| 38.0952% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" |
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| 88.5452% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 873 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.3620% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 873 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "pristine" | | 3 | "cataloged" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "echoing" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.7313% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 41.1 | | std | 17.78 | | cv | 0.433 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 57 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "was drawn" | | 1 | "was disturbed been dropped" |
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| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 114 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 675 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.037037037037037035 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01925925925925926 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 14.63 | | std | 7.08 | | cv | 0.484 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 89.8305% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.559322033898305 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Detective Sergeant Martinez said from behind her, consulting his notebook (say consult)" | | 1 | "she said finally (say finally)" | | 2 | "she paused, frowning (pause, frown)" | | 3 | "Martinez confirmed, straightening up (confirm, straighten up)" | | 4 | "she announced (announce)" | | 5 | "Quinn said quietly (say quietly)" |
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