| 0.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "then she noticed a figure standing in the shadows, his hands clasped behind his back, his fingers splayed, and she whispered, backending their.\"ll allow the innocents to escape if they don't want them [then]" | | 1 | "their breath catching in the wet crimson of the man's throat, their eyes tracing the wound back to the palm of his hand, then she saw the man's hand jerk back into the shadows, the handle jerking back, then grabbing the railing with one hand while the other holding a flintlock pistol, then she seized the handgun, shouting, [then back, then then]" | | 2 | "but the glint of a blade in her eye reflected something else, something unspoken, something hidden, perhaps a taunt, but she shook her head slowly, her bead of sweat rolling down her forehead, then she said, the way her colleagues traced the contours of the young woman's face in the dim light, the way her skin glistened, the way her hair caught the lightuminence of the room, and the way her eyes picked up the nuances in the woman's voice, and the detective's breath tightened into a pattern in the woman's speech, her voice a low growl, and she said, [perhaps slowly, then]" |
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| 66.7406% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 902 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.4812% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 902 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "glint" | | 2 | "unwavering" | | 3 | "unspoken" |
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| 66.6667% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 13 | | mean | 69.38 | | std | 66.64 | | cv | 0.96 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 149 | | 12 | 265 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "was softened" | | 1 | "been asked" |
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| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 862 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.033642691415313224 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010440835266821345 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 46 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 46 | | mean | 19.61 | | std | 24.67 | | cv | 1.258 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 60 | | 43 | 69 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 159 |
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| 63.0435% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.45652173913043476 | | totalSentences | 46 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "then she noticed a figure standing in the shadows, his hands clasped behind his back, his fingers splayed, and she whispered, backending their.\"ll allow the innocents to escape if they don't want them (notice stand clasp splay, whisper, backend allow escape do not want)" | | 2 | "their breath catching in the wet crimson of the man's throat, their eyes tracing the wound back to the palm of his hand, then she saw the man's hand jerk back into the shadows, the handle jerking back, then grabbing the railing with one hand while the other holding a flintlock pistol, then she seized the handgun, shouting, (catch trace see back jerk grab seize shout)" | | 3 | "but the glint of a blade in her eye reflected something else, something unspoken, something hidden, perhaps a taunt, but she shook her head slowly, her bead of sweat rolling down her forehead, then she said, the way her colleagues traced the contours of the young woman's face in the dim light, the way her skin glistened, the way her hair caught the lightuminence of the room, and the way her eyes picked up the nuances in the woman's voice, and the detective's breath tightened into a pattern in the woman's speech, her voice a low growl, and she said, (reflect hide, shake roll say, trace glisten, catch pick up tighten voice say)" |
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