| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1115 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1115 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "sanctuary" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "anticipation" | | 5 | "crystal" | | 6 | "sentinels" | | 7 | "otherworldly" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "depths" | | 12 | "electric" | | 13 | "tracing" | | 14 | "intricate" | | 15 | "enigmatic" | | 16 | "cascading" | | 17 | "treacherous" | | 18 | "pulse" | | 19 | "navigate" | | 20 | "quickened" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "potential" | | 23 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 92.95% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "d with anticipation" | | 1 | "e with anticipation" |
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| 60.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1115 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 840 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Rory | 10 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.905 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like" | | 1 | "appeared ancient yet immaculately kept, as if tended by invisible hands" | | 2 | "looked like solid moonlight, stood ajar," | | 3 | "seemed alive an electric hum against her skin that heightened her senses" | | 4 | "as if assuring her that it held the knowledge they sought" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.897 | | wordCount | 1115 | | matches | | 0 | "not just a sanctuary but a launching point for greater things" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 33.93% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 55.75 | | std | 14.98 | | cv | 0.269 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 66 |
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| 91.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "was unprepared" | | 1 | "was magnified" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 843 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.021352313167259787 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009489916963226572 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 18.28 | | std | 7.57 | | cv | 0.414 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 38 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 53.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3770491803278688 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "They were a threshold, a" | | 1 | "She inhaled the crisp air," | | 2 | "She followed the path they" | | 3 | "They flickered, their silhouette briefly" | | 4 | "Her voice carried over the" | | 5 | "She glanced down at the" | | 6 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 7 | "She ran her fingers lightly" | | 8 | "She spoke her question aloud," | | 9 | "She had long studied the" | | 10 | "Her heart quickened at the" |
| | ratio | 0.212 | |
| 8.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory, her footfalls muted by" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 2 | "They were a threshold, a" | | 3 | "She inhaled the crisp air," | | 4 | "The grove welcomed them with" | | 5 | "The towering oaks, their branches" | | 6 | "Every step brought new marvels" | | 7 | "Rory's fingers trailed along the" | | 8 | "She followed the path they" | | 9 | "Isolde had warned them about" | | 10 | "Every sound was magnified, from" | | 11 | "The building appeared ancient yet" | | 12 | "Vines, heavy with deep purple" | | 13 | "The door, carved from what" | | 14 | "Nyx, their shadowy form drifting" | | 15 | "They flickered, their silhouette briefly" | | 16 | "Isolde, her lavender eyes glittering" | | 17 | "Her voice carried over the" | | 18 | "Rory's breath caught as the" | | 19 | "She glanced down at the" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 26.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She inhaled the crisp air, scented with wildflowers that defied the winter chill, and wondered if this was what breathing between worlds felt like." | | 1 | "The grove welcomed them with a silence that wasn't emptiness but anticipation, as if the trees themselves were holding their breath." | | 2 | "The towering oaks, their branches woven together, formed a canopy that filtered the sunlight, casting a dappled glow over the verdant clearing." | | 3 | "The building appeared ancient yet immaculately kept, as if tended by invisible hands." | | 4 | "The air itself seemed alive, an electric hum against her skin that heightened her senses." | | 5 | "Rory closed her eyes, inhaling deeply, letting the fragrant air fill her lungs." | | 6 | "She had long studied the codex, aware of the tales of mortals who had ventured there and returned mad or changed forever." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying no malice" | | 1 | "Nyx observed, their shadowy form shimmering like heat waves in the distance" | | 2 | "She spoke, the words seeming to hang in the heavy air," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 2 | "She spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |