Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
865
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.026589595375722544
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.011560693641618497
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
51
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
51
mean
19.27
std
9.97
cv
0.517
sampleLengths
0
34
1
22
2
17
3
21
4
22
5
10
6
24
7
10
8
18
9
36
10
17
11
21
12
22
13
23
14
18
15
31
16
21
17
13
18
4
19
12
20
19
21
34
22
9
23
4
24
13
25
46
26
20
27
20
28
18
29
7
30
23
31
9
32
18
33
13
34
10
35
9
36
15
37
13
38
13
39
7
40
3
41
28
42
11
43
30
44
20
45
26
46
16
47
45
48
19
49
28
84.9673%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.5098039215686274
totalSentences
51
uniqueOpeners
26
15.9091%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"he replied, his French-accented English sending an involuntary shiver down her spine—a fact she hoped her composed exterior concealed (reply, send hope conceal)"
1
"Rory informed him, closing the door and engaging the three deadbolts with practiced ease (inform close engage practice)"
2
"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a lower register as he watched Rory move about the room (say, drop watch move)"
3
"he confessed, his voice smooth as silk (confess)"
4
"he conceded, Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing against a stray lock of her hair, tucking it behind her ear (concede, reach out, brush tuck)"
5
"she began, her voice laced with a mix of regret and resolve (begin, lace)"