| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 890 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 890 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "racing" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "start to" | | 1 | "happened to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 898 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 760 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 12 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | London | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Morris | 5 | | Herrera | 4 | | Tube | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Spanish | 1 | | Detective | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Herrera" | | 3 | "Saint" | | 4 | "Christopher" | | 5 | "Spanish" | | 6 | "Detective" |
| | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "High" | | 4 | "Street" |
| | globalScore | 0.711 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like market stalls" | | 1 | "quite match the shapes casting them" | | 2 | "looked like a small disc of polished bone" | | 3 | "looked like an ordinary maintenance door" | | 4 | "something like sympathy in his warm brown ey" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 898 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.67% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 37.42 | | std | 16.83 | | cv | 0.45 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 50 |
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| 88.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "been decommissioned" | | 1 | "been left" | | 2 | "been transformed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain pelted her face, but she kept her quarry in sight - a man in a dark jacket who'd bolted from The Raven's Nest the moment she'd shown her warrant card." | | 1 | "Her watch clicked against the weapon's metal - a sound that reminded her of Morris, of that last chase three years ago." | | 2 | "The tracks didn't match the chaos of their chase - these were orderly, purposeful." | | 3 | "But they were empty now, leaving only hints of their purpose - strange stains on tablecloths, scattered dried herbs, empty glass vials that caught the light." | | 4 | "A sound echoed from further down the tunnel - footsteps, and something else." | | 5 | "Quinn checked her watch - an old habit that helped steady her nerves." | | 6 | "At the edge of her torch beam, she caught movement - shadows that didn't quite match the shapes casting them." | | 7 | "Instead, he held something in his outstretched hand - what looked like a small disc of polished bone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 637 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.026687598116169546 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012558869701726845 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 12.83 | | std | 7.57 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 75.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the steady drip of" | | 1 | "Sometimes you had to follow" | | 2 | "Instead, he held something in" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "He was quick, but Quinn" | | 1 | "Her watch clicked against the" | | 2 | "She pushed the memory aside." | | 3 | "He recovered quickly, ducking through" | | 4 | "She slowed her pursuit, stopping" | | 5 | "Her voice echoed in the" | | 6 | "She descended the emergency stairs," | | 7 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "He wasn't running anymore." | | 9 | "he called, his Spanish accent" | | 10 | "He laughed, but there was" | | 11 | "he gestured to what looked" | | 12 | "She'd dismissed it as criminal" | | 13 | "She thought of Morris." | | 14 | "She looked up to find" | | 15 | "She followed him through the" |
| | ratio | 0.262 | |
| 91.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Quinn's boots splashed through" | | 1 | "The rain pelted her face," | | 2 | "He was quick, but Quinn" | | 3 | "The suspect darted down an" | | 4 | "Quinn followed, her hand brushing" | | 5 | "Her watch clicked against the" | | 6 | "She pushed the memory aside." | | 7 | "The man ahead stumbled on" | | 8 | "The unlicensed medic she'd been" | | 9 | "He recovered quickly, ducking through" | | 10 | "She slowed her pursuit, stopping" | | 11 | "Water dripped from her close-cropped" | | 12 | "The station had been decommissioned" | | 13 | "Whispers that reminded her too" | | 14 | "Her voice echoed in the" | | 15 | "Quinn pulled out her torch," | | 16 | "The air carried a metallic" | | 17 | "She descended the emergency stairs," | | 18 | "The tracks didn't match the" | | 19 | "Quinn followed the trail, torch" |
| | ratio | 0.738 | |
| 81.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Even if that truth changed" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 43.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain pelted her face, but she kept her quarry in sight - a man in a dark jacket who'd bolted from The Raven's Nest the moment she'd shown her warrant card." | | 1 | "Her watch clicked against the weapon's metal - a sound that reminded her of Morris, of that last chase three years ago." | | 2 | "But they were empty now, leaving only hints of their purpose - strange stains on tablecloths, scattered dried herbs, empty glass vials that caught the light." | | 3 | "Quinn checked her watch - an old habit that helped steady her nerves." | | 4 | "At the edge of her torch beam, she caught movement - shadows that didn't quite match the shapes casting them." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn kept, her other hand near her weapon" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |