Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGDPR086CZ8J0AQFY1W0W

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20.1s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape, the worn leather of her shoes crunching against the gravel as she approached the scene. Her sharp eyes scanned the abandoned Tube station, taking in the chaos: uniformed officers canvassing the area, forensics techs dusting for prints, a body covered by a tarp on the platform. Harlow's gaze narrowed as she recognized a familiar face among the gathered crowd. "Kowalski, what are you doing here?" she called out, her voice clipped. Eva Kowalski startled at the sound, nervously tucking a stray curl behind her ear. "Detective Quinn. I...I was just passing through, I swear—" "Spare me the excuses." Harlow strode over, arms crossed over her chest. "This is a police investigation. You have no business being here." Eva swallowed hard, her green eyes darting around. "I know, I know. I was just...curious. I heard about the body and—" "And you thought you'd poke your nose where it doesn't belong?" Harlow cut her off, lip curling in disdain. "This isn't some academic exercise, Kowalski. A man is dead." "I understand that," Eva said quietly, adjusting the strap of her worn leather satchel. "I just...I thought I might be able to help. You know I have...unique expertise when it comes to these kinds of things." Harlow's jaw tightened. She knew all too well about Eva's so-called "expertise" — the young woman was far too deeply entrenched in the occult for Harlow's liking. But as much as she loathed to admit it, the girl's arcane knowledge had proven useful in the past. With a resigned sigh, Harlow gestured toward the covered body. "Fine. But stay out of the way and don't touch anything." Eva nodded gratefully and followed Harlow to the platform, where the forensics team was meticulously cataloging the scene. Harlow crouched beside the body, carefully pulling back the tarp. The victim was a middle-aged man, his face frozen in a rictus of terror. Harlow frowned, gently examining the body. There were no visible wounds, no signs of a struggle. Curious. "What have we got?" she asked the lead forensics tech, a young woman with a no-nonsense demeanor. "Cause of death is still unclear," the tech reported, tucking a stray lock of hair behind her ear. "No obvious trauma, no signs of poisoning. Tox screen is still pending, but initial observations suggest..." She trailed off, brow furrowing. "Suggest what?" Harlow prompted. The tech hesitated. "Well, it's just...the body temperature is significantly lower than it should be for the time of death. And there's a strange energy in the air, almost like..." She glanced nervously at Eva, who was standing a respectful distance away, observing the proceedings with a pensive expression. Harlow followed her gaze, then turned back to the tech. "Spit it out, Daniels." "Like...like something supernatural may have been involved," Daniels finished reluctantly. Harlow's jaw tightened. She should have known. Supernatural elements were precisely the kind of complication she didn't need. "Noted," she said tersely. "Keep me apprised of any new developments." As she rose to her feet, she caught sight of a familiar glint on the ground near the body. Bending down, she retrieved a small brass compass, its casing etched with protective sigils. Her eyes narrowed. "What's this?" Eva perked up, stepping closer. "Oh, that's fascinating. May I take a look?" Harlow held up a hand. "Not so fast, Kowalski. This is evidence." She examined the compass, watching as the needle spun erratically, seemingly drawn toward the body. Her frown deepened. "Any idea what this is?" she asked, glancing at Eva. The young woman studied the compass intently, her green eyes alight with curiosity. "It appears to be a Veil Compass," she murmured, almost to herself. "A tool used to detect supernatural energy." Harlow's brows rose. "The Veil Market, huh? That's quite a distance from here. What's it doing at this crime scene?" Eva worried her lower lip, considering. "Perhaps...perhaps the victim was involved in something supernatural. The Compass may have led him here, or drawn someone here to him." Harlow's jaw tightened. "So you're suggesting this was no ordinary murder?" "I..." Eva hesitated, then nodded slowly. "That's my best assessment, based on the evidence." Harlow regarded her for a long moment, then sighed heavily. "Of course it is." She tucked the compass into an evidence bag, her mind whirring. This was turning into a far more complicated case than she'd anticipated. Supernatural elements always made things messy. But if Eva was right, and there was more to this death than met the eye, Harlow would need to tread carefully. She glanced at the covered body, then back at Eva. "All right, Kowalski. Start talking. What can you tell me about this Veil Compass, and how it might be connected to our victim?" Eva perked up, eager to share her knowledge. "Well, the Veil Compass is a fascinating artifact. It's attuned to supernatural energy, and can be used to detect the presence of rifts, portals, or other anomalies." She paused, tucking a stray curl behind her ear. "If it was found at the crime scene, then it stands to reason that the victim was somehow involved with the occult. Perhaps he was investigating something, or was the target of a supernatural entity." Harlow's brow furrowed as she considered this. "So you're saying this could be more than just a simple murder. There could be...otherworldly forces at play." Eva nodded solemnly. "I'm afraid so, Detective. This case may be more complex than it first appears." Harlow sighed, pinching the bridge of her nose. Just when she thought her day couldn't get any worse. "All right, Kowalski. Start from the beginning. Tell me everything you know about the Veil Market and its connection to the supernatural." Eva straightened, her green eyes shining with anticipation. "Well, it all started three years ago, when I was doing research in the British Museum's restricted archives..."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
1"Daniels finished reluctantly [reluctantly]"
2"she said tersely [tersely]"
3"Eva hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.41
leniency0.821
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.205
59.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount978
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"carefully"
2"gently"
3"reluctantly"
4"precisely"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount978
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"furrowing"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"fascinating"
count2
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"furrowing"
3"glint"
4"etched"
5"fascinating"
6"furrowed"
7"otherworldly"
8"complex"
9"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"g with anticipation"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords979
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount551
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity3.63
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow20
Quinn1
Tube1
Eva15
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"n erratically, seemingly drawn toward the bo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount979
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean25.1
std14.22
cv0.567
sampleLengths
054
125
223
323
421
529
636
746
821
928
1031
1117
1234
135
144
1530
1619
1714
1810
1918
2011
2133
225
2313
2430
2510
2632
2720
2827
2911
3014
3125
3240
3333
3479
3525
3617
3740
3826
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
18.18% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs110
matches
0"was meticulously cataloging"
1"was standing"
2"was turning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences81
ratio0
matches(empty)
69.31% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount554
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.0631768953068592
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.032490974729241874
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean12.09
std7.58
cv0.627
sampleLengths
023
131
213
312
414
59
612
711
88
913
1019
1110
1214
1322
143
1524
1619
1710
1811
1918
2010
2114
226
2310
241
2517
2618
2716
285
294
303
3127
3219
3310
344
3510
363
374
3811
394
407
4119
4214
433
442
455
468
475
4822
493
81.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.49382716049382713
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners40
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Just when she thought her"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her sharp eyes scanned the"
1"she called out, her voice"
2"She knew all too well"
3"she asked the lead forensics"
4"She trailed off, brow furrowing."
5"She glanced nervously at Eva,"
6"She should have known."
7"she said tersely"
8"Her eyes narrowed."
9"She examined the compass, watching"
10"Her frown deepened."
11"she asked, glancing at Eva"
12"she murmured, almost to herself"
13"She tucked the compass into"
14"She glanced at the covered"
15"She paused, tucking a stray"
ratio0.286
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"Her sharp eyes scanned the"
2"Harlow's gaze narrowed as she"
3"she called out, her voice"
4"Eva Kowalski startled at the"
5"Harlow strode over, arms crossed"
6"Eva swallowed hard, her green"
7"Harlow cut her off, lip"
8"Eva said quietly, adjusting the"
9"Harlow's jaw tightened."
10"She knew all too well"
11"Eva nodded gratefully and followed"
12"Harlow crouched beside the body,"
13"The victim was a middle-aged"
14"Harlow frowned, gently examining the"
15"she asked the lead forensics"
16"the tech reported, tucking a"
17"She trailed off, brow furrowing."
18"The tech hesitated."
19"She glanced nervously at Eva,"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She glanced nervously at Eva, who was standing a respectful distance away, observing the proceedings with a pensive expression."
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called out, her voice clipped"
1"she murmured, almost to herself"
2"She tucked, her mind whirring"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"the tech reported (report)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.359
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.154
75.2140%