Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGKJQNBAPNJCQ918CQ5BC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.002397
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Harlow stepped off the broken escalator and into the forgotten warren of the abandoned Tube station. The air was stale, thick with the burnt umber of old track rust and mouse droppings. A miasma like wet wool clung to walls still plastered with adverts faded to foggy impressions. Sticking to the deeper shadows, moving with military precision, she let a gloved hand brush the flaking paint, the chips crunching softly under her fingertips. Nearby, water seeped from the tunnel's curve in a wet rhythm: plink, plip, plink. Ahead, past the tumbled piles of steel wool and concrete dust, a strange market huddled. The Veil Market. Stalls of mossy brickwork and scavenged wood. It leant on itself, a patchwork of hustling oddity beneath the city where both treasures and curses hustled shoulder to trembling shoulder. At first glance, chaos. But Harlow spied the sense inside the hurricane. The Veil had been the epicenter of her investigation into a clique of occult enthusiasts she suspected of criminal activity. Recent whispers of a stolen artifact had led her here, to the bitter underground. She slipped in unseen with the help of an informer's pilfered bone token. As Harlow walked the crowded aisles, her sharp jaw clenched with tension, a figure detached from the barter of voices. She recognized the satchel slung across the woman's freckled shoulder; she recognized the red frizz of disorderly curls. Eva Kowalski, a longtime fixture in the shadowed shelves of the British Museum's occult archival wing. Curious, Harlow kept her distance, pretending to inspect the shimmering bolts of enchanted spider silk displayed on one rotting stall. Eva approached a vendor hunkered behind teetering stacks of proscribed texts, and Harlow watched as the researcher leaned forward, nodding sagely. Eva's head tilted, her round glasses catching the flicker of a wavering enchantment overhead, masking her expression. She sighed. Without warning, she spun on her heel and strode deliberately towards the abandoned ticket hall. Harlow decided to follow, and she tucked into a side lane littered with spilled matches that crunched under her boots. She stalked through the murk, her breaths smothered in the predatory hush. Still, Eva seemed to sense her. The researcher waited in the darkness, arms crossed, her leeriness evident even in silhouette. "I see you, detective," she said softly, but her voice carried in the quiet. "Are you here for the compass as well?" Harlow bit off a huff. Of course this woman would know her. After all, her investigations were anything but subtle. She stepped out of the shadows, brushing past Eva into the ticket hall's moldy confines. "The Veil has objects of interest," she replied, keeping her voice controlled, "for this case." Eva cocked an eyebrow. "Are you sure about that?" The detective turned then, fixing Eva with a narrow stare. "Sure about what?" "This case of yours. The missing Shade compass. Are you sure it's not... mislaid rather than stolen?" "Mislaid?" Harlow huffed. "Enchanted items wielded by non-guild members. Reports of rifts. No, this is deliberate. Organized." Eva shrugged, not so much in indifference but resignation. "It's easy to miss things down here, detective. Even the odd supernatural tempest in a teacup." She tugged her frizzing hair, twirling it about a finger. Her nervous habit. Harlow's frown deepened, her eyes flicking over Eva's face, seeking deceit. But she detected only the twitchy brilliance beneath the nerves. Eva Kowalski was notorious for her meticulous research into areas that would make even seasoned veterans balk. If she was asking Harlow to reconsider, perhaps there was a thread to tug. "Alright," Harlow said, softening slightly. "Show me what you think I've missed." The relief was immediate. Eva's shoulders sagged, worn satchel slipping, as she exhaled. "Over here," she said, leading Harlow past the debris-strewn mouth of the station. "In the cracks." Harlow followed, eyes narrowed as she scanned the cobble grid. Scrabbling down to her knees, she pressed her cheek to the pitted ground and squinted. In the narrow crevasse writhed spiders scuttling over something so burnished it glinted like fractured suns. A compass. And not just any compass. "How did you..." Harlow began, but Eva interrupted with a jolt. "It's not quite what you think," she said, almost apologetic. "Look again, Harlow." Confused and more than a little begrimed, the detective did as Eva suggested and looked again, her breath held. And there, etched upon the needle's base, barely discernible through the scrim of old muck, the true sigil glimmered. Not just for detecting rifts. This compass was key to entering them. A shiver recoiled through her spine. "You see it, don't you?" Eva whispered, her cheeks sallow in the sickly light. "That's not just any compass. It can't be taken by just anyone." Harlow rose unsteadily, brushing brick dust from her knees. She tasted wet pennies, felt the press of old, feral magic scurry over her nape. She forced herself to nod. "I see it. You're right, Eva," she said finally. "I missed something. Maybe this clique... maybe they didn't take the compass. Maybe they were trying to protect it." Eva's smile was unexpected, a sudden bright surprise between them in the murk. "Not the conclusion I would have jumped to," she said, "but you carry the weight, detective. Not me. I just... I wanted to help. Morris was my friend too." The ghost of Harlow's fallen partner lingered on the air a moment, and Harlow's jaw worked as she let the words sink in. "Thank you, Eva," she said at last. "I might have lost more than my way down here. I owe you." Eva shook her head. "You don't owe me anything. Let's just say we watched out for each other today, yeah? And maybe... maybe don't be a stranger to the archives." Harlow, detecting no guile, found herself smiling in return. It stretched unfamiliar muscles, but it felt right. So did the clasp of Eva's warm hand in her cold one. They stood a moment in the shattered dark, unlikely allies amid moldering brick and the knot of secretive traders. "Time's up," Eva said at last. "I gotta go. But... take care of yourself, detective." With a wink and a wave, she was off. Harlow stood alone in the shadows, the Veil Compass cradled in her hand, considering. The evidence told a different story, and she needed to listen—really listen this time. She tucked the compass deep into her worn leather watch pocket and set her feet toward the surface. Perhaps there were solutions yet to find. perhaps a new way forward. And maybe, just maybe, DS Morris' ghost could sleep a little easier.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said softly, but her voice carried in the quiet [softly]"
1"Harlow said, softening slightly [slightly]"
2"she said, almost apologetic [almost]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
54.7101% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1104
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.5942% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1104
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"fractured"
count1
4
word"jaw clenched"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"wavering"
2"silk"
3"fractured"
4"jaw clenched"
5"weight"
6"etched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean32.38
std19.77
cv0.611
sampleLengths
087
159
247
374
455
552
622
735
815
99
1013
1117
1217
1338
1452
1512
1613
1716
1848
1911
2013
2156
2226
2329
2428
2513
2629
2723
2820
2930
3048
3115
3255
3324
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was unexpected"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was asking"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount879
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03526734926052332
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01478953356086462
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.84
std6.23
cv0.526
sampleLengths
016
116
216
325
414
515
63
77
822
94
108
1120
1214
1313
1420
1518
1616
1720
1821
1917
202
2115
2220
2312
246
2514
2614
278
285
297
308
3115
3215
334
345
3510
363
3717
383
3914
409
4126
423
4311
4410
4517
4614
475
487
494
76.3441% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4838709677419355
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners45
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she said softly, but her voice carried in the quiet (say softly, carry)"
1"she replied, keeping her voice controlled (reply, keep control)"
2"Harlow said, softening slightly (say, soften slightly)"
3"whispered (whisper)"
4"she said finally (say finally)"
81.4303%