Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGCT4PMQMC0AK4QQ10FHE

Run Details

Duration:
38.0s
Cost:
$0.019953
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones, their bark weathered by centuries, marked the threshold of a world apart. Aurora, her straight black hair tumbling over her shoulders, stepped cautiously past the stones, her heart racing with anticipation. The air grew thick, as if she were pushing through a sheer curtain, and then she was through, her breath catching at the wonder of it. Nyx, the shadowy being floating beside her, seemed to melt and reform as they crossed the boundary, their form momentarily wavering. Their eyes, swirling violet orbs, widened at the new realm they had entered. The Fae Grove before them was a riot of green and golden light, a quiet, enchanted place where time itself seemed unsure of its pace. Silvery mists drifted along the ground like lazy rivers, and the songs of unseen birds filled the air. Massive trees, their branches heavy with vines, created an intricate canopy, dappling the grove in shifting patterns of light and shadow. Aurora breathed in the air, sweet with the scent of wildflowers she could spot blooming in vibrant patches throughout the glade, each turn revealing a new shade. "This place is..." She struggled to find a word for the beauty and strangeness of it. "Enchanting." Nyx whispered, a voice like the rustle of leaves, "It is a liminal space, betwixt Earth and the Fae Realms. A place of power." As they ventured further, the mist swirled around them, caressing their skin with a chill that hinted at the strangeness of the realm. Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against the gossamer strands, and felt a tingle, as if the very air were alive with energy. "Look," she whispered, pointing to a nearby oak. The tree's trunk was wide enough to take four adults linking hands to encircle it, and its bark was covered in a mesmerizing tapestry of carvings—spirals, half-seen faces, and intricate, interlacing knots. Her fingertips traced the intricate designs, imagining the touch of a carver's hand, perhaps thousands of years ago. Nyx shifted their form, solidifying into a more humanlike shape to lean close, their eyes glowing brightly as they studied the ancient artwork. "Runes of protection and binding. Old magic, very old." Aurora's eyes widened as she realized the true age of the grove. "This place has been here for millennia. But how is it untouched by time?" "Time is fluid in such places," Nyx replied. "An hour here might be a day in the mortal realm, or a mere moment. The Fae play with such boundaries." A faint rustle caught Aurora's attention, and she turned to see a fox, its fur a vibrant shade of red she'd never seen before, watching them from beneath a bush of berries. It was so vividly colored it seemed to glow in the dappled light. Aurora extended her hand, her palm flat, the fox's curious gaze drawing her toward it. A cautious step closer, a patient breath, then another, the fox mirroring her movement as if they danced together. In that moment, she felt an unspoken connection, as if the very essence of the grove communicated through the creature. As she crouched, the fox darted forward, pausing just out of reach, its bright eyes fixed on her own. Aurora wondered if Isolde had sent this fox as a guide, or if it was an independent creature, curious about these strange interlopers. She held its gaze, marveling at the unique hue of its eyes—a pale, misty grey like the haziest morning. Gradually, the fox relaxed, taking a few steps forward to sniff at her outstretched hand. Its breath was warm and sweet, carrying the scent of the grove's lush undergrowth. "Hello, little one," she whispered, her voice carrying a tone of wonder that echoed her thoughts. The fox tilted its head, a gesture of inquisitive trust. She smiled, taking the opportunity to gently scratch behind its ears, causing the fox to close its eyes and nudge closer. A shiver of premonition rippled down Aurora's spine—a sense of stepping into the story told by the golden runes that danced across her skin in the heart of Hel, whispering ancient secrets. The air around them seemed to shimmer, a momentary distortion that caught at her eye. For an instant, she thought she saw the fox and the trees through a curtain of swirling colors—a glimpse of the grove as seen from another realm, perhaps, where the vibrant hues of the mortal world were muted, and otherworldly tones dominated. She caught her breath, the fox startled by her sudden movement, darting away with a final inquisitive glance. "I think..." she began, her voice a hushed murmur as she took in the wonder of her surroundings. "I think we've only just begun to understand the mysteries of this place." They moved on, the mist guiding their path, and soon they reached a bubbling brook, its waters clear and so full of life that Aurora could see tiny fish darting among the water weeds. She knelt down and cupped her hands, drinking deeply, the water tasting of rain and earth and something else she couldn't quite place. This water was alive, invigorating and strange. "Do not linger long on things from the Fae realm," Nyx warned. "Their essence can be entrancing, drawing you in." Aurora rose, her eyes wide with excitement and a hint of fear. "I feel like I'm seeing the world with new eyes. Everything is so vivid, so alive." The path widened and they stepped into a clearing where the sunlight, filtering through the canopy in golden beams, illuminated a ring of mushrooms with caps the color of unearthly jade. Nyx's form wavered, hinting at their discomfort in such a vibrant, life-giving place. Aurora, however, felt a pull toward the mushrooms, a sense of familiarity she couldn't explain. Reaching down, she touched one of the jade caps, her fingertips warming against its cool, smooth surface. It was as if she had crossed a threshold where her senses were heightened, making her aware of the intricate tapestries of life and magic in every part of this grove. "Life and decay, hand in hand," Nyx whispered, their voice full of reverence and unease. "The cycle is more pronounced here." Aurora nodded, her mind's eye filled with visions of the golden runes, the symbol of the green spiral dancing within her as it had in the caverns of Hel. She traced her thumb over the Heartstone pendant at her throat, the gemstone warming under her touch, and whispered, "The cycle is all around us, holding everything in balance." The grove seemed to accept these words, as if they held a profound meaning it had been awaiting since time immemorial. A gentle breeze stirred the trees, and a shower of shimmering petals danced in the sunlight like a thousand fairies celebrating a sacred truth. Aurora took in the moment, the beauty and peace of it fueling her determination. She lifted her hand, the fallen petals swirling around her fingers as if caught in a tiny, perfect storm. With a whisper, she released the petals, watching as they floated upward, carried by the same gentle breeze. As the last petal disappeared into the canopy, a faint voice—a memory that felt like a dream—whispered an encouragement as ancient as the land itself: "The world is full of magic. Seek and you shall find."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
59.3826% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1231
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"gently"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1231
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"wavered"
count1
2
word"wavering"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count4
6
word"profound"
count1
7
word"anticipation"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"wavered"
2"wavering"
3"otherworldly"
4"unspoken"
5"intricate"
6"profound"
7"anticipation"
8"dancing"
9"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
92.3521% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean50.96
std24.12
cv0.473
sampleLengths
062
134
291
317
424
546
658
732
826
929
1099
1190
1247
1389
1449
1564
1620
1728
1859
1948
2021
2158
2259
2373
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"was covered"
1"were heightened"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs174
matches
0"were pushing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1076
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02695167286245353
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008364312267657992
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean19.11
std7.91
cv0.414
sampleLengths
017
119
226
321
413
525
618
721
827
916
101
1124
1223
1323
148
1532
1618
1723
189
1912
2014
218
2221
2332
2413
2515
2619
2720
2819
2923
3019
3115
3214
3316
3410
3521
3632
3715
3842
3918
4018
4113
4234
4323
447
4512
468
4712
4816
4931
71.3542% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners28
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered, a voice like the rustle of leaves, (whisper)"
1"she whispered, pointing to a nearby oak (whisper, point)"
2"she whispered, her voice carrying a tone of wonder that echoed her thoughts (whisper, carry echo)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Nyx whispered, their voice full of reverence and unease (whisper)"
5"She traced her thumb over the Heartstone pendant at her throat, the gemstone warming under her touch, and whispered, (trace warm whisper)"
83.7111%