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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMFHFAACP8ATBHBMAZFQCJ
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
21.7s
Cost:
$0.002120
Provider:
Novita
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The air was thick with
the scent of blooming jasmine and a hint of something wilder, something ancient that clung to the back of Rory's throat. She stepped through the boundary marked by the ancient oak standing stones, the world around her shifting subtly, as if a filter had
been lifted
from her eyes. The Fae Grove spread before them, a hidden clearing that
seemed to
defy the
very
laws of nature. Eva, her childhood friend, followed close behind, her hazel eyes wide with wonder. "It's like stepping into a painting," she whispered, her voice hushed as if afraid to disturb the tranquility. Rory could only nod, her gaze drifting over the wildflowers that bloomed in vibrant hues year-round, a riot of color against the verdant green of the grass. The sky above was a canvas of twilight, the sun hanging low, casting a warm glow that
seemed to
dance
with the leaves of the towering trees. Nyx, the
enigmatic
Shade who had guided them here, moved with a grace that was both eerie and beautiful, their violet eyes flickering with a light that had nothing to do with the fading day. "This place is a nexus," they said, their voice a whisper that
seemed to
carry the
weight
of centuries. "A pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. Time moves differently here." Isolde, the Seer, emerged from the shadows of her dwelling, a modest cottage woven from living vines and flowers. Her silver hair cascaded down her back, a
stark
contrast to her pale lavender eyes. She spoke in riddles, as was her way, her words weaving a
tapestry
of possible futures and cryptic advice. "Seek the heart of Dymas, where the crimson stone beats in time with the pulse of the realm," she intoned, her gaze lingering on Rory. The Heartstone Pendant, a deep crimson gemstone set in a silver chain, lay against Rory's skin, its faint warmth a comforting presence. It had been a gift from an unknown benefactor, and now it
seemed to
pulse with a life of its own, guiding her toward a destination unknown. As they ventured deeper into the grove, the air grew heavy with magic. The group moved in silent awe, their
footsteps
muffled by the moss-covered ground. Rory felt the
weight
of history in this place, a sense of timelessness that made her acutely aware of her own mortality. Eva reached out to touch a flower, its petals shimmering with an iridescent sheen. The moment her skin made contact, the flower
seemed to
hum with energy, its color deepening. Eva gasped, pulling her hand back
sharply
, her eyes shining with excitement and a touch of fear. Nyx led them to a clearing where the remains of an ancient stone altar stood, its surface worn smooth by the passage of time. They paused, their shadowy form casting no shadow of its own. "Many rituals have been performed here," they said, their voice
tinged
with a melancholy that spoke of lost epochs and forgotten secrets. Rory approached the altar, her fingers tracing the carvings that spiraled across its surface. She could feel the
echoes
of power, a
resonance
that
seemed to
call to something deep within her. The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer, its glow intensifying, casting a ruby light upon the stone. Isolde watched them with an inscrutable expression, her gaze never
wavering
from Rory. "The path you seek is fraught with peril," she warned, her voice carrying the authority of one who had seen countless futures unfold. "Yet it is your fate to walk it, for the threads of your destiny are woven
tightly
with the fabric of this world and others." Eva stepped closer to Rory, her presence a reassuring anchor. "We're with you," she said firmly, her resolve cutting through the uncertainty that threatened to overwhelm them. Rory nodded, her hand closing around the Fae-Forged Blade at her side—a gift from Isolde. The moonsilver dagger was slender and leaf-shaped, always cold to the touch, and it gleamed with a light that
seemed to
belong to the twilight of the grove. It was a weapon of the Fae Courts, a rare and coveted artifact that could cut through magical wards and was particularly effective against demons. As night fell, the grove transformed. The wildflowers glowed with an inner light, casting an
ethereal
glow upon the surroundings. The air buzzed with the sound of unseen insects, and the rustling of leaves whispered secrets in a language none of them understood. They made camp near the altar, the comforting crackle of a fire providing warmth against the creeping chill of the night. Nyx remained on the periphery, their form flickering like a shadow cast by the
dancing
flames. They were a guardian of sorts, bound to protect Rory on her journey, though the nature of their bond was still shrouded in mystery. Rory sat with her back against the stone altar, the Heartstone Pendant resting against her chest. She could feel the pulse of the gem, a steady rhythm that
seemed to
beat in tandem with her own heart. The
weight
of the Fae-Forged Blade was a constant reminder of the responsibility she bore, the battles she would inevitably face. Eva sat beside her, her eyes reflecting the firelight. "No matter what happens," she said, her voice low and earnest, "we'll face it together." Rory met her gaze, her own resolve strengthening. "Together," she
echoed
, the word a promise, a vow that would carry them through the trials to come. As the night deepened, the grove grew silent, the air thick with
anticipation
. The Veil, that metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms, was thinnest here, and Rory could sense the vastness of the cosmos, the interconnectedness of all things. With the first light of dawn, they would set out for Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, ruled by Prince Belphegor. It was a place of excess and indulgence, where grand feasts and culinary competitions were commonplace. But it was also a place of danger, where the line between pleasure and ruin was perilously thin. For now, though, they rested, drawing strength from the grove and from each other. The Fae Grove was a
sanctuary
, a place of respite before the storm. And as Rory closed her eyes, she
knew that the
journey ahead would test them in ways they could scarcely imagine. But they were ready. They had to be. For the fate of worlds hung in the balance, and it was their hands—the deli
very
girl, the shadow, the seer, and the lawyer-turned-seeker—that would tip the scales.
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2/17/2026, 1:47:39 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
91.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she said firmly, her resolve cutting through the uncertainty that threatened to overwhelm them [firmly]"
72.8997%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
1
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"sharply"
1
"tightly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1107
totalAiIsms
17
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"tapestry"
count
1
2
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
3
word
"enigmatic"
count
1
4
word
"tinged"
count
1
5
word
"resonance"
count
1
6
word
"wavering"
count
1
7
word
"stark"
count
1
8
word
"anticipation"
count
1
9
word
"weight"
count
3
10
word
"dance"
count
1
11
word
"dancing"
count
1
12
word
"footsteps"
count
1
13
word
"echoed"
count
1
14
word
"echoes"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"tapestry"
2
"sanctuary"
3
"enigmatic"
4
"tinged"
5
"resonance"
6
"wavering"
7
"stark"
8
"anticipation"
9
"weight"
10
"dance"
11
"dancing"
12
"footsteps"
13
"echoed"
14
"echoes"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
58
matches
(empty)
92.2039%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
58
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
60
matches
0
"knew that the"
41.1296%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
22
mean
49.86
std
14.66
cv
0.294
sampleLengths
0
72
1
31
2
54
3
66
4
78
5
49
6
48
7
47
8
57
9
47
10
61
11
27
12
68
13
43
14
61
15
58
16
24
17
26
18
43
19
54
20
48
21
35
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
58
matches
0
"been lifted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
152
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1015
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
16
adverbRatio
0.015763546798029555
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.009852216748768473
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
60
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
81.5082%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
60
mean
18.28
std
6.47
cv
0.354
sampleLengths
0
26
1
28
2
18
3
13
4
18
5
27
6
27
7
35
8
19
9
12
10
19
11
15
12
19
13
25
14
22
15
27
16
13
17
13
18
22
19
14
20
16
21
17
22
24
23
11
24
22
25
14
26
18
27
15
28
13
29
23
30
25
31
10
32
17
33
15
34
28
35
25
36
6
37
14
38
23
39
21
40
16
41
24
42
16
43
21
44
21
45
9
46
15
47
8
48
18
49
13
59.4444%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.36666666666666664
totalSentences
60
uniqueOpeners
22
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"she whispered, her voice hushed as if afraid to disturb the tranquility (whisper, hush disturb)"
1
"they said, their voice a whisper that seemed to carry the weight of centuries (say, seem carry)"
2
"she intoned, her gaze lingering on Rory (intoned, linger)"
3
"they said, their voice tinged with a melancholy that spoke of lost epochs and forgotten secrets (say, tinged speak forget)"
4
"she warned, her voice carrying the authority of one who had seen countless futures unfold (warn, carry see unfold)"
5
"she said firmly, her resolve cutting through the uncertainty that threatened to overwhelm them (say firmly, cut threaten overwhelm)"
6
"she echoed, the word a promise, a vow that would carry them through the trials to come (echo, carry come)"
78.7560%