Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMFQS6TR3F207H85SE35MX

Run Details

Duration:
58.8s
Cost:
$0.001667
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
A sharp knock at the door startled Rory as she sat hunched over her laptop. She frowned, glancing at the clock. It was nearly midnight. Who could be calling at this hour? As she crossed the cluttered living room, dodging precarious towers of books and papers, a second, more insistent knock sounded. Rory pressed her eye to the peephole and her breath caught in her throat. Standing in the dim hallway, looking just as she remembered him in a tailored suit, was Lucien Moreau. One amber eye and one black gazed back at her expectantly. For a moment, Rory considered not answering. Lucien was an unwelcome reminder of a past she'd tried for months to forget. But something in his mismatched eyes - a touch of weariness, perhaps - made her hesitate. She sighed and undid the locks. The door creaked open. They stared at each other over the threshold. A dozen thoughts flitted through Rory's mind, questions she hardly dared voice. But in the end, all she said was, "Lucien. This is unexpected. What brings you here?" "Bonjour, mon chéri," he replied softly, his rich baritone wrapping around her like silk. "I've missed you." At those words, Rory's restraint snapped. "Missed me? You've got some nerve -" "I know I have a lot to explain –" "You think?" Rory cut him off with a humorless laugh. "It's been six months, Lucien. Six months of radio silence after you swore to me -" "I know," he interjected firmly. Gently but insistently, he pressed a hand to her shoulder, guiding her back into the flat. "May I come in? I promise I'll tell you everything." After a moment's hesitation, Rory stepped aside. Lucien brushed past her, his presence seeming to fill the small space. He scanned the cramped room, taking in the strewn books and papers, before settling himself easily on the edge of her unmade bed. Rory leaned against the closed door, arms crossed. "Well?" "I won't waste time with small talk," Lucien began, hands folded atop his ivory-handled cane. "My silence these past months was necessary - to protect you." A harsh laugh escaped Rory. "Protect me? By disappearing without a trace after everything that happened between us?" "I know how it must have seemed," Lucien said, an edge of desperation creeping into his voice. "But believe me when I say I had no choice. My father - my demon father - learned of our...association. He threatened you. I couldn't allow that." Rory's anger wavered. Lucien's father, a terrifying demon lord from Avaros, was not a threat she took lightly. But still... "Why didn't you just tell me this months ago?" "Because I knew if I spoke to you, even briefly, I wouldn't find the resolve to stay away," Lucien said quietly. "And I had to stay away, until I was certain I could ensure your safety. Every moment we were apart was torture, chéri. You must believe that." Rory said nothing, torn between indignation and a horrible surge of yearning. Lucien looked at her imploringly. "I came tonight because the danger to you has passed. My father's attentions have been diverted elsewhere. And I..." His voice cracked. In three long strides, he closed the distance between them. Rory's heart raced as he tipped her chin up, amber and black eyes searching her face. "I came to ask - to beg - for your forgiveness," Lucien whispered hoarsely. "I swear to you, I'll never allow anything to part us again. If you'll have me." Tears pricked Rory's eyes. She reached for him, tangling her fingers in his lapels, and hauled him down into a searing kiss. Lucien made a rough sound and kissed her back fiercely, his hands cradling her face almost reverently. When they broke apart, Lucien pressed his forehead to hers. "Is that a yes?" he breathed. In answer, Rory simply pulled him closer, guiding him back towards the bed. For now, words could wait - she was done talking for tonight.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he replied softly [softly]"
1"he interjected firmly [firmly]"
2"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
3"Lucien whispered hoarsely [hoarsely]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.364
77.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount657
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
2"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount657
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"firmly"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"wavered"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count1
7
word"ensure"
count1
8
word"yearning"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"silk"
2"silence"
3"firmly"
4"scanned"
5"wavered"
6"resolve"
7"ensure"
8"yearning"
9"raced"
10"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords665
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount435
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Lucien11
Moreau1
Gently1
Avaros1
Tears1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Tears"
places
0"Avaros"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount665
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
89.24% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean28.91
std13.37
cv0.462
sampleLengths
032
163
243
340
417
513
69
726
831
942
109
1126
1218
1344
1429
1548
1617
1719
1829
1930
2039
2116
2225
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs80
matches(empty)
44.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences58
ratio0.034
matches
0"But something in his mismatched eyes - a touch of weariness, perhaps - made her hesitate."
1"For now, words could wait - she was done talking for tonight."
97.39% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount349
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.04297994269340974
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.014326647564469915
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean11.47
std6.05
cv0.528
sampleLengths
015
16
24
37
420
514
618
711
87
914
1016
116
124
138
1412
1516
1614
173
186
197
209
2110
2216
235
2416
2510
267
2712
2823
298
301
3115
3211
335
3413
3517
3627
373
3815
392
409
4121
4227
4312
445
4519
463
4710
4816
4914
93.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5689655172413793
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners33
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Gently but insistently, he pressed"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences43
matches
0"She frowned, glancing at the"
1"It was nearly midnight."
2"She sighed and undid the"
3"They stared at each other"
4"he replied softly, his rich"
5"he interjected firmly"
6"He scanned the cramped room,"
7"His voice cracked."
8"She reached for him, tangling"
ratio0.209
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences43
matches
0"A sharp knock at the"
1"She frowned, glancing at the"
2"It was nearly midnight."
3"Rory pressed her eye to"
4"Lucien was an unwelcome reminder"
5"She sighed and undid the"
6"The door creaked open."
7"They stared at each other"
8"A dozen thoughts flitted through"
9"he replied softly, his rich"
10"Rory cut him off with"
11"he interjected firmly"
12"Lucien brushed past her, his"
13"He scanned the cramped room,"
14"Rory leaned against the closed"
15"Lucien began, hands folded atop"
16"A harsh laugh escaped Rory."
17"Lucien said, an edge of"
18"Rory's anger wavered."
19"Lucien's father, a terrifying demon"
ratio0.674
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien began, hands folded atop his ivory-handled cane"
1"Lucien said, an edge of desperation creeping into his voice"
13.64% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he interjected firmly (interject)"
1"Lucien whispered hoarsely (whisper)"
2"he breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.273
77.1653%