Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGCJEP4V2FPN0RPNJSQVF

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Duration:
36.9s
Cost:
$0.017393
Provider:
Cohere

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The cold, brisk evening air rushed in as Aurora Carter swung open the door to Eva’s flat. She frowned at the tall figure standing on the threshold, framed by the warm glow of the hallway lights. Her heart did an odd little stutter, and she gripped the door handle tighter, a silent plea for composure. He was the last person she expected to see. "You," she said, her voice laced with surprise and an edge of something sharper. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stepped inside, his stride purposeful. He wore his usual tailored charcoal suit, a stylish contrast to the frumpy academics and curious East Londoners that typically frequented the area. His platinum blond hair, slicked back with care, gleamed under the yellow light of the hallway. As he met her gaze, the heterochromia of his eyes—one amber, the other black as pitch—was a striking reminder of his half-demon heritage. "Rory, how delightful to see you," Lucien drawled, his accent a smooth blend of cultured French and something more ancient and unplaceable. His eyes drifted past her, taking in the cramped, book-laden living room. "I trust I find you well?" Aurora hesitated, her fingers tightening around the door, ready to shut him out if necessary. The last time they'd been in the same room, harsh words and broken promises had hung heavy between them. Now, in her safe haven, she wasn't sure if she wanted to let him in, either literally or figuratively. "It's a bit late for surprise visits," she finally replied, her voice carefully modulated. "You could've called." A slight smile curled Lucien's lips, revealing nothing. He leaned casually against the doorframe, the very picture of urban sophistication. "I prefer the element of surprise, as do you, I suspect. Besides, phones can be traced, and discretion is in short supply these days." He paused, his eyes darting to the small scar on her wrist, a faint reminder of her own complicated past. "I was in the neighborhood and thought I'd save you the trip to my establishment." Aurora bit back a retort, reminding herself that getting Lucien's help was the reason she was allowing him into her sanctuary. She stepped aside, making room for him to enter, and Ptolemy, the resident tabby cat, wound around Lucien's legs, meowing in greeting. "Come in, then," Aurora said, closing the door behind him. She crossed to the small kitchenette, giving herself a moment to collect her thoughts as Lucien made himself at home, strolling the periphery of the living room as if he owned the place. She heard him pause by the bookshelves, his fingers grazing the spines, absorbing the knowledge that filled every nook and cranny of the flat. "It has been a while," he remarked, turning to look at her, his eyes flashing in the dim light. "Eva's away on one of her trips, I presume?" Slinging a tea towel over her shoulder, Aurora nodded. "I wouldn't know. We've not talked much since... you know." Lucien hummed in understanding, his eyes flicking toward the balcony window, a tacit acknowledgement of the rift between them. "I assume you’re also aware the truce between the factions is all but broken after that debacle at the Exchange?" Aurora remained silent. Of course, she'd known that her delicate dance between worlds was precarious, but she'd hoped for more time before things came to a head. Reaching for the kettle, she said, "Tea first." She watched as Lucien made his way to the small dining table, his ivory-handled cane clicking against the worn floorboards. The cane, a necessary concealment for a nasty blade, was a formidable weapon, and Aurora had seen him wield it with skill. Yet, it was his words that carried the true weight of danger. "So, you're here to ask for my help again," she said, her tone belying the concern that coiled in her stomach. Lucien gave a silent laugh, his eyes finding hers. "My dear, I thought you, of all people, understood my motivations. I am a merchant of information, and quite adept at acquiring it from even the most obstinate sources." He leaned forward, his voice lowering. "But I'm aware that things ended abruptly between us last time, and for that, I owe you some measure of peace." Placing the mugs of tea on the table, Aurora sat down across from him. His words were true, but she still questioned his arrival at her door. She knew enough of Lucien's history—the whispers of his life in Marseille and the brutal efficiency of his rise in the London underworld—to realize that he owed peace to very few people. "Look, I appreciate the consideration," she began, choosing her words with care, "but I can handle things on my own. I've been managing just fine since..." Lucien waved her off with a careless gesture. "I'm afraid you're mistaken, although that tenacity of yours is certainly commendable." His eyes narrowed slightly, taking on a sharp intensity that made Aurora shift in her seat. "The key players in this game are most displeased with your interference. They want you out of the picture, permanently. And they know you and Eva are close." A chill raced down Aurora's spine, and she wrapped her fingers around her mug, her knuckles white. "Are you saying I’m in danger?" "Not if I can help it." His gaze softened, and he leaned back in his chair, momentarily dropping the world-weary facade. "I've taken a certain interest in you, Aurora. Despite my initial impressions, you've proven rather... resourceful." Aurora felt her cheeks flush at the compliment, an odd mix of irritation and warmth coursing through her. She cleared her throat, trying to refocus on the matter at hand. "I'm not exactly sure what you expect of me." "Nothing that you're not already doing," Lucien replied with a small smile. "I merely wish to ensure your safety and keep an eye on any further developments. The situation has become... personal for me." She fixed him with a steady gaze, searching for truth in his enigmatic eyes. "Why?" Lucien's smile faded, replaced by a serious expression that held a world of unspoken secrets. He stood, smoothing the front of his suit jacket. "Because I find the thought of you in harm's way... disagreeable." The very air between them seemed to crackle with unspoken desires, old hurts, and new revelations. Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs, an unsettling mix of fear and anticipation. Finally, she spoke. "Stay, then. For now." She took a deliberate sip of tea, as if grounding herself in the familiar comforts of the mundane. Lucien inclined his head, his expression unreadable. "Your hospitality is greatly appreciated. And it seems we have much to discuss." As he moved to get more tea, Aurora rose to join him, her mind whirling with questions. The past and its complexities were knocking on her door, and the present demanded her attention. She only hoped the future wasn’t as complicated as it seemed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.2593% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien drawled, his accent a smooth blend of cultured French and something more ancient and unplaceable [more]"
1"she finally replied, her voice carefully modulated [finally carefully]"
57.1551% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.8792% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"enigmatic"
count1
2
word"facade"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"anticipation"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"enigmatic"
2"facade"
3"unspoken"
4"unreadable"
5"anticipation"
6"weight"
7"dance"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"known that her"
1"realize that he"
82.6144% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean39.97
std17.55
cv0.439
sampleLengths
064
114
271
340
453
517
620
759
843
967
1028
1119
1239
1335
1454
1521
1665
1759
1826
1964
2023
2137
2239
2334
2415
2535
2654
2720
2844
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was allowing"
1"were knocking"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount844
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.024881516587677725
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011848341232227487
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean16.1
std7.88
cv0.49
sampleLengths
017
119
219
39
414
59
623
716
823
922
1012
116
1215
1319
1419
1514
163
178
1812
1944
2015
2121
2222
2310
2433
2524
2619
279
289
2910
3019
3120
323
3324
348
3520
3622
3712
3821
399
4035
4121
4214
4313
4432
4526
468
4728
4828
4917
73.6111% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4583333333333333
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners33
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she said, her voice laced with surprise and an edge of something sharper (say, lace)"
1"Lucien drawled, his accent a smooth blend of cultured French and something more ancient and unplaceable (drawl, culture)"
2"she finally replied, her voice carefully modulated (finally reply, carefully modulate)"
3"Aurora said, closing the door behind him (say, close)"
4"he remarked, turning to look at her, his eyes flashing in the dim light (remark, turn look flash)"
5"Reaching for the kettle, she said, (reach say,)"
6"she said, her tone belying the concern that coiled in her stomach (say, bely coil)"
7"she began, choosing her words with care (begin, choose)"
82.0894%