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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGCJEP4V2FPN0RPNJSQVF
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Model:
Cohere Command R+ (Aug. 2024)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
36.9s
Cost:
$0.017393
Provider:
Cohere
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The cold, brisk evening air rushed in as Aurora Carter swung open the door to Eva’s flat. She frowned at the tall figure standing on the threshold, framed by the warm glow of the hallway lights. Her heart did an odd little stutter, and she gripped the door handle tighter, a silent plea for composure. He was the last person she expected to see. "You," she said, her voice laced with surprise and an edge of something sharper. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stepped inside, his stride purposeful. He wore his usual tailored charcoal suit, a stylish contrast to the frumpy academics and curious East Londoners that typically frequented the area. His platinum blond hair, slicked back with care, gleamed under the yellow light of the hallway. As he met her gaze, the heterochromia of his eyes—one amber, the other black as pitch—was a striking reminder of his half-demon heritage. "Rory, how delightful to see you," Lucien drawled, his accent a smooth blend of cultured French and something more ancient and unplaceable. His eyes drifted past her, taking in the cramped, book-laden living room. "I trust I find you well?" Aurora hesitated, her fingers tightening around the door, ready to shut him out if necessary. The last time they'd been in the same room, harsh words and broken promises had hung heavy between them. Now, in her safe haven, she wasn't sure if she wanted to let him in, either literally or figuratively. "It's a bit late for surprise visits," she finally replied, her voice
carefully
modulated. "You could've called." A slight smile curled Lucien's lips, revealing nothing. He leaned casually against the doorframe, the
very
picture of urban sophistication. "I prefer the element of surprise, as do you, I suspect. Besides, phones can be traced, and discretion is in short supply these days." He paused, his eyes darting to the small scar on her wrist, a faint reminder of her own complicated past. "I was in the neighborhood and thought I'd save you the trip to my establishment." Aurora bit back a retort, reminding herself that getting Lucien's help was the reason she
was allowing
him into her
sanctuary
. She stepped aside, making room for him to enter, and Ptolemy, the resident tabby cat, wound around Lucien's legs, meowing in greeting. "Come in, then," Aurora said, closing the door behind him. She crossed to the small kitchenette, giving herself a moment to collect her thoughts as Lucien made himself at home, strolling the periphery of the living room as if he owned the place. She heard him pause by the bookshelves, his fingers grazing the spines, absorbing the knowledge that filled e
very
nook and cranny of the flat. "It has been a while," he remarked, turning to look at her, his eyes flashing in the dim light. "Eva's away on one of her trips, I presume?" Slinging a tea towel over her shoulder, Aurora nodded. "I wouldn't know. We've not talked much since... you know." Lucien hummed in understanding, his eyes flicking toward the balcony window, a tacit acknowledgement of the rift between them. "I assume you’re also aware the truce between the factions is all but broken after that debacle at the Exchange?" Aurora remained silent. Of course, she'd
known that her
delicate
dance
between worlds was precarious, but she'd hoped for more time before things came to a head. Reaching for the kettle, she said, "Tea first." She watched as Lucien made his way to the small dining table, his ivory-handled cane clicking against the worn floorboards. The cane, a necessary concealment for a nasty blade, was a formidable weapon, and Aurora had seen him wield it with skill. Yet, it was his words that carried the true
weight
of danger. "So, you're here to ask for my help again," she said, her tone belying the concern that coiled in her stomach. Lucien gave a silent laugh, his eyes finding hers. "My dear, I thought you, of all people, understood my motivations. I am a merchant of information, and quite adept at acquiring it from even the most obstinate sources." He leaned forward, his voice lowering. "But I'm aware that things ended abruptly between us last time, and for that, I owe you some measure of peace." Placing the mugs of tea on the table, Aurora sat down across from him. His words were true, but she still questioned his arrival at her door. She knew enough of Lucien's history—the whispers of his life in Marseille and the brutal efficiency of his rise in the London underworld—to
realize that he
owed peace to
very
few people. "Look, I appreciate the consideration," she began, choosing her words with care, "but I can handle things on my own. I've been managing just fine since..." Lucien waved her off with a careless gesture. "I'm afraid you're mistaken, although that tenacity of yours is certainly commendable." His
eyes narrowed
slightly
, taking on a sharp intensity that made Aurora shift in her seat. "The key players in this game are most displeased with your interference. They want you out of the picture, permanently. And they know you and Eva are close." A chill raced down Aurora's spine, and she wrapped her fingers around her mug, her knuckles white. "Are you saying I’m in danger?" "Not if I can help it." His gaze softened, and he leaned back in his chair, momentarily dropping the world-weary
facade
. "I've taken a certain interest in you, Aurora. Despite my initial impressions, you've proven rather... resourceful." Aurora felt her cheeks flush at the compliment, an odd mix of irritation and warmth coursing through her. She cleared her throat, trying to refocus on the matter at hand. "I'm not exactly sure what you expect of me." "Nothing that you're not already doing," Lucien replied with a small smile. "I merely wish to ensure your safety and keep an eye on any further developments. The situation has become... personal for me." She fixed him with a steady gaze, searching for truth in his
enigmatic
eyes. "Why?" Lucien's smile faded, replaced by a serious expression that held a world of
unspoken
secrets. He stood, smoothing the front of his suit jacket. "Because I find the thought of you in harm's way... disagreeable." The
very
air between them
seemed to
crackle with
unspoken
desires, old hurts, and new revelations. Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs, an unsettling mix of fear and
anticipation
. Finally, she spoke. "Stay, then. For now." She took a deliberate sip of tea, as if grounding herself in the familiar comforts of the mundane. Lucien inclined his head, his expression
unreadable
. "Your hospitality is greatly appreciated. And it seems we have much to discuss." As he moved to get more tea, Aurora rose to join him, her mind whirling with questions. The past and its complexities
were knocking
on her door, and the present demanded her attention. She only hoped the future wasn’t as complicated as it seemed.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
59.2593%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Lucien drawled, his accent a smooth blend of cultured French and something more ancient and unplaceable [more]"
1
"she finally replied, her voice carefully modulated [finally carefully]"
57.1551%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
3
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"slightly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
22.8792%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1167
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
1
word
"enigmatic"
count
1
2
word
"facade"
count
1
3
word
"unspoken"
count
2
4
word
"unreadable"
count
1
5
word
"anticipation"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
1
7
word
"dance"
count
1
highlights
0
"sanctuary"
1
"enigmatic"
2
"facade"
3
"unspoken"
4
"unreadable"
5
"anticipation"
6
"weight"
7
"dance"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
57
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
57
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"known that her"
1
"realize that he"
82.6144%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
39.97
std
17.55
cv
0.439
sampleLengths
0
64
1
14
2
71
3
40
4
53
5
17
6
20
7
59
8
43
9
67
10
28
11
19
12
39
13
35
14
54
15
21
16
65
17
59
18
26
19
64
20
23
21
37
22
39
23
34
24
15
25
35
26
54
27
20
28
44
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
57
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
141
matches
0
"was allowing"
1
"were knocking"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
844
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
21
adverbRatio
0.024881516587677725
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.011848341232227487
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
72
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
72
mean
16.1
std
7.88
cv
0.49
sampleLengths
0
17
1
19
2
19
3
9
4
14
5
9
6
23
7
16
8
23
9
22
10
12
11
6
12
15
13
19
14
19
15
14
16
3
17
8
18
12
19
44
20
15
21
21
22
22
23
10
24
33
25
24
26
19
27
9
28
9
29
10
30
19
31
20
32
3
33
24
34
8
35
20
36
22
37
12
38
21
39
9
40
35
41
21
42
14
43
13
44
32
45
26
46
8
47
28
48
28
49
17
73.6111%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.4583333333333333
totalSentences
72
uniqueOpeners
33
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"she said, her voice laced with surprise and an edge of something sharper (say, lace)"
1
"Lucien drawled, his accent a smooth blend of cultured French and something more ancient and unplaceable (drawl, culture)"
2
"she finally replied, her voice carefully modulated (finally reply, carefully modulate)"
3
"Aurora said, closing the door behind him (say, close)"
4
"he remarked, turning to look at her, his eyes flashing in the dim light (remark, turn look flash)"
5
"Reaching for the kettle, she said, (reach say,)"
6
"she said, her tone belying the concern that coiled in her stomach (say, bely coil)"
7
"she began, choosing her words with care (begin, choose)"
82.0894%