| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said firmly [firmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 86.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1099 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1099 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "dance" | | 1 | "enigmatic" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "stark" | | 5 | "tapestry" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "tinged" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "echoes" | | 15 | "resonance" | | 16 | "wavering" | | 17 | "peril" | | 18 | "firmly" | | 19 | "resolve" | | 20 | "chill" | | 21 | "dancing" | | 22 | "reminder" | | 23 | "echoed" | | 24 | "anticipation" | | 25 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 81.90% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "g with excitement" | | 2 | "k with anticipation" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1097 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.35% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1005 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Fae | 6 | | Grove | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Seer | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Eva | 5 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Courts | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Realms | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Nyx | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Seer" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Gluttony" | | 5 | "Prince" | | 6 | "Belphegor" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.803 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to dance with the leaves of the towering trees" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to carry the weight of centuries" | | 2 | "resonance that seemed to call to something deep within her" | | 3 | "light that seemed to belong to the twilight of the grove" | | 4 | "rhythm that seemed to beat in tandem with her own heart" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1097 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 41.13% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 49.86 | | std | 14.66 | | cv | 0.294 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 78 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 61 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 35 |
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| 99.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory nodded, her hand closing around the Fae-Forged Blade at her side—a gift from Isolde." | | 1 | "For the fate of worlds hung in the balance, and it was their hands—the delivery girl, the shadow, the seer, and the lawyer-turned-seeker—that would tip the scales." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1015 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.015763546798029555 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009852216748768473 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 81.51% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 18.28 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.354 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 59.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped through the boundary" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice hushed" | | 2 | "they said, their voice a" | | 3 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" | | 4 | "She spoke in riddles, as" | | 5 | "she intoned, her gaze lingering" | | 6 | "It had been a gift" | | 7 | "They paused, their shadowy form" | | 8 | "they said, their voice tinged" | | 9 | "She could feel the echoes" | | 10 | "she warned, her voice carrying" | | 11 | "she said firmly, her resolve" | | 12 | "It was a weapon of" | | 13 | "They made camp near the" | | 14 | "They were a guardian of" | | 15 | "She could feel the pulse" | | 16 | "she said, her voice low" | | 17 | "she echoed, the word a" | | 18 | "It was a place of" | | 19 | "They had to be." |
| | ratio | 0.345 | |
| 37.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "She stepped through the boundary" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove spread before" | | 3 | "Eva, her childhood friend, followed" | | 4 | "she whispered, her voice hushed" | | 5 | "Rory could only nod, her" | | 6 | "The sky above was a" | | 7 | "Nyx, the enigmatic Shade who" | | 8 | "they said, their voice a" | | 9 | "Isolde, the Seer, emerged from" | | 10 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" | | 11 | "She spoke in riddles, as" | | 12 | "she intoned, her gaze lingering" | | 13 | "The Heartstone Pendant, a deep" | | 14 | "It had been a gift" | | 15 | "The group moved in silent" | | 16 | "Rory felt the weight of" | | 17 | "Eva reached out to touch" | | 18 | "The moment her skin made" | | 19 | "Eva gasped, pulling her hand" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory could only nod, her gaze drifting over the wildflowers that bloomed in vibrant hues year-round, a riot of color against the verdant green of the grass." | | 1 | "The sky above was a canvas of twilight, the sun hanging low, casting a warm glow that seemed to dance with the leaves of the towering trees." | | 2 | "Nyx, the enigmatic Shade who had guided them here, moved with a grace that was both eerie and beautiful, their violet eyes flickering with a light that had noth…" | | 3 | "Rory felt the weight of history in this place, a sense of timelessness that made her acutely aware of her own mortality." | | 4 | "Eva gasped, pulling her hand back sharply, her eyes shining with excitement and a touch of fear." | | 5 | "Rory approached the altar, her fingers tracing the carvings that spiraled across its surface." | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer, its glow intensifying, casting a ruby light upon the stone." | | 7 | "The moonsilver dagger was slender and leaf-shaped, always cold to the touch, and it gleamed with a light that seemed to belong to the twilight of the grove." | | 8 | "It was a weapon of the Fae Courts, a rare and coveted artifact that could cut through magical wards and was particularly effective against demons." | | 9 | "For the fate of worlds hung in the balance, and it was their hands—the delivery girl, the shadow, the seer, and the lawyer-turned-seeker—that would tip the scal…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she intoned, her gaze lingering on Rory" | | 1 | "she said, her voice low and earnest," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |