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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGDPR086CZ8J0AQFY1W0W
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Model:
Claude 3 Haiku
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
20.1s
Cost:
$0.002142
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape, the worn leather of her shoes crunching against the gravel as she approached the scene. Her sharp eyes scanned the abandoned Tube station, taking in the chaos: uniformed officers canvassing the area, forensics techs dusting for prints, a body covered by a tarp on the platform. Harlow's gaze narrowed as she recognized a familiar face among the gathered crowd. "Kowalski, what are you doing here?" she called out, her voice clipped. Eva Kowalski startled at the sound,
nervously
tucking a stray curl behind her ear. "Detective Quinn. I...I was just passing through, I swear—" "Spare me the excuses." Harlow strode over, arms crossed over her chest. "This is a police investigation. You have no business being here." Eva swallowed hard, her green eyes darting around. "I know, I know. I was just...curious. I heard about the body and—" "And you thought you'd poke your nose where it doesn't belong?" Harlow cut her off, lip curling in disdain. "This isn't some academic exercise, Kowalski. A man is dead." "I
understand that," Eva
said quietly, adjusting the strap of her worn leather satchel. "I just...I thought I might be able to help. You know I have...unique expertise when it comes to these kinds of things." Harlow's jaw tightened. She knew all too well about Eva's so-called "expertise" — the young woman was far too deeply entrenched in the occult for Harlow's liking. But as much as she loathed to admit it, the girl's arcane knowledge had proven useful in the past. With a resigned sigh, Harlow gestured toward the covered body. "Fine. But stay out of the way and don't touch anything." Eva nodded gratefully and followed Harlow to the platform, where the forensics team was meticulously cataloging the scene. Harlow crouched beside the body,
carefully
pulling back the tarp. The victim was a middle-aged man, his face frozen in a rictus of terror. Harlow frowned,
gently
examining the body. There were no visible wounds, no signs of a struggle. Curious. "What have we got?" she asked the lead forensics tech, a young woman with a no-nonsense demeanor. "Cause of death is still unclear," the tech reported, tucking a stray lock of hair behind her ear. "No obvious trauma, no signs of poisoning. Tox screen is still pending, but initial observations suggest..." She trailed off, brow
furrowing
. "Suggest what?" Harlow prompted. The tech hesitated. "Well, it's just...the body temperature is significantly lower than it should be for the time of death. And there's a strange energy in the air, almost like..." She glanced
nervously
at Eva, who
was standing
a respectful distance away, observing the proceedings with a pensive expression. Harlow followed her gaze, then turned back to the tech. "Spit it out, Daniels." "Like...like something supernatural may have been involved," Daniels finished
reluctantly
. Harlow's jaw tightened. She should have known. Supernatural elements were
precisely
the kind of complication she didn't need. "Noted," she said tersely. "Keep me apprised of any new developments." As she rose to her feet, she caught sight of a familiar
glint
on the ground near the body. Bending down, she retrieved a small brass compass, its casing
etched
with protective sigils. Her
eyes narrowed
. "What's this?" Eva perked up, stepping closer. "Oh, that's fascinating. May I take a look?" Harlow held up a hand. "Not so fast, Kowalski. This is evidence." She examined the compass, watching as the needle spun erratically, seemingly drawn toward the body. Her frown deepened. "Any idea what this is?" she asked, glancing at Eva. The young woman studied the compass intently, her green eyes alight with curiosity. "It appears to be a Veil Compass," she murmured, almost to herself. "A tool used to detect supernatural energy." Harlow's brows rose. "The Veil Market, huh? That's quite a distance from here. What's it doing at this crime scene?" Eva worried her lower lip, considering. "Perhaps...perhaps the victim was involved in something supernatural. The Compass may have led him here, or drawn someone here to him." Harlow's jaw tightened. "So you're suggesting this was no ordinary murder?" "I..." Eva hesitated, then nodded
slowly
. "That's my best assessment, based on the evidence." Harlow regarded her for a long moment, then sighed heavily. "Of course it is." She tucked the compass into an evidence bag, her mind whirring. This
was turning
into a far more complicated case than she'd anticipated. Supernatural elements always made things messy. But if Eva was right, and there was more to this death than met the eye, Harlow would need to tread
carefully
. She glanced at the covered body, then back at Eva. "All right, Kowalski. Start talking. What can you tell me about this Veil Compass, and how it might be connected to our victim?" Eva perked up, eager to share her knowledge. "Well, the Veil Compass is a fascinating artifact. It's attuned to supernatural energy, and can be used to detect the presence of rifts, portals, or other anomalies." She paused, tucking a stray curl behind her ear. "If it was found at the crime scene, then it stands to
reason that the
victim was somehow involved with the occult. Perhaps he was investigating something, or was the target of a supernatural entity." Harlow's brow
furrowed
as she considered this. "So you're saying this could be more than just a simple murder. There could be...
otherworldly
forces at play." Eva nodded solemnly. "I'm afraid so, Detective. This case may be more complex than it first appears." Harlow sighed, pinching the bridge of her nose. Just when she thought her day couldn't get any worse. "All right, Kowalski. Start from the beginning. Tell me everything you know about the Veil Market and its connection to the supernatural." Eva straightened, her green eyes shining with
anticipation
. "Well, it all started three years ago, when I was doing research in the British Museum's restricted archives..."
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2/17/2026, 1:48:06 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"Eva said quietly, adjusting the strap of her worn leather satchel [quietly]"
1
"Daniels finished reluctantly [reluctantly]"
2
"she said tersely [tersely]"
3
"she murmured, almost to herself [almost]"
18.4506%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
981
totalAiIsmAdverbs
8
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
2
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"nervously"
count
2
3
adverb
"precisely"
count
1
4
adverb
"reluctantly"
count
1
5
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"gently"
2
"nervously"
3
"precisely"
4
"reluctantly"
5
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
38.8379%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
981
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"glint"
count
1
1
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
2
word
"anticipation"
count
1
3
word
"furrowed"
count
1
4
word
"furrowing"
count
1
5
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"glint"
1
"otherworldly"
2
"anticipation"
3
"furrowed"
4
"furrowing"
5
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
58
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
58
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"understand that,\" Eva"
1
"reason that the"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
39
mean
25.1
std
14.22
cv
0.567
sampleLengths
0
54
1
25
2
23
3
23
4
21
5
29
6
36
7
46
8
21
9
28
10
31
11
17
12
34
13
5
14
4
15
30
16
19
17
14
18
10
19
18
20
11
21
33
22
5
23
13
24
30
25
10
26
32
27
20
28
27
29
11
30
14
31
25
32
40
33
33
34
79
35
25
36
17
37
40
38
26
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
58
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
110
matches
0
"was standing"
1
"was turning"
69.3111%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
554
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.0631768953068592
lyAdverbCount
18
lyAdverbRatio
0.032490974729241874
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
81
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
81
mean
12.09
std
7.58
cv
0.627
sampleLengths
0
23
1
31
2
13
3
12
4
14
5
9
6
12
7
11
8
8
9
13
10
19
11
10
12
14
13
22
14
3
15
24
16
19
17
10
18
11
19
18
20
10
21
14
22
6
23
10
24
1
25
17
26
18
27
16
28
5
29
4
30
3
31
27
32
19
33
10
34
4
35
10
36
3
37
4
38
11
39
4
40
7
41
19
42
14
43
3
44
2
45
5
46
8
47
5
48
22
49
3
81.0700%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.49382716049382713
totalSentences
81
uniqueOpeners
40
18.7500%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"Eva said quietly, adjusting the strap of her worn leather satchel (say quietly, adjust)"
1
"the tech reported, tucking a stray lock of hair behind her ear (report, tuck)"
2
"Daniels finished reluctantly (finish reluctantly)"
3
"she said tersely (say tersely)"
4
"she murmured, almost to herself (murmur)"
78.0247%