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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGKJQNBAPNJCQ918CQ5BC
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.002397
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Harlow stepped off the broken escalator and into the forgotten warren of the abandoned Tube station. The air was stale, thick with the burnt umber of old track rust and mouse droppings. A miasma like wet wool clung to walls still plastered with adverts faded to foggy impressions. Sticking to the deeper shadows, moving with military precision, she let a gloved hand brush the flaking paint, the chips crunching
softly
under her fingertips. Nearby, water seeped from the tunnel's curve in a wet rhythm: plink, plip, plink. Ahead, past the tumbled piles of steel wool and concrete dust, a strange market huddled. The Veil Market. Stalls of mossy brickwork and scavenged wood. It leant on itself, a patchwork of hustling oddity beneath the city where both treasures and curses hustled shoulder to trembling shoulder. At first glance, chaos. But Harlow spied the sense inside the hurricane. The Veil had been the epicenter of her investigation into a clique of occult enthusiasts she suspected of criminal activity. Recent whispers of a stolen artifact had led her here, to the bitter underground. She slipped in unseen with the help of an informer's pilfered bone token. As Harlow walked the crowded aisles, her sharp
jaw clenched
with tension, a figure detached from the barter of voices. She recognized the satchel slung across the woman's freckled shoulder; she recognized the red frizz of disorderly curls. Eva Kowalski, a longtime fixture in the shadowed shelves of the British Museum's occult archival wing. Curious, Harlow kept her distance, pretending to inspect the shimmering bolts of enchanted spider
silk
displayed on one rotting stall. Eva approached a vendor hunkered behind teetering stacks of proscribed texts, and Harlow
watch
ed as the researcher leaned forward, nodding sagely. Eva's head tilted, her round glasses catching the
flicker
of a
wavering
enchantment overhead, masking her expression. She sighed. Without warning, she spun on her heel and strode
deliberately
towards the abandoned ticket hall. Harlow decided to follow, and she tucked into a side lane littered with spilled matches that crunched under her boots. She stalked through the murk, her breaths smothered in the predatory hush. Still, Eva
seemed to
sense her. The researcher waited in the darkness, arms crossed, her leeriness evident even in silhouette. "I see you, detective," she said
softly
, but her voice carried in the quiet. "Are you here for the compass as well?" Harlow bit off a huff. Of course this woman would know her. After all, her investigations were anything but subtle. She stepped out of the shadows, brushing past Eva into the ticket hall's moldy confines. "The Veil has objects of interest," she replied, keeping her voice controlled, "for this case." Eva cocked an eyebrow. "Are you sure about that?" The detective turned then, fixing Eva with a narrow stare. "Sure about what?" "This case of yours. The missing Shade compass. Are you sure it's not... mislaid rather than stolen?" "Mislaid?" Harlow huffed. "Enchanted items wielded by non-guild members. Reports of rifts. No, this is deliberate. Organized." Eva shrugged, not so much in indifference but resignation. "It's easy to miss things down here, detective. Even the odd supernatural tempest in a teacup." She tugged her frizzing hair, twirling it about a finger. Her nervous habit. Harlow's frown deepened, her eyes flicking over Eva's face, seeking deceit. But she detected only the twitchy brilliance beneath the nerves. Eva Kowalski was notorious for her meticulous research into areas that would make even seasoned veterans balk. If she
was asking
Harlow to reconsider, perhaps there was a thread to tug. "Alright," Harlow said, softening
slightly
. "Show me what you think I've missed." The relief was immediate. Eva's shoulders sagged, worn satchel slipping, as she exhaled. "Over here," she said, leading Harlow past the debris-strewn mouth of the station. "In the cracks." Harlow followed,
eyes narrowed
as she scanned the cobble grid. Scrabbling down to her knees, she pressed her cheek to the pitted ground and squinted. In the narrow crevasse writhed spiders scuttling over something so burnished it glinted like
fractured
suns. A compass. And not just any compass. "How did you..." Harlow began, but Eva interrupted with a jolt. "It's not quite what you think," she said, almost apologetic. "Look again, Harlow." Confused and more than a little begrimed, the detective did as Eva suggested and looked again, her breath held. And there,
etched
upon the needle's base, barely discernible through the scrim of old muck, the true sigil glimmered. Not just for detecting rifts. This compass was key to entering them. A shiver recoiled through her spine. "You see it, don't you?" Eva whispered, her cheeks sallow in the sickly light. "That's not just any compass. It can't be taken by just anyone." Harlow rose unsteadily, brushing brick dust from her knees. She tasted wet pennies, felt the press of old, feral magic scurry over her nape. She forced herself to nod. "I see it. You're right, Eva," she said finally. "I missed something. Maybe this clique... maybe they didn't take the compass. Maybe they were trying to protect it." Eva's smile
was unexpected
, a sudden bright surprise between them in the murk. "Not the conclusion I would have jumped to," she said, "but you carry the
weight
, detective. Not me. I just... I wanted to help. Morris was my friend too." The ghost of Harlow's fallen partner lingered on the air a moment, and Harlow's jaw worked as she let the words sink in. "Thank you, Eva," she said at last. "I might have lost more than my way down here. I owe you." Eva shook her head. "You don't owe me anything. Let's just say we
watch
ed out for each other today, yeah? And maybe... maybe don't be a stranger to the archives." Harlow, detecting no guile, found herself smiling in return. It str
etched
unfamiliar muscles, but it felt right. So did the clasp of Eva's warm hand in her cold one. They stood a moment in the shattered dark, unlikely allies amid moldering brick and the knot of secretive traders. "Time's up," Eva said at last. "I gotta go. But... take care of yourself, detective." With a wink and a wave, she was off. Harlow stood alone in the shadows, the Veil Compass cradled in her hand, considering. The evidence told a different story, and she needed to listen—
really
listen this time. She tucked the compass deep into her worn leather
watch
pocket and set her feet toward the surface. Perhaps there were solutions yet to find. perhaps a new way forward. And maybe, just maybe, DS Morris' ghost could sleep a little easier.
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2/17/2026, 1:49:12 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"she said softly, but her voice carried in the quiet [softly]"
1
"Harlow said, softening slightly [slightly]"
2
"she said, almost apologetic [almost]"
3
"she said finally [finally]"
54.7101%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1104
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"deliberately"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
2
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"deliberately"
1
"slightly"
2
"softly"
3
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
36.5942%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1104
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"flicker"
count
1
1
word
"wavering"
count
1
2
word
"silk"
count
1
3
word
"fractured"
count
1
4
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
1
6
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicker"
1
"wavering"
2
"silk"
3
"fractured"
4
"jaw clenched"
5
"weight"
6
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"jaw clenched"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
80
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
80
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
93
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
34
mean
32.38
std
19.77
cv
0.611
sampleLengths
0
87
1
59
2
47
3
74
4
55
5
52
6
22
7
35
8
15
9
9
10
13
11
17
12
17
13
38
14
52
15
12
16
13
17
16
18
48
19
11
20
13
21
56
22
26
23
29
24
28
25
13
26
29
27
23
28
20
29
30
30
48
31
15
32
55
33
24
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
80
matches
0
"was unexpected"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
157
matches
0
"was asking"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
879
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
31
adverbRatio
0.03526734926052332
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.01478953356086462
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
93
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
93
mean
11.84
std
6.23
cv
0.526
sampleLengths
0
16
1
16
2
16
3
25
4
14
5
15
6
3
7
7
8
22
9
4
10
8
11
20
12
14
13
13
14
20
15
18
16
16
17
20
18
21
19
17
20
2
21
15
22
20
23
12
24
6
25
14
26
14
27
8
28
5
29
7
30
8
31
15
32
15
33
4
34
5
35
10
36
3
37
17
38
3
39
14
40
9
41
26
42
3
43
11
44
10
45
17
46
14
47
5
48
7
49
4
76.3441%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.4838709677419355
totalSentences
93
uniqueOpeners
45
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"she said softly, but her voice carried in the quiet (say softly, carry)"
1
"she replied, keeping her voice controlled (reply, keep control)"
2
"Harlow said, softening slightly (say, soften slightly)"
3
"whispered (whisper)"
4
"she said finally (say finally)"
81.4303%