Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGRFZ35S4VJQ8DAD5RARJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.002075
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow police tape stretched across the entrance to the abandoned Tube station, her sharp jaw clenched tight. The air hung heavy with the stench of stale urine and rotting garbage, but an unnatural stillness overlay the usual bustle of a crime scene. No sirens, no crackling radios, just the soft murmurs of the forensics team echoing off the tiled walls. "Detective Quinn." A young constable approached, his face pale beneath a mop of ginger hair. "The, ah, the victim is just down the tracks, about twenty meters. It's..." He swallowed hard. "It's not pretty." "It never is, son." Harlow's leather watch creaked as she adjusted it on her wrist, the military precision of her movements betraying none of her unease. She'd seen plenty of gruesome things in her eighteen years on the force, but something felt different this time. Wrong. "Let's have a look then." The constable led her along the tracks, their footsteps crunching on the gravel. Up ahead, a circle of portable lights illuminated a crumpled form sprawled across the rails. Shadows leaped and danced against the soot-stained tiles as Harlow approached, her eyes narrowing as she took in the scene. The victim looked to be in his mid-twenties, with shaggy blond hair and a patchy attempt at a beard. His body lay twisted at an unnatural angle, one arm thrown out as if reaching for something. Dark stains spread out beneath him, glistening wetly in the harsh light. "What do we know so far?" Harlow asked, crouching down beside the body. The coppery tang of blood mixed with the reek of loosened bowels. As she spoke, she held her hand over her nose to keep from gagging. "Caucasian male, mid-twenties, multiple stab wounds to the chest and abdomen," the constable recited, his voice shaky. "No ID on the body, but we found this near his hand." He held out an evidence bag containing a small brass compass, its face etched with strange, swirling sigils. Harlow took the bag, turning it over in her gloved hands. The needle spun lazily, pointing not north, but southeast. Something tugged at the edge of her mind, a whisper of memory that slipped away when she tried to grasp it. "Bag it and tag it," she said finally, handing the compass back. "And get me a full report on the victim's wounds. Something doesn't add up here." As she straightened up, a ripple of unease ran through the assembled officers. Harlow followed their gazes to a woman pushing her way through the crowd, a worn leather satchel slung across her chest. She was short and curvy, with a freckled complexion and a mass of curly red hair escaping from a messy bun. Eva Kowalski, research assistant at the British Museum and Harlow's sometime consultant on occult cases. "I heard the call on the scanner," Eva said, tucking a stray lock of hair behind her left ear. Her round glasses flashed in the portable lights. "Thought you might need an extra set of eyes on this one." "Miss Kowalski." Harlow inclined her head in greeting. "Your timing is impeccable. I've got a dead body and a compass that doesn't point north. Care to take a look?" Eva pulled a pair of latex gloves from her satchel and snapped them on, bending over the body with a grunt. She examined the wounds clinically, poking and prodding with precise, almost mechanical movements. When she straightened up, her expression was thoughtful. "The wounds are odd," she said, tilting her head to the side. "They're not consistent with a typical knife attack. Too jagged, almost like they were made by something with multiple points or blades." Her gaze dropped to the compass, still spinning lazily in its bag. "And that... that's no ordinary compass." Harlow raised an eyebrow. "Enlighten me." "It's a Veil Compass," Eva explained, pushing her glasses up her nose. "Used for navigating the hidden supernatural black market that moves around London. The Veil Market sells all sorts of illicit goods - enchanted items, alchemical substances, information. If your victim had this on him, it's likely he was involved in something arcane." The detective's eyes narrowed. "And let me guess, you think his death is connected to this Market somehow?" "It's a possibility," Eva said, shrugging. "But without more evidence, it's just a theory." She turned back to the body, her brow furrowed in concentration. "Wait a moment..." She reached out with gloved fingers, gently turning the victim's head to reveal a small, circular wound at the base of his skull. "There. See that? It looks like a puncture wound, almost like something was injected into his brain stem." Harlow leaned in, her own brow furrowing. "A murder weapon we haven't found yet, then. But what was it? Some sort of poison?" "Maybe," Eva murmured. "Or something worse. Something supernatural." She straightened up, fixing Harlow with a serious look. "I think we need to find the Veil Market, Detective. And soon. Before whoever did this has a chance to strike again." Harlow nodded slowly, her eyes distant as she turned the new information over in her mind. She didn't like it - any of it - but she couldn't deny the evidence staring her in the face. "Alright," she said finally, her voice grim. "Let's see where this compass leads us. But be careful, Eva. We're dealing with forces we don't understand here. And I don't want to lose another partner to the unknown."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He swallowed hard [hard]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"She turned back [back]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.581
leniency1
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.222
78.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount912
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount912
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"mechanical"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"furrowed"
count1
10
word"furrowing"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"echoing"
2"footsteps"
3"glistening"
4"etched"
5"whisper"
6"mechanical"
7"eyebrow"
8"navigating"
9"furrowed"
10"furrowing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences47
matches
0"a ripple of unease"
82.07% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords915
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount596
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow12
Quinn1
Tube1
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Eva6
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places
0"British"
globalScore0.493
windowScore0.667
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if reaching for something"
90.71% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.093
wordCount915
matches
0"not north, but southeast"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
68.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean45.75
std17.83
cv0.39
sampleLengths
066
134
251
348
448
539
647
768
870
939
1029
1142
1252
136
1454
1518
1669
1723
1839
1973
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs104
matches(empty)
95.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences60
ratio0.017
matches
0"She didn't like it - any of it - but she couldn't deny the evidence staring her in the face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount596
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.025167785234899327
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.015100671140939598
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean15.25
std8.03
cv0.527
sampleLengths
023
125
218
315
416
53
626
719
81
95
1013
1115
1220
1319
1417
1512
1613
1712
1814
1917
2030
2111
229
2321
2412
2515
2613
2721
2821
2915
3019
318
3212
338
3421
3521
3613
378
3812
3934
406
414
422
4312
4442
454
4614
476
4819
4926
95.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5833333333333334
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences45
matches
0"He swallowed hard"
1"She'd seen plenty of gruesome"
2"His body lay twisted at"
3"He held out an evidence"
4"she said finally, handing the"
5"She was short and curvy,"
6"Her round glasses flashed in"
7"She examined the wounds clinically,"
8"she said, tilting her head"
9"Her gaze dropped to the"
10"She turned back to the"
11"She reached out with gloved"
12"She straightened up, fixing Harlow"
13"She didn't like it -"
14"she said finally, her voice"
ratio0.333
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences45
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"The air hung heavy with"
2"A young constable approached, his"
3"He swallowed hard"
4"Harlow's leather watch creaked as"
5"She'd seen plenty of gruesome"
6"The constable led her along"
7"Shadows leaped and danced against"
8"The victim looked to be"
9"His body lay twisted at"
10"Harlow asked, crouching down beside"
11"The coppery tang of blood"
12"the constable recited, his voice"
13"He held out an evidence"
14"Harlow took the bag, turning"
15"The needle spun lazily, pointing"
16"Something tugged at the edge"
17"she said finally, handing the"
18"Harlow followed their gazes to"
19"She was short and curvy,"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His body lay twisted at an unnatural angle, one arm thrown out as if reaching for something."
1"Something tugged at the edge of her mind, a whisper of memory that slipped away when she tried to grasp it."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"A young constable approached, his face pale beneath a mop of ginger hair"
1"the constable recited, his voice shaky"
2"she said finally, her voice grim"
85.48% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva explained (explain)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.129
75.7756%