Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMFM0GZ7ZTGTKEH6MHCRC7

Run Details

Duration:
30.1s
Cost:
$0.039774
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora's hand froze on the last deadbolt when she recognized the silhouette through the warped glass. The distinctive outline of that cane, the tall lean frame — her pulse quickened as memories flooded back. She shouldn't open the door. She really shouldn't. But she did. "Lucien." His name came out steadier than she felt. "What are you doing here?" He stood in the narrow hallway, impeccable as always in a charcoal suit that probably cost more than three months of her delivery job wages. The amber eye caught the fluorescent light differently than the black one, giving him an otherworldly gleam that still made her breath catch. "Bonsoir, Aurora." His accent wrapped around her name like silk. "May I come in?" She should say no. The smart thing would be to shut the door and pretend this was all a dream. Instead, she found herself stepping back, allowing him into Eva's cramped flat. Ptolemy immediately twined between Lucien's legs, the traitor. "Eva's not here," Aurora said, watching him take in the controlled chaos of books and papers covering every surface. "She's at a conference in Edinburgh." "I know." He turned to face her, leaning slightly on his cane. "I came to see you." "How did you even know I was staying here?" A slight smile played at the corner of his mouth. "I'm an information broker, chérie. It's what I do." "Don't." The endearment stung like salt in an old wound. "You lost the right to call me that six months ago." His smile faded. In the dim light of Eva's desk lamp, shadows played across his sharp features. "Is that what you think? That I simply walked away?" "Didn't you?" Aurora crossed her arms, hating how defensive she sounded. "You made it pretty clear where I stood when you took that job from the Crimson Court. The same people who—" She broke off, unconsciously rubbing the crescent scar on her left wrist. "Who tried to hurt you." Lucien's voice was soft, dangerous. "Yes. I remember." "Then why did you do it?" He took a step closer. She held her ground, though every nerve ending sparked with awareness. "Because sometimes, ma belle, the best way to protect someone is from the inside." Aurora's mind raced, putting pieces together. "The Court's collapse last month. The exposure of their trafficking ring. That was you?" "Among others." Another step. She could smell his cologne now, something expensive and French that brought back memories of stolen kisses in shadow-filled corners. "I couldn't tell you. If they'd suspected, if they'd seen any connection between us—" "So you pushed me away instead." The hurt was still there, but something else was rising alongside it – understanding, and with it, a dangerous hope. "I thought I was protecting you." His free hand came up, fingers hovering near her cheek without quite touching. "I didn't expect it to take so long. I didn't expect—" He swallowed. "I didn't expect to miss you quite so much." Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. "Six months, Lucien. Six months of thinking you'd chosen them over me. Over us." "Never." The word was fierce, almost a growl. This close, she could see the demon blood in him more clearly – the slight glow in his amber eye, the too-sharp edge to his teeth. "I would burn down half of London before I'd truly choose anyone over you." "Only half?" The quip slipped out automatically, a defense against the intensity of his gaze. His laugh was low, rich. "The other half might be useful someday." She shouldn't forgive him this easily. She shouldn't let him back in without making him work for it. But hadn't they both been punished enough? "Next time," she said, reaching up to cup his face, "tell me the truth. I'm not made of glass, Lucien. I can handle knowing things are complicated." He turned his face into her palm, pressing a kiss there that made her shiver. "Next time, I won't leave at all." When he kissed her properly, it felt like coming home. His cane clattered to the floor as he pulled her closer, and somewhere in the background, Ptolemy knocked over a stack of papers. Aurora couldn't bring herself to care. Six months of missing this, of missing him, crashed over her like a wave. They broke apart only when oxygen became a necessity. Lucien rested his forehead against hers, both of them breathing hard. "Stay," she whispered. It wasn't just an invitation for tonight – it was a question about tomorrow, about all the tomorrows after that. His mismatched eyes met hers, full of promises she knew he'd keep this time. "As long as you'll have me, mon coeur." "That might be a very long time." His smile was slow, sweet, and just a little wicked. "I'm counting on it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said, reaching up to cup his face [up to]"
50.1868% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount803
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"truly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.0934% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount803
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"silk"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"think? That I"
1"took that job"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean24.39
std13
cv0.533
sampleLengths
042
13
214
348
414
540
625
717
89
919
1021
1127
1244
1313
146
1530
1620
1738
1826
1941
2020
2148
2215
2312
2425
2527
2622
2753
2820
2923
3022
317
3214
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"been punished"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs90
matches
0"was rising"
76.1555% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount538
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.06505576208178439
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.022304832713754646
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean11.34
std6.64
cv0.586
sampleLengths
016
118
25
33
43
59
65
725
823
910
104
114
1216
1312
148
1519
166
1712
185
199
2010
219
2210
2311
243
2514
2610
2711
2833
2910
303
316
325
3311
3414
356
3614
374
3820
3914
4026
4119
4213
439
446
4514
468
4726
4814
4915
82.1596% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5352112676056338
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners38
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora said, watching him take in the controlled chaos of books and papers covering every surface (say, watch take)"
1"she said, reaching up to cup his face (say, reach up to)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
82.6952%