Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGKG28CETKKC3VNCT91YF

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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn swept into the abandoned Tube station, her sharp gaze immediately cataloging the scene. Shafts of eerie green light filtered through the rusted metal grates above, casting an otherworldly glow over the cavernous space. The air had a palpable charge, as if the very atmosphere hummed with unseen energy. A body lay prone on the cracked tile floor, partially obscured by a tangle of ancient railway tracks. Harlow strode forward, her worn leather soles clicking against the ground. As she drew closer, she caught a glimpse of the victim's face — a young woman, her features frozen in a rictus of terror. "What have we got?" Harlow asked, glancing up at the officer guarding the perimeter. "Single GSW to the chest," the officer replied, his brow furrowed. "Looks like a .45 caliber round. Wallet and personal effects were left untouched." Harlow nodded, her keen gaze sweeping over the surrounding area. Something was off — the scene didn't add up. She crouched beside the body, her sharp jaw set in a contemplative frown as she examined the wound. The blood had a strange, iridescent quality, and the edges of the entry point were tinged with an unnaturally deep black. "Have forensics been through?" she asked. "Just finished up, ma'am. They said they've never seen anything like this." Harlow's eyes narrowed as she reached out, gingerly pressing the edges of the wound. A chill ran down her spine, and she rose to her feet, her mind racing. "Where's Kowalski?" she demanded. As if summoned by the question, a petite woman with curly red hair emerged from the shadows, her round glasses perched on the end of her nose. Eva Kowalski, Harlow's sometime consultant and the closest thing she had to a friend, looked uncharacteristically grave. "Over here," Eva said, beckoning Harlow toward a darkened alcove. Harlow followed, her senses on high alert. In the alcove, a strange device lay on the ground — a small brass compass, its face etched with ornate sigils. The needle spun wildly, its movements erratic and unpredictable. "What is that?" Harlow asked, her eyes narrowing. "A Veil Compass," Eva replied, her voice hushed. "It's attuned to supernatural energy — points the way to the nearest rift or portal." Harlow's jaw tightened. "And what's it doing here?" Eva's gaze was grave. "That's what I'm trying to figure out." Harlow studied the compass, her keen mind working overtime. If this device was indeed tracking supernatural phenomena, then the victim's death was likely tied to it in some way. She turned back to the body, her movements precise and purposeful. As she neared the corpse, something caught her eye — a glint of metal half-buried beneath the tangled tracks. Harlow crouched, carefully brushing away the debris, and retrieved a slim, ornate key. She held it up, her brow furrowed. "What do you make of this?" she asked, handing the key to Eva. Eva's fingers closed around the delicate metal, her expression thoughtful. "It looks like an old-fashioned skeleton key, but the craftsmanship is... unusual. The markings on the bow are definitely not from this world." Harlow nodded, her gaze returning to the body. "That's what I was afraid of." She rose to her feet, her bearing radiating a sense of grim determination. "Alright, Kowalski, let's see what else we can find. This is no ordinary murder." Eva fell into step beside her, the Veil Compass clutched tightly in her hand. "I was hoping you'd say that." The two women moved with purpose, their eyes scanning the scene for any additional clues. Harlow noted the strange, iridescent splatters of blood that seemed to crawl across the tiles, while Eva carefully cataloged the placement of the body and the orientation of the tracks. As they worked, a sense of unease settled over the abandoned station. The very air felt charged, as if the shadows themselves were watching their every move. Harlow couldn't shake the feeling that they were being observed, and she found herself glancing over her shoulder more than once. "Do you feel that?" Eva murmured, her green eyes wide behind the lenses of her glasses. Harlow nodded, her hand instinctively drifting toward the firearm at her hip. "Yeah. Something's not right." They pressed on, their senses heightened, searching for any additional evidence that might shed light on the nature of this strange crime. Harlow's gaze was drawn to a glint of metal near the far end of the platform, and she moved forward cautiously. As she drew closer, she saw that it was another compass, its needle spinning wildly. But this one was different — the casing was tarnished, and the sigils etched into the face were partially obscured by a thick layer of grime. Harlow crouched, her fingers tracing the weathered metal. "This one's been here longer," she murmured, more to herself than to Eva. Eva nodded, her expression pensive. "Which means the supernatural activity in this area has been ongoing for some time." Harlow's gaze sharpened, her mind racing. If this was true, then the death of the young woman was likely not an isolated incident. There was a deeper mystery at play, one that had been unfolding in the shadows for who knows how long. She rose to her feet, her jaw set with determination. "We need to find out what's going on here. And fast." Eva met her gaze, her own expression grave. "I think I know where to start." Harlow arched a brow, and Eva continued, her voice hushed. "The Veil Market. It's a hidden supernatural black market that deals in all sorts of enchanted goods and information. If there's any connection between this crime and the Veil, that's where we'll find it." Harlow's eyes narrowed. "The Veil, huh? Sounds like our kind of party." She turned, her gaze sweeping the abandoned station one last time. "Alright, Kowalski. Let's go pay a visit to this Veil Market of yours." Eva nodded, the Veil Compass clutched tightly in her hand as they made their way out of the station, the shadows seeming to follow in their wake.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
65.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1007
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"tightly"
count2
3
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"tightly"
3"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1007
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"palpable"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count2
3
word"tinged"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"racing"
count2
7
word"grave"
count3
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"glint"
count2
10
word"sense of"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"cataloged"
count1
13
word"charged"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"palpable"
2"furrowed"
3"tinged"
4"chill"
5"down her spine"
6"racing"
7"grave"
8"etched"
9"glint"
10"sense of"
11"scanning"
12"cataloged"
13"charged"
14"tracing"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"a sense of unease"
97.22% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences60
matches
0"a sense of unease"
1"t with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1013
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
15.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount782
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.69
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow21
Quinn1
Tube1
Kowalski1
Eva14
Veil2
Compass2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.157
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"blood that seemed to crawl across the tiles, while Eva carefully cataloged the placement of the body and the orientation of the tracks"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1013
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"saw that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean26.66
std14.74
cv0.553
sampleLengths
051
153
214
324
458
56
612
729
84
944
1017
1130
128
1323
148
1511
1640
1739
1813
1933
2014
2127
2220
2345
2448
2516
2616
2743
2841
2921
3019
3143
3221
3315
3444
3512
3624
3727
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"were tinged"
1"was drawn"
40.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs125
matches
0"was indeed tracking"
1"were watching"
2"were being"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences76
ratio0.066
matches
0"As she drew closer, she caught a glimpse of the victim's face — a young woman, her features frozen in a rictus of terror."
1"Something was off — the scene didn't add up."
2"In the alcove, a strange device lay on the ground — a small brass compass, its face etched with ornate sigils."
3"As she neared the corpse, something caught her eye — a glint of metal half-buried beneath the tangled tracks."
4"But this one was different — the casing was tarnished, and the sigils etched into the face were partially obscured by a thick layer of grime."
97.39% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03470437017994859
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.02313624678663239
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean13.33
std6.61
cv0.496
sampleLengths
016
120
215
318
411
524
614
711
813
910
109
1118
1221
136
1412
1514
1615
174
1827
1917
2010
217
2221
239
248
258
2615
273
285
294
307
319
3220
3311
3419
3513
367
3713
3810
3923
408
416
4213
4314
4414
456
4615
4730
4812
4915
67.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.40789473684210525
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences58
matches
0"She crouched beside the body,"
1"She turned back to the"
2"She held it up, her"
3"she asked, handing the key"
4"She rose to her feet,"
5"They pressed on, their senses"
6"she murmured, more to herself"
7"She rose to her feet,"
8"She turned, her gaze sweeping"
ratio0.155
46.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences58
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn swept into"
1"Shafts of eerie green light"
2"The air had a palpable"
3"A body lay prone on"
4"Harlow strode forward, her worn"
5"Harlow asked, glancing up at"
6"the officer replied, his brow"
7"Harlow nodded, her keen gaze"
8"Something was off — the"
9"She crouched beside the body,"
10"The blood had a strange,"
11"Harlow's eyes narrowed as she"
12"A chill ran down her"
13"Eva Kowalski, Harlow's sometime consultant"
14"Eva said, beckoning Harlow toward"
15"Harlow followed, her senses on"
16"The needle spun wildly, its"
17"Harlow asked, her eyes narrowing"
18"Eva replied, her voice hushed"
19"Harlow's jaw tightened."
ratio0.828
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences58
matches
0"As if summoned by the"
1"If this device was indeed"
2"If this was true, then"
ratio0.052
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air had a palpable charge, as if the very atmosphere hummed with unseen energy."
1"As if summoned by the question, a petite woman with curly red hair emerged from the shadows, her round glasses perched on the end of her nose."
2"Harlow noted the strange, iridescent splatters of blood that seemed to crawl across the tiles, while Eva carefully cataloged the placement of the body and the o…"
3"They pressed on, their senses heightened, searching for any additional evidence that might shed light on the nature of this strange crime."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"the officer replied, his brow furrowed"
1"Harlow asked, her eyes narrowing"
2"Eva replied, her voice hushed"
3"Eva murmured, her green eyes wide behind the lenses of her glasses"
4"she murmured, more to herself than to Eva"
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.231
71.8974%