Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGDTTG16KQ9V7ZH5DQ3VF

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Duration:
15.1s
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$0.001393
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Novita

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
players, if it advancesances the plot. </character> It was a bad part of town, the kind where snapshots of everyday life in the city could easily be mistaken for a crime scene. Quinn had been there for hours, her watch ticking away the seconds. Her eyes flicked to the glowing numbers on the digital clock beside her. The time was nigh, the sky a deep indigo, the city bathed in the warm light of early summer. casting long shadows over the rooftops. a stout man with a weathered face, his gaze unwavering as he surveyed the room from a high vantage point. his hair peppered with gray. and his sharp jaw was softened by a day's growth. use the codex entries to determine his emotional state. He was neither angry nor calm, his features composed in a thoughtful contemplation. Quinn's eyes darted to the clock, to the entrance, then back to her. Harlow checked her watch. Three hours past nine. She stood abruptly, her heart pounding in her chest, her breath ragged. her lungs drawing in rapid succession. Quinn's breath hitched slightly as she watched the minute hand, the hand that had been holding the watch slide away from the wrist. It was a symbol of authority, of control. The detective's gaze lingered on the clock, ticking off the seconds. She turned away, her mind already on the task at hand. Her fingers traced the numbers, each one tapping in sync with the rhythm of the rain outside the window. A small smirk tugged at the corners of her mouth as she watched the suspect' Noah, back away from the wall, exposing the outline of his hand. Quinn's eyes narrowased. reflecting the suspicion' then slid to the exit, her hand slipping into the shadows of the room. She started to move, drawing the attention of the room's occupants. The detective's gaze shifted from the clock to the exit sign, her brows pinched, her breath narrowed, her forehead cresembled the scent of fresh-burning fuse. and her eyes narrowed on the exit sign, expecting her hidden somewhere. The detective's gaze shifted from the young woman to the older man lying unconscious in the street. her eyes hardened, and she shook her head slowly, a bead of sweat rolling down her forehead. then she whispered to the girlaring "h" — the pre-agreed signal for silence. The young woman nodded, her expression placaint as she whispered something into the girlaring's ear. her eyes flicked to the shadows on the wall, then back to Harlow. then she noticed a figure standing in the shadows, his hands clasped behind his back, his fingers splayed, and she whispered, "They're here." backending their."ll allow the innocents to escape if they don't want them to." end{ <location id="858" name="The Raven's Nest" PEROPLE use the codex to bringrounded in the lore of the Raven's Nest, a secret society of powerful beings known as the Children of the Raven.</location> The detective's gaze swept over the room, taking in the sight of the Thieves' guild den sprawled out in the open. their eyes catching the glint of a blade in the dim light. their hands reaching for the holster of a handgun tucked into the waistband of a dead man's pants. their eyes widened as they registered the flash of silver from the exit wound, their eyes tracing the outline of the body in the shadows. their hands balling into fists. their fingers brushing the bloodied off their knuckles. their breath catching in the wet crimson of the man's throat, their eyes tracing the wound back to the palm of his hand, then she saw the man's hand jerk back into the shadows, the handle jerking back, then grabbing the railing with one hand while the other holding a flintlock pistol, then she seized the handgun, shouting, "Drop it!" The detective's gaze slid from the young woman to the exit, her watching as the woman' her fingers tracing the outline of the handgun, her fingers splayed, and she whispered, "I know who you are," Herrera." I know who you are," but she didnared her, still watching her closely, the way her breath mimicked his by reachinging listening, then she noticed movement out of the corner of her eye. The detective's gaze shifted to the old man, then back to the young woman, her eyes narrowing, her hand reaching out to grasp something, anything to keep the young woman from falling, anything to break her hold. but the glint of a blade in her eye reflected something else, something unspoken, something hidden, perhaps a taunt, but she shook her head slowly, her bead of sweat rolling down her forehead, then she said, "You're not as clever as you think," Harlow," you're just not as observant." the way her colleagues traced the contours of the young woman's face in the dim light, the way her skin glistened, the way her hair caught the lightuminence of the room, and the way her eyes picked up the nuances in the woman's voice, and the detective's breath tightened into a pattern in the woman's speech, her voice a low growl, and she said, "I've heard whispers about her beforefter. but it seems unlikely. she has been asked to investigate further, and she glanced at her watch, her fingers poised to spring, her breath catching in the pause, then she quietly ended the conversation, her eyes sliding away to leave.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"then she noticed a figure standing in the shadows, his hands clasped behind his back, his fingers splayed, and she whispered, backending their.\"ll allow the innocents to escape if they don't want them [then]"
1"their breath catching in the wet crimson of the man's throat, their eyes tracing the wound back to the palm of his hand, then she saw the man's hand jerk back into the shadows, the handle jerking back, then grabbing the railing with one hand while the other holding a flintlock pistol, then she seized the handgun, shouting, [then back, then then]"
2"but the glint of a blade in her eye reflected something else, something unspoken, something hidden, perhaps a taunt, but she shook her head slowly, her bead of sweat rolling down her forehead, then she said, the way her colleagues traced the contours of the young woman's face in the dim light, the way her skin glistened, the way her hair caught the lightuminence of the room, and the way her eyes picked up the nuances in the woman's voice, and the detective's breath tightened into a pattern in the woman's speech, her voice a low growl, and she said, [perhaps slowly, then]"
66.7406% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount902
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.4812% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount902
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flicked"
count2
1
word"glint"
count2
2
word"unwavering"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"glint"
2"unwavering"
3"unspoken"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences46
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tries to"
1"started to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean69.38
std66.64
cv0.96
sampleLengths
07
175
235
335
457
568
668
747
864
91
1031
11149
12265
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences46
matches
0"was softened"
1"been asked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount862
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.033642691415313224
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010440835266821345
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences46
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences46
mean19.61
std24.67
cv1.258
sampleLengths
06
11
225
312
413
519
66
720
85
910
109
1113
1213
134
144
1512
166
1723
188
1911
2011
2119
2227
233
2417
2511
2625
2712
2817
2917
3013
3115
3213
3336
341
3531
3621
3712
3818
3925
405
418
4260
4369
4437
45159
63.0435% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.45652173913043476
totalSentences46
uniqueOpeners21
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"whispered (whisper)"
1"then she noticed a figure standing in the shadows, his hands clasped behind his back, his fingers splayed, and she whispered, backending their.\"ll allow the innocents to escape if they don't want them (notice stand clasp splay, whisper, backend allow escape do not want)"
2"their breath catching in the wet crimson of the man's throat, their eyes tracing the wound back to the palm of his hand, then she saw the man's hand jerk back into the shadows, the handle jerking back, then grabbing the railing with one hand while the other holding a flintlock pistol, then she seized the handgun, shouting, (catch trace see back jerk grab seize shout)"
3"but the glint of a blade in her eye reflected something else, something unspoken, something hidden, perhaps a taunt, but she shook her head slowly, her bead of sweat rolling down her forehead, then she said, the way her colleagues traced the contours of the young woman's face in the dim light, the way her skin glistened, the way her hair caught the lightuminence of the room, and the way her eyes picked up the nuances in the woman's voice, and the detective's breath tightened into a pattern in the woman's speech, her voice a low growl, and she said, (reflect hide, shake roll say, trace glisten, catch pick up tighten voice say)"
78.2313%