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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMG4HJ4K5Z0BBFHT8QZKK2
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Model:
Cohere Command R+ (Aug. 2024)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
51.8s
Cost:
$0.025153
Provider:
Cohere
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora stepped through the ancient oak stones, her heart racing with
anticipation
. The Fae Grove, a place she had only heard tales of, now revealed itself to her. The air felt different here, almost shimmering with an unseen energy, as if she had stepped into a painting where the laws of nature had been bent and reshaped. Wildflowers in hues of lilac and gold dotted the clearing, their fragrance sweet and heady, as if distilled from a thousand blooming gardens. High above, the sky was warm amber, the color of dusk stretching endlessly. Yet there was no sun, no source of light that she could discern, only a gentle luminescence that bathed e
very
thing in a soft glow. "It's like a dream," Aurora whispered, her eyes wide as she took in the
ethereal
beauty around her. At her side, Nyx, the shadowy figure,
seemed to
melt and reform with e
very
step, their whispered voice carrying on the slight breeze. "Dreams and reality entwine within the Fae realm. What you seek may find you in this place, but tread
carefully
, for the Fae are not always benevolent." She glanced at her companion, finding comfort in their
otherworldly
presence. Yet, as she looked closer, she realized Nyx's form appeared more solid than before, as if the mysterious Shadow had found some anchor in this strange realm. Their faintly glowing violet eyes
flickered
, as if catching the light of an unseen moon. "What is this place exactly?" Aurora asked, her voice laced with awe and a hint of
trepidation
. "The Grove is a liminal space, a pocket between worlds," Nyx explained. "Here, time flows differently, and the boundaries between realms become porous. Isolde, with her Fae heritage, can traverse such places with ease." As if in response to Nyx's words, a figure emerged from the trees, her sil
very
hair catching the
ethereal
light. Isolde, the Half-Fae Seer, smiled, her eyes crinkling at the corners. Aurora felt her breath catch at the sight—here was the mythical figure who had become integral to the small group's quest. "Welcome to my grove, Aurora," Isolde said, her voice like chiming bells. "I foresaw your arrival and await your desire." Aurora cleared her throat, feeling
suddenly
awkward under the direct stare of those ancient eyes. "We—I seek a way to close the Veils. To prevent the influx of Helbound creatures and restore balance." Isolde nodded, her expression inscrutable. "The Veils are indeed fraying, and the Wardens struggle to maintain order. But know this, mortal: closing the Veils is not a simple matter." "We understand," Nyx interjected. "But these mortals have shown courage and ingenuity, and we believe they can succeed." Aurora
noticed that Nyx
had addressed Isolde, not her. A twinge of unease stirred in her—was she not worthy of direct acknowledgment? She shook off the feeling, focusing instead on the task at hand. "What do we need to do?" she asked, her voice steady. Isolde's smile widened, though it did not reach her eyes. "You need the Heartstone, a gem of Hel forged in the depths of Dymas. 'Tis key to locking the Veils, a task few have attempted, and none have succeeded." "The Dymasian realm?" Aurora asked, her mind racing. "But how—?" "Hush, child," Isolde said, raising a hand. "I know what you think. But time does not move as you know it here. Step with me, and I shall show you." Aurora followed Isolde into the heart of the Grove, Nyx's shadow merging with the grove's deep shadows. She felt a strange sensation, as if her body were becoming lighter, more
ephemeral
. The air grew warmer, scented with exotic spices and ripe fruits. They stepped into a cavernous space, an open-air courtyard lined with fruit-laden trees and vine-covered pergolas. Helbound souls, human and otherwise, tended lush gardens or cooked at
simmering
cauldrons and open fires. The sound of laughter, conversation, and music filled the air, a
cacophony
of languages and musical styles. "This is Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, as seen through the Grove's lens," Isolde said, her voice carrying over the din. "Here, time moves faster, and souls from Earth can find purpose and pleasure." Aurora caught glimpses of helbound souls from her own realm: a chef renowned for his culinary prowess, a winemaker whose vineyards had once stretched across the French countryside, all now content in their eternal, indulgent tasks. "But this is not where the Heartstone lies," Nyx said, their voice cutting through the lively atmosphere. "We must venture deeper, to the castle where Prince Belphegor resides." A frisson of unease ran down Aurora's spine as they left the bustling courtyard behind, making their way through a maze of manicured gardens and orchards. The path sloped upward, leading to a grand castle silhouetted against the amber sky. The closer they got, the more
a sense of foreboding
settled over her. The gardens gave way to a courtyard paved with obsidian flagstones, where the air felt heavy, almost
oppressive
, as if the
very
stones held a thousand years of secrets. "The Heartstone will be within the castle, guarded closely by the prince and his court," Isolde said, her voice
suddenly
taut. "We must be swift and undetected. My powers are limited here, but my gift may aid your passage." Isolde reached into the folds of her gown and produced a slender dagger, its moonsilver blade faintly luminescent even in the warm amber light. "Take this, Aurora. It can sever the strongest magical wards and protect you from Dymas's darker denizens." Aurora accepted the blade, marveling at its
otherworldly
beauty. "How did you come to have this?" Isolde smiled enigmatically. "It was a gift. One that I now pass to you. Use it wisely, mortal." Without further ado, the group moved toward the castle's grand entrance, the massive doors open to reveal a vast foyer where courtiers mingled and servants scurried to and fro, bearing platters of exotic delicacies and skin-fermented wines. A thrumming music reached Aurora's ears, a primordial beat woven through with
intricate
melodies. Nyx's shadow unfurled before them, a living shield that obscured their passage. Servants and courtiers alike paused, then resumed their tasks as if their presence were an illusion or an e
very
day occurrence. A burst of laughter
echoed
from a grand hall to their left, and Aurora peered through the open doors to see a decadent feast in progress: long tables laden with heaping platters, guests indulging in dishes with gusto, their laughter carefree and unchecked. At the head of the table sat a figure of
oppressive
darkness, his face hidden in shadows. Prince Belphegor. Isolde tugged at Aurora's sleeve, her expression urgent. "This way. The Heartstone is not in the throne room but in the prince's private chambers." As if sensing their presence, the prince's laughter abruptly ceased. A hush fell over the hall as all eyes turned to the open door, their gazes piercing even through Nyx's protective shadow. Aurora felt a sudden pressure, an unseen force pressing against her, threatening to crush her beneath a
weight
of pure, concentrated desire. Nyx whispered urgently in her ear, "Keep moving! The Heartstone is our goal, not the prince's attention." Spurred to action, Aurora ran, Isolde and Nyx at her side, as they hurried through the castle's labyrinthine corridors. Servants and guards alike appeared unaware of their passage, their eyes sliding past as if they were merely phantoms. "We're almost there," Isolde said, her voice tight with strain. "The prince's chambers are guarded by powerful wards, but the dagger will sever them. Quickly now..." Aurora felt the
weight
of responsibility as she tightened her grip on the Fae blade. With a swift motion, she cut through the air, and an unseen force
shimmered
and broke apart, the dagger's blade buzzing with unseen energy. The thick wooden door to the prince's chambers swung open with a creak, revealing a dimly lit room whose walls
were lined
with bookshelves, ancient manuscripts, and arcane artifacts. In the center, upon a
velvet
-draped pedestal, rested a single object: a pendant, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly with an inner warmth. The Heartstone. "It's here," Aurora said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "Now what?" "Take it," Isolde urged. "The Heartstone must be returned to Earth before the solstice." Aurora stepped forward, her hand reaching out to claim the stone. As her fingers closed around the silver chain, a sudden noise startled her, and she whirled around, the dagger raised. Prince Belphegor filled the doorway, his eyes
gleaming
with a malevolent light. "Thieves!" he roared, and the castle shook with the force of his fury. Nyx's shadowy form solidified, ready to fight, while Isolde's body
shimmered
, her
ethereal
form struggling to solidify. Aurora stood, dagger and pendant clutched in her hands, determination warring with fear. "You will never escape with the stone, mortals," Belphegor snarled, his form beginning to shift and contort with dark energy. "I will feast on your souls!" But Aurora and her companions were ready, united in their purpose and armed with
otherworldly
gifts. The battle for the Heartstone had begun.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
74.5098%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"Isolde said, her voice suddenly taut [suddenly]"
1
"Nyx whispered urgently in her ear, [urgently]"
2
"Aurora said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
60.4483%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1517
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"suddenly"
count
2
3
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"quickly"
2
"suddenly"
3
"barely above a whisper"
4
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1517
totalAiIsms
23
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
3
1
word
"ephemeral"
count
1
2
word
"cacophony"
count
1
3
word
"simmering"
count
1
4
word
"flickered"
count
1
5
word
"shimmered"
count
2
6
word
"gleaming"
count
1
7
word
"foreboding"
count
1
8
word
"oppressive"
count
2
9
word
"otherworldly"
count
3
10
word
"velvet"
count
1
11
word
"intricate"
count
1
12
word
"trepidation"
count
1
13
word
"anticipation"
count
1
14
word
"weight"
count
2
15
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"ephemeral"
2
"cacophony"
3
"simmering"
4
"flickered"
5
"shimmered"
6
"gleaming"
7
"foreboding"
8
"oppressive"
9
"otherworldly"
10
"velvet"
11
"intricate"
12
"trepidation"
13
"anticipation"
14
"weight"
15
"echoed"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
highlights
0
"a sense of foreboding"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
75
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
75
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
95
matches
0
"noticed that Nyx"
91.1995%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
47
mean
32.09
std
15.05
cv
0.469
sampleLengths
0
57
1
60
2
18
3
50
4
53
5
17
6
34
7
52
8
20
9
33
10
29
11
18
12
34
13
11
14
39
15
10
16
30
17
42
18
49
19
34
20
36
21
28
22
40
23
42
24
39
25
41
26
16
27
18
28
51
29
32
30
62
31
24
32
54
33
17
34
38
35
26
36
39
37
52
38
2
39
12
40
14
41
31
42
25
43
30
44
26
45
16
46
7
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
75
matches
0
"were lined"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
180
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1118
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"foreboding settled over her."
adverbCount
29
adverbRatio
0.0259391771019678
lyAdverbCount
18
lyAdverbRatio
0.016100178890876567
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
95
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
95
mean
15.87
std
7.83
cv
0.493
sampleLengths
0
12
1
16
2
29
3
23
4
13
5
24
6
18
7
23
8
27
9
11
10
27
11
15
12
17
13
12
14
22
15
20
16
11
17
21
18
12
19
8
20
15
21
18
22
5
23
24
24
4
25
14
26
9
27
13
28
12
29
11
30
10
31
29
32
8
33
2
34
7
35
23
36
17
37
14
38
11
39
16
40
16
41
17
42
21
43
13
44
36
45
17
46
11
47
26
48
14
49
13
57.1930%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.3684210526315789
totalSentences
95
uniqueOpeners
35
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
17
fancyCount
12
fancyTags
0
"Aurora whispered, her eyes wide as she took in the ethereal beauty around her (whisper, take)"
1
"Nyx explained (explain)"
2
"Isolde said, her voice like chiming bells (say, like chiming)"
3
"Nyx interjected (interject)"
4
"Isolde said, raising a hand (say, raise)"
5
"Isolde said, her voice carrying over the din (say, carry)"
6
"Nyx said, their voice cutting through the lively atmosphere (say, cut)"
7
"Isolde said, her voice suddenly taut (say, suddenly taut)"
8
"Nyx whispered urgently in her ear, (whisper urgently)"
9
"Isolde urged (urge)"
10
"roared (roar)"
11
"Belphegor snarled, his form beginning to shift and contort with dark energy (snarl, shift)"
81.0206%