| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.526 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 69.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 813 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 813 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "dancing" | | 6 | "structure" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "enigmatic" | | 9 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 823 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 618 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Nyx | 4 | | Aurora | 8 | | Isolde | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Arctic | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | London | 1 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Wildflowers" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.853 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "music that seemed to emanate from the earth itself" | | 1 | "reds that seemed to move when viewed directly, whites that hurt her eyes" | | 2 | "looked like mother-of-pearl that shifted" | | 3 | "looked like wind chimes made from crystal" | | 4 | "creature that seemed to be made of twigs and dewdrops, there and gone before she could focus on it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 823 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.74% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | |
| 86.09% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 41.15 | | std | 18.57 | | cv | 0.451 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 40 |
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| 86.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "been grown" | | 1 | "being stepped" |
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| 18.18% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "was reacting" | | 1 | "was affecting" | | 2 | "was warning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 47 | | ratio | 0.17 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment she passed between the standing stones, the air changed – became thick with possibility, tasting of honey and starlight on her tongue." | | 1 | "The normal sounds of Richmond Park – joggers, dogs, distant traffic – faded to nothing, replaced by music that seemed to emanate from the earth itself." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion – delicate blooms that shouldn't exist together, shouldn't bloom in the same season or even on the same continent." | | 3 | "The colors were subtly wrong – blues too deep, reds that seemed to move when viewed directly, whites that hurt her eyes." | | 4 | "Aurora found herself grateful for the Fae-forged blade at her hip – its familiar cold presence anchored her in reality as the Grove tried to sweep her mind away in wonder." | | 5 | "Something skittered in Aurora's peripheral vision – a creature that seemed to be made of twigs and dewdrops, there and gone before she could focus on it." | | 6 | "Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx, or tried to – the Shade's violet eyes had multiplied, a dozen pairs blinking in their smoky form before settling back to two." | | 7 | "The Grove thrummed with ancient power, and somewhere in the distance, a bell began to toll – though whether it was warning or welcome, she couldn't tell." |
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| 95.10% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 614 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.04560260586319218 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011400651465798045 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 47 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 47 | | mean | 17.51 | | std | 8.08 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 38 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 27 |
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| 65.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.46808510638297873 | | totalSentences | 47 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of London's typical cloud" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice carrying on" | | 1 | "she breathed, turning slowly to" | | 2 | "she asked Isolde" | | 3 | "She glided forward, and aurora" | | 4 | "she said carefully, remembering Isolde's" | | 5 | "They approached the living architecture," |
| | ratio | 0.162 | |
| 0.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before" | | 1 | "Aurora's fingers brushed the rough" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted between the stones" | | 5 | "they whispered, voice carrying on" | | 6 | "Aurora followed Isolde's graceful steps," | | 7 | "The moment she passed between" | | 8 | "The normal sounds of Richmond" | | 9 | "she breathed, turning slowly to" | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 11 | "The colors were subtly wrong" | | 12 | "Isolde explained, her pale lavender" | | 13 | "A path wound through the" | | 14 | "Aurora found herself grateful for" | | 15 | "Nyx solidified slightly as they" | | 16 | "The path led them to" | | 17 | "The air hummed with energy" | | 18 | "Aurora dragged her gaze away" | | 19 | "A dwelling of sorts had" |
| | ratio | 0.919 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion – delicate blooms that shouldn't exist together, shouldn't bloom in the same season or even on the same …" | | 1 | "A path wound through the riot of flowers, paved with what looked like mother-of-pearl that shifted colors with each step." | | 2 | "The air hummed with energy that made her skin prickle and the small crescent scar on her wrist itch." | | 3 | "A dwelling of sorts had been grown rather than built from living trees, their branches weaving together to form walls and rooms open to the air." | | 4 | "Something skittered in Aurora's peripheral vision – a creature that seemed to be made of twigs and dewdrops, there and gone before she could focus on it." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair catching the last rays of mundane sunlight" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice carrying on a nonexistent breeze" | | 2 | "Nyx observed, their shadowy form rippling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 5 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.421 | | leniency | 0.842 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.632 | |