| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he replied softly [softly]" | | 1 | "he interjected firmly [firmly]" | | 2 | "Lucien said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "Lucien whispered hoarsely [hoarsely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.409 | | leniency | 0.818 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |
| 77.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 657 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 657 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "firmly" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "resolve" | | 7 | "ensure" | | 8 | "yearning" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 665 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 435 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 3.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Lucien | 11 | | Moreau | 1 | | Gently | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Tears | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Tears" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 665 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.24% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 28.91 | | std | 13.37 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "But something in his mismatched eyes - a touch of weariness, perhaps - made her hesitate." | | 1 | "For now, words could wait - she was done talking for tonight." |
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| 97.39% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 349 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.04297994269340974 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014326647564469915 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 11.47 | | std | 6.05 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 93.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5689655172413793 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 77.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "Gently but insistently, he pressed" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "She frowned, glancing at the" | | 1 | "It was nearly midnight." | | 2 | "She sighed and undid the" | | 3 | "They stared at each other" | | 4 | "he replied softly, his rich" | | 5 | "he interjected firmly" | | 6 | "He scanned the cramped room," | | 7 | "His voice cracked." | | 8 | "She reached for him, tangling" |
| | ratio | 0.209 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "A sharp knock at the" | | 1 | "She frowned, glancing at the" | | 2 | "It was nearly midnight." | | 3 | "Rory pressed her eye to" | | 4 | "Lucien was an unwelcome reminder" | | 5 | "She sighed and undid the" | | 6 | "The door creaked open." | | 7 | "They stared at each other" | | 8 | "A dozen thoughts flitted through" | | 9 | "he replied softly, his rich" | | 10 | "Rory cut him off with" | | 11 | "he interjected firmly" | | 12 | "Lucien brushed past her, his" | | 13 | "He scanned the cramped room," | | 14 | "Rory leaned against the closed" | | 15 | "Lucien began, hands folded atop" | | 16 | "A harsh laugh escaped Rory." | | 17 | "Lucien said, an edge of" | | 18 | "Rory's anger wavered." | | 19 | "Lucien's father, a terrifying demon" |
| | ratio | 0.674 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 20 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien began, hands folded atop his ivory-handled cane" | | 1 | "Lucien said, an edge of desperation creeping into his voice" |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he interjected firmly (interject)" | | 1 | "Lucien whispered hoarsely (whisper)" | | 2 | "he breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.318 | | leniency | 0.636 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |