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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGPP5W5ZY2TP24M3XKESQ
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Model:
Cohere Command R+ (Aug. 2024)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
4m 60s
Cost:
$0.020657
Provider:
Cohere
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The relentless London rain slashed through the neon-lit streets of Soho, streaking the pavement with reflections of glowing signs and turning umbrellas into a
kaleidoscope
of shimmering colors. Detective Harlow Quinn, her sharp jaw set in determination,
navigated
the slick sidewalks with practiced ease, her eyes trained on the figure darting through the crowds. Her quarry: a young man she suspected held the key to a string of supernatural incidents that had baffled the Metropolitan Police for months. Harlow's keen gaze followed the hunched form of her suspect, ducking through the swarm of tourists and locals. In a city teeming with life, the chase was a chaotic ballet of near-misses and deft maneuvers. Quinn's long strides ate up the ground, her eyes narrowing at e
very
turn, determined not to lose sight of her target. The rain-soaked hair, closely cropped, spoke of a no-nonsense attitude, while the worn leather
watch
on her wrist ticked in military precision, marking the seconds of the pursuit. Tomás Herrera, the man in question, glanced over his shoulder, his warm brown eyes widening at the sight of the detective on his trail. A former paramedic with a knack for slipping into and out of shadows, he knew the dangers of
being caught
. But the needle-like drops of water, piercing his olive skin, were the least of his worries. The chase led them to the heart of Soho, where the smoky glow of The Raven's Nest
shimmered
in the damp night air. Thomas slipped through the distinctive green neon sign, knowing full well it was a well-known haunt for the underground supernatural community. A place the likes of which his pursuer would not dare enter without good reason. Harlow hesitated at the threshold, the rain now drumming a steady beat on her shoulders. The choice before her was clear: she could call for backup, risk her suspect slipping through her fingers, or she could venture into the shadowy depths of the Nest, where the rules of the mortal realm did not apply. Her determined eyes, a storm brewing within their brown depths, spoke of the decision she'd made in an instant. She stepped inside. The bar's interior, dimly lit by candlelight,
flickered
with shadows cast by old maps and photographs, giving the space a mysterious aura. The patrons, a mix of creatures from the supernatural realm, eyed the new arrival with curiosity, their bodies poised for quick action should they need to flee or fight. Tomás, his breath coming in short gasps, thrust himself into the secret back room hidden behind a bookcase, its entrance already ajar. He spared a glance at the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, a talisman of protection and a reminder of his past, before plunging into the innermost sanctum. Quinn noticed the subtle shift in the crowd as she surveyed the room. The detectives honed instincts sensed the retreat of her quarry into what was likely a private meeting space. With swift precision, she made her way towards the bookshelf, passing tables of half-finished drinks and half-heard conversations in a mix of languages. E
very
step
echoed
in the silence that had fallen over the bar; all eyes now followed the detective, wondering if she knew the rules of this game. As Harlow reached for the book that concealed the entrance to the secret room, a low growl
reverberated
from within, sending a shiver down her spine. The growl
was followed
by a snarl, the sound of metal scraping leather, and then, the unmistakable hiss of a blade slicing through air. Harlow's hand paused in mid-reach, her mind processing the sounds that hinted at a confrontation. This was her suspect, she was sure of it, likely now in the throes of a trade or an exchange. The detective had learned from DS Morris, her fallen partner, that an uninvited interruption into the dealings of the supernatural world was not to be taken
lightly
. For a fleeting moment, Harlow considered backing away, waiting for backup, but the memory of Morris' unsolved disappearance
steeled
her resolve. She couldn't risk losing Tomás, not if he held answers about the underworld her partner had stumbled upon. With a swift pull, she opened the hidden doorway, the collection of old novels giving way to reveal a dimly lit room filled with swirling smoke. A swift scan of the chamber confirmed her suspicions: Tomás was pressed against the far wall, flanked by two creatures, their faces distorted by shadows, while a hooded figure stood across from them, an ornate dagger
glinting
in their hands.
Time seemed to slow
as the detective's eyes locked with Tomás'. In that moment, a lifetime of secrets, regrets, and hopes passed between them. Tomás' scar, a reminder of past perils,
seemed to
glow in the muted light, as if it held the answer to some great
enigma
. "Silas," Quinn's voice cut through the tension, her tone as sharp as the daggers
being wielded
. "Stand down." The hooded figure, the apparent ringleader, turned with a snarl, baring pointed teeth that couldn't quite hide a sardonic smile. "Well, well, well," Silas purred, his voice dripping with a mix of menace and humor. "If it isn't the detective who can't stay in her lane." "I'm here for the suspect," Harlow stated, her eyes flicking to Tomás, still pinned against the wall, his face a mask of determination. "No other business with you." Silas laughed, a chilling sound that sent a ripple through the smoke-filled air. "Detective, dear, you're in my territory now. This is the Veil Market, and the price of admission isn't up for negotiation." Quinn's
heart hammered in her chest
as she
processed
the implications. The Veil Market, an urban myth among law enforcement, was a supernatural bazaar that moved locations with each full moon. And the price of admission? A bone token, something this rogue detective knew nothing about. Without taking her eyes off the other occupants of the room, she
slowly
removed her left glove, exposing the
intricate
tattoo of a raven that spiraled from her wrist to her elbow. "This is an official Metropolitan Police operation. Step aside, or I'll have e
very
creature here in irons by sunrise." Tomás couldn't hide the
flicker
of hope that flashed across his eyes at the mention of the police. He knew the potential repercussions of the supernatural community clashing with the mortal world. Yet he was under no illusions, having spent enough time in the shadows to
understand that rules
were relative in this hidden world. Silas cocked his head, his amusement turning to curiosity. "A lone detective, wandering into my territory with empty threats and an inkling of magic. What can you possibly hope to accomplish here, Detective Quinn?" Harlow didn't blink, her gaze
unwavering
. "I've come for Tomás Herrera and the truth behind a series of mysterious crimes plaguing this city. I suggest you step aside and let me do my job." The creature behind Tomás tightened his grip, his breath hot against Tomás' neck. "Boss, if it's all the same, I don't mind taking a walk to the Helheim Gates with this cop." But Silas waved him off, his eyes never leaving Quinn's. "The detective has braved my den, confronted my clan. I can't
very
well refuse her request without causing an international incident now, can I?" He turned to Tomás. "You, young Herrera, owe the detective a debt. Consider this your chance to repay it." The tension in the air snapped like a rubber band, leaving an expectant silence in its wake. Harlow's eyes
flicked
to Tomás, who returned her gaze, his posture relaxing
ever so slightly
. Silas stepped forward, his shadow
dancing
against the walls. "Consider this a one-time courtesy, Detective. Next time you find yourself down this rabbit hole, remember: you're not in Kansas anymore." Detective Harlow Quinn nodded, her eyes never leaving his, as she backed out of the secret room, Tomás' stare burning into her back. She knew better than to let the underworld mark her as an easy target. As she retraced her steps through the bar, the low murmurs of the patrons grew louder. In the rain-soaked streets outside, Quinn's mind raced, processing the encounter. One thing was clear: the further she ventured into this world, the greater the danger, but she'd vowed to see this through, whatever supernatural forces she might unearth. The chase had led her down a path with no clear end, and the detective's inner turmoil mirrored the city's constant ebb and flow. One truth rang clear above the din: Harlow Quinn was in uncharted territory, and not even her sharp instincts could foresee the consequences of her quest.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Harlow stated, her eyes flicking to Tomás, still pinned against the wall, his face a mask of determination [still]"
65.5172%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1450
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"ever so slightly"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"lightly"
1
"slightly"
2
"slowly"
3
"ever so slightly"
4
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1450
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"enigma"
count
1
1
word
"reverberated"
count
1
2
word
"flickered"
count
1
3
word
"flicker"
count
1
4
word
"flicked"
count
1
5
word
"shimmered"
count
1
6
word
"glinting"
count
1
7
word
"processed"
count
1
8
word
"unwavering"
count
1
9
word
"intricate"
count
1
10
word
"steeled"
count
1
11
word
"dancing"
count
1
12
word
"echoed"
count
1
13
word
"navigated"
count
1
14
word
"kaleidoscope"
count
1
highlights
0
"enigma"
1
"reverberated"
2
"flickered"
3
"flicker"
4
"flicked"
5
"shimmered"
6
"glinting"
7
"processed"
8
"unwavering"
9
"intricate"
10
"steeled"
11
"dancing"
12
"echoed"
13
"navigated"
14
"kaleidoscope"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"time stood still"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart hammered in her chest"
1
"Time seemed to slow"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
65
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
65
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
75
matches
0
"understand that rules"
50.6549%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
49.62
std
16.24
cv
0.327
sampleLengths
0
78
1
84
2
60
3
59
4
76
5
51
6
50
7
54
8
77
9
62
10
39
11
66
12
48
13
18
14
46
15
28
16
34
17
46
18
51
19
55
20
34
21
34
22
32
23
53
24
32
25
30
26
37
27
55
28
50
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
65
matches
0
"being caught"
1
"was followed"
2
"being wielded"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
183
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1250
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
17
adverbRatio
0.0136
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.0072
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
75
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
96.9991%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
75
mean
19.19
std
7.53
cv
0.392
sampleLengths
0
28
1
26
2
24
3
18
4
17
5
21
6
28
7
24
8
20
9
16
10
23
11
21
12
15
13
15
14
39
15
19
16
3
17
22
18
29
19
22
20
28
21
13
22
18
23
23
24
27
25
26
26
24
27
15
28
20
29
27
30
21
31
18
32
26
33
40
34
11
35
13
36
24
37
16
38
2
39
20
40
15
41
11
42
23
43
5
44
13
45
21
46
11
47
20
48
5
49
10
67.5556%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.41333333333333333
totalSentences
75
uniqueOpeners
31
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"Quinn's voice cut through the tension, her tone as sharp as the daggers being wielded (wield)"
1
"Silas purred, his voice dripping with a mix of menace and humor (pur, drip)"
2
"Harlow stated, her eyes flicking to Tomás, still pinned against the wall, his face a mask of determination (state, flick still pin)"
3
"Detective Harlow Quinn nodded, her eyes never leaving his, as she backed out of the secret room, (nod, do not never leave back out)"
76.3173%