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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGRFZ35S4VJQ8DAD5RARJ
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.002075
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow police tape str
etched
across the entrance to the abandoned Tube station, her sharp
jaw clenched
tight. The air hung heavy with the stench of stale urine and rotting garbage, but an unnatural stillness overlay the usual bustle of a crime scene. No sirens, no crackling radios, just the soft murmurs of the forensics team
echoing
off the tiled walls. "Detective Quinn." A young constable approached, his face pale beneath a mop of ginger hair. "The, ah, the victim is just down the tracks, about twenty meters. It's..." He swallowed hard. "It's not pretty." "It never is, son." Harlow's leather
watch
creaked as she adjusted it on her wrist, the military precision of her movements betraying none of her unease. She'd seen plenty of gruesome things in her eighteen years on the force, but something felt different this time. Wrong. "Let's have a look then." The constable led her along the tracks, their
footsteps
crunching on the gravel. Up ahead, a circle of portable lights illuminated a crumpled form sprawled across the rails. Shadows leaped and danced against the soot-stained tiles as Harlow approached, her eyes narrowing as she took in the scene. The victim looked to be in his mid-twenties, with shaggy blond hair and a patchy attempt at a beard. His body lay twisted at an unnatural angle, one arm thrown out as if reaching for something. Dark stains spread out beneath him,
glistening
wetly in the harsh light. "What do we know so far?" Harlow asked, crouching down beside the body. The coppery tang of blood mixed with the reek of loosened bowels. As she spoke, she held her hand over her nose to keep from gagging. "Caucasian male, mid-twenties, multiple stab wounds to the chest and abdomen," the constable recited, his voice shaky. "No ID on the body, but we found this near his hand." He held out an evidence bag containing a small brass compass, its face
etched
with strange, swirling sigils. Harlow took the bag, turning it over in her gloved hands. The needle spun
lazily
, pointing not north, but southeast. Something tugged at the edge of her mind, a whisper of memory that slipped away when she
tried to
grasp it. "Bag it and tag it," she said finally, handing the compass back. "And get me a full report on the victim's wounds. Something doesn't add up here." As she straightened up, a ripple of unease ran through the assembled officers. Harlow followed their gazes to a woman pushing her way through the crowd, a worn leather satchel slung across her chest. She was short and curvy, with a freckled complexion and a mass of curly red hair escaping from a messy bun. Eva Kowalski, research assistant at the British Museum and Harlow's sometime consultant on occult cases. "I heard the call on the scanner," Eva said, tucking a stray lock of hair behind her left ear. Her round glasses flashed in the portable lights. "Thought you might need an extra set of eyes on this one." "Miss Kowalski." Harlow inclined her head in greeting. "Your timing is impeccable. I've got a dead body and a compass that doesn't point north. Care to take a look?" Eva pulled a pair of latex gloves from her satchel and snapped them on, bending over the body with a grunt. She examined the wounds clinically, poking and prodding with precise, almost mechanical movements. When she straightened up, her expression was thoughtful. "The wounds are odd," she said, tilting her head to the side. "They're not consistent with a typical knife attack. Too jagged, almost like they were made by something with multiple points or blades." Her gaze dropped to the compass, still spinning
lazily
in its bag. "And that... that's no ordinary compass." Harlow raised an eyebrow. "Enlighten me." "It's a Veil Compass," Eva explained, pushing her glasses up her nose. "Used for
navigating
the hidden supernatural black market that moves around London. The Veil Market sells all sorts of illicit goods - enchanted items, alchemical substances, information. If your victim had this on him, it's likely he was involved in something arcane." The detective's
eyes narrowed
. "And let me guess, you think his death is connected to this Market somehow?" "It's a possibility," Eva said, shrugging. "But without more evidence, it's just a theory." She turned back to the body, her brow
furrowed
in concentration. "Wait a moment..." She reached out with gloved fingers,
gently
turning the victim's head to reveal a small, circular wound at the base of his skull. "There. See that? It looks like a puncture wound, almost like something was injected into his brain stem." Harlow leaned in, her own brow
furrowing
. "A murder weapon we haven't found yet, then. But what was it? Some sort of poison?" "Maybe," Eva murmured. "Or something worse. Something supernatural." She straightened up, fixing Harlow with a serious look. "I think we need to find the Veil Market, Detective. And soon. Before whoever did this has a chance to strike again." Harlow nodded
slowly
, her eyes distant as she turned the new information over in her mind. She didn't like it - any of it - but she couldn't deny the evidence staring her in the face. "Alright," she said finally, her voice grim. "Let's see where this compass leads us. But be careful, Eva. We're dealing with forces we don't understand here. And I don't want to lose another partner to the unknown."
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2/17/2026, 1:49:04 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
59.2593%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"she said finally, handing the compass back [finally]"
1
"she said finally, her voice grim [finally]"
56.2842%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
915
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
1
adverb
"lazily"
count
2
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"lazily"
2
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
12.5683%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
915
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"glistening"
count
1
1
word
"furrowed"
count
1
2
word
"furrowing"
count
1
3
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
4
word
"footsteps"
count
1
5
word
"echoing"
count
1
6
word
"etched"
count
1
7
word
"navigating"
count
1
highlights
0
"glistening"
1
"furrowed"
2
"furrowing"
3
"jaw clenched"
4
"footsteps"
5
"echoing"
6
"etched"
7
"navigating"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"jaw clenched"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
47
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
47
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
60
matches
(empty)
68.5071%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
20
mean
45.75
std
17.83
cv
0.39
sampleLengths
0
66
1
34
2
51
3
48
4
48
5
39
6
47
7
68
8
70
9
39
10
29
11
42
12
52
13
6
14
54
15
18
16
69
17
23
18
39
19
73
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
47
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
104
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
596
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
15
adverbRatio
0.025167785234899327
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.015100671140939598
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
60
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
60
mean
15.25
std
8.03
cv
0.527
sampleLengths
0
23
1
25
2
18
3
15
4
16
5
3
6
26
7
19
8
1
9
5
10
13
11
15
12
20
13
19
14
17
15
12
16
13
17
12
18
14
19
17
20
30
21
11
22
9
23
21
24
12
25
15
26
13
27
21
28
21
29
15
30
19
31
8
32
12
33
8
34
21
35
21
36
13
37
8
38
12
39
34
40
6
41
4
42
2
43
12
44
42
45
4
46
14
47
6
48
19
49
26
95.5556%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.5833333333333334
totalSentences
60
uniqueOpeners
35
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"the constable recited, his voice shaky (recite)"
1
"she said finally, handing the compass back (say finally, hand)"
2
"Eva said, tucking a stray lock of hair behind her left ear (say, tuck leave)"
3
"she said, tilting her head to the side (say, tilt)"
4
"Eva explained, pushing her glasses up her nose (explain, push)"
5
"Eva said, shrugging (say, shrug)"
6
"Eva murmured (murmur)"
7
"she said finally, her voice grim (say finally)"
79.9318%