
shimmered
with a faint, undulating distortion, almost invisible but for the keen eye. "It's why this grove exists in a pocket between realms." Isolde, moving with a grace that belied her three centuries, led them deeper into the grove, her silver hair catching the light in ways that made Rory
think
of moonbeams
dancing
on water. They came to a clearing where a large, flat-topped boulder sat like an altar, its surface covered in
intricate
runes that glowed with a soft, inner light. "This is one of the ley lines," Isolde explained, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the glow of the runes. "It's a conduit of magic, running deep beneath Hel, Earth, and the Fae Realms." Rory stepped closer, awestruck by the pulsing energy she could feel emanating from the boulder. It thrummed in her bones, an
echo
of the Heartstone's warmth. Tentatively, she reached out, her fingertips brushing the runes. They flared at her touch, reacting to the pendant, and a sudden rush of images flooded Rory's mind—a glimpse into the
tapestry
of worlds beyond her own. She saw the opulent vineyards of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, where exotic fruits grew in abundance, tended by souls condemned to indulge in endless feasts. Prince Belphegor lounged on a throne of carved mahogany, his tables laden with delicacies that would put earthly banquets to shame. Rory felt a momentary
pang
of hunger before the scene shifted, replaced by the
ethereal
beauty of the Fae Courts, where time flowed like a lazy river, and the denizens danced beneath silver moons. Rory blinked, the visions fading but leaving an imprint on her heart—a
yearning
for the wonders that lay beyond the Veil. She turned to find Isolde watching her, a knowing look in the seer's ageless eyes. "You bear a great responsibility," Isolde said, her voice taking on the cadence of prophecy. "The Veil weakens, and rifts tear at the edges of the worlds. You must mend what is sundered, Rory of Earth, or watch as the realms collide in chaos." Rory felt the
weight
of the pendant against her chest, its warmth now a burden. She looked to Silas, whose expression was
unreadable
, and then to Nyx, whose shadowy form
seemed to
waver with uncertainty. "I don't understand," Rory admitted, her voice small in the face of Isolde's pronouncement. "But you will," Isolde replied with a cryptic smile. "When the winter solstice comes, and the Veil is at its thinnest, the path will be clear. Until then, keep your wits sharp and your friends closer." With that, the seer turned, her silver hair swirling like mist, and walked back along the path. Rory stared after her, feeling as though the ground had shifted beneath her feet, revealing a chasm of possibilities and dangers she had never imagined. Beside her, Nyx solidified into a solid form, their hand reaching for hers. "We'll figure this out together," they promised, and Rory
was grateful
for the reassurance. Silas cleared his throat, his attention on the runes still pulsing with magic. "Best not to linger too long," he advised. "There's no telling what effect this place might have on us if we stay much longer." Rory nodded, feeling the tug of reality just beyond the grove's boundary. She took one last look at the clearing, memorizing the wild beauty that
seemed to
throb
in time with the Heartstone's pulse, and then turned to follow her companions back to the world she had always known—but which now seemed somehow smaller and less vibrant than the wonders that lay hidden just beyond the Veil.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
59.2593%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"they whispered, more to themselves than the others [more]"
1
"Silas commented, his voice low and gravelly [gravelly]"
89.6480%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
966
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"lazily"
count
1
highlights
0
"lazily"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
966
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
2
1
word
"tapestry"
count
1
2
word
"pang"
count
1
3
word
"throb"
count
1
4
word
"shimmered"
count
1
5
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
6
word
"unreadable"
count
1
7
word
"intricate"
count
1
8
word
"trepidation"
count
1
9
word
"yearning"
count
1
10
word
"weight"
count
1
11
word
"dancing"
count
1
12
word
"echo"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"tapestry"
2
"pang"
3
"throb"
4
"shimmered"
5
"otherworldly"
6
"unreadable"
7
"intricate"
8
"trepidation"
9
"yearning"
10
"weight"
11
"dancing"
12
"echo"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was heavy with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
46
matches
0
"was grateful"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
46
filterMatches
0
"think"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
53
matches
(empty)
73.6485%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
20
mean
48
std
19.57
cv
0.408
sampleLengths
0
94
1
25
2
57
3
68
4
38
5
61
6
43
7
60
8
33
9
62
10
81
11
36
12
44
13
35
14
14
15
36
16
42
17
27
18
37
19
67
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
46
matches
0
"being untethered"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
125
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
809
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"large, flat-topped boulder"
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.030902348578491966
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.009888751545117428
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
53
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
53
mean
18.11
std
8.66
cv
0.478
sampleLengths
0
27
1
27
2
16
3
14
4
10
5
17
6
8
7
9
8
17
9
31
10
15
11
24
12
15
13
14
14
15
15
13
16
10
17
26
18
12
19
23
20
12
21
6
22
15
23
10
24
33
25
27
26
19
27
14
28
15
29
11
30
9
31
27
32
26
33
21
34
34
35
21
36
15
37
15
38
29
39
15
40
20
41
14
42
9
43
27
44
17
45
25
46
13
47
14
48
13
49
8
72.9560%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.4716981132075472
totalSentences
53
uniqueOpeners
25
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"Isolde warned in a voice that sounded like riddles spun from silver threads (warn spin)"
1
"they whispered, more to themselves than the others (whisper)"
2
"Silas commented, his voice low and gravelly (comment)"
3
"Isolde explained, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the glow of the runes (explain, reflect)"
4
"Isolde said, her voice taking on the cadence of prophecy (say, take on)"
5
"Rory admitted, her voice small in the face of Isolde's pronouncement (admit)"
6
"they promised, and Rory was grateful for the reassurance (promise, be)"
7
"he advised (advise)"
81.7360%