"The scar on her wrist—small but vivid, the mark of a childhood accident—twitched as she remembered the way her father had always called it her though she’d never told him the truth about what had happened that day. [always]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
725
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.034482758620689655
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.005517241379310344
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
78
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
78
mean
10.77
std
8.6
cv
0.798
sampleLengths
0
27
1
19
2
41
3
14
4
10
5
5
6
3
7
4
8
22
9
23
10
16
11
31
12
8
13
22
14
9
15
11
16
5
17
30
18
15
19
19
20
10
21
18
22
8
23
4
24
2
25
9
26
9
27
8
28
9
29
4
30
3
31
35
32
2
33
9
34
7
35
19
36
2
37
3
38
5
39
2
40
4
41
8
42
8
43
9
44
7
45
3
46
28
47
5
48
3
49
4
42.3077%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.21794871794871795
totalSentences
78
uniqueOpeners
17
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"The scar on her wrist—small but vivid, the mark of a childhood accident—twitched as she remembered the way her father had always called it her though she’d never told him the truth about what had happened that day. (twitch remember always call does not never tell happen)"
1
"she said, voice tight (say, voice)"
2
"Lucien said, not looking at her (say, does not look)"