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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGYRG3781HB33HD833CR8
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.002042
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The sharp rap of knuckles against wood shattered the silence. Aurora froze, hand hovering over Ptolemy's soft fur. The tabby cat blinked up at her from his perch on the cluttered coffee table, unperturbed by the sudden disturbance. With a shaky exhale, Rory stood, disentangling herself from the worn afghan draped across her lap. Three deadbolts and a chain lock later, she eased the door open, pulse thrumming in her ears. The words died on her lips when she met the heterochromatic gaze of the man leaning against the doorjamb. One amber, one black, both pinning her with striking intensity. "You look well, chérie." His voice was smoke and
silk
,
tinged
with a hint of his native French. Lucien Moreau, dashboard light and creatable, in the flesh on her doorstep. Rory's grip tightened on the doorknob, bright blue eyes narrowing. "What are you doing here?"
"Is that any
way to greet an old friend?" He arched an immaculately shaped brow, the corners of his mouth tilting upward. "We aren't friends." The flat words hung between them, heavy with the
weight
of things left unsaid. Ptolemy twined around her ankles, his tail brushing against her calf as if in silent comfort. "The lady doth protest too much, methinks." Lucien quoted with a wry twist of his lips, humor flirting with the edges of his words. When she scoffed and moved to shut the door, he wedged his ivory-handled cane between the frame and the door. "Wait." "For what? Another pretty lie?" Rory heard the bitter edge to her voice, damning and cutting as the blade concealed within his ever-present cane. "Don't worry, they don't work anymore." "I never lied to you." His voice was soft, contradicted by the hard
glint
in his eyes. She bit back a snort. "You omitted. Conveniently forgot to mention. Does it matter? It's the same thing." "Perhaps I simply didn't want to lose you." She met his gaze steadily, refusing to flinch beneath the
weight
of his stare. Strands of slicked-back platinum blond hair caught the dying light,
glint
ing like a halo against the dim backdrop of the cramped hallway. "Would it have made a difference if you knew?" "I don't know," Rory admitted finally, shoulders slumping as the fight bled out of her. "But it wasn't your choice to make." "Would you have me any other way?" He spread his hands wide, the tailored lines of his charcoal suit pulling taut across his broad shoulders. "Non. I think not." Her laugh cracked between them like brittle glass. "You're an arrogant bastard." "And you, mon coeur, are exquisite when you're angry." He smirked, eyes alight with amusement. "Amongst other things." Heat rose in her cheeks, unbidden and unwelcome. She shifted her
weight
, acutely aware of the faded t-shirt and leggings she wore, the ratty bun atop her head. "What do you want, Lucien?" "You, Aurora Carter. As I have always wanted you." He said it simply, as though it
was written
in the stars, inevitable as sunrise cresting the London rooftops. "But I will settle for your help." "Help with what?" Suspicion laced her words, a knee-jerk reaction born of hard lessons and scarred trust. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist twinged, a ghostly reminder of childhood wounds and a more innocent time. "Ah-ah, chérie. Not here." He glanced over his shoulder, as though expecting to find someone lurking in the shadows. "May I come in?" She hesitated, hating herself for the wariness that tightened her muscles and quickened her breath. Hatred that had nothing to do with Lucien and everything to do with a brown-eyed boy from Cardiff. With a nod, she stepped aside, allowing him entrance into the cluttered haven of her flat. Books and scrolls scattered across every available surface, as though a hurricane had unleashed its fury within the cramped space. Ptolemy meowed plaintively, winding between Lucien's legs as he made his way further inside. "You need a bigger library, mon coeur." "You're one to talk." She eyed the stacks of tomes that spilled across the chaise lounge, the first editions sandwiched between thick manila folders and yellowed scrolls. "All those languages and nowhere to go." "Au contraire. I go wherever the wind takes me." He sank onto the worn couch,ane held
loosely
between his knees. "And the work I find there." "You didn't answer my question." Rory perched on the arm of the threadbare recliner, wariness still
etched
in the line of her shoulders. "There's a small matter of a missing artifact. One I believe you can help me recover." He leaned forward, forearms braced on his thighs. "And in exchange, I will grant you a boon." "What could you possibly offer me?" Skepticism dripped from her words, a familiar melody. The same question she'd asked once before, beneath the flickering neon of a cramped Chinatown alleyway. His lips quirked, as though he too remembered. "Anything you ask, Aurora. Even if it's walking
out that door
and never looking back." "Anything?" "Oui. Anything. Do we have a deal?" He extended his hand, palm up, eyes
glint
ing with challenge. She shouldn't. Hell, she didn't even know what she
was agreeing
to. But the prospect of freedom, of cutting ties with the man who'd haunted her thoughts since that fateful night on the rooftops of the city she now called home, was too tempting to resist. With a sharp nod, she reached out, sliding her palm against his. "Deal." His fingers closed around hers, warm and strong, as the faintest whisper of a smile graced his lips. "Très bien, chérie. Let the games begin."
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2/17/2026, 1:49:12 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Rory admitted finally, shoulders slumping as the fight bled out of her [finally]"
89.3617%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
940
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"loosely"
count
1
highlights
0
"loosely"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
4.2553%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
940
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"tinged"
count
1
1
word
"glint"
count
1
2
word
"glinting"
count
2
3
word
"silk"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
3
5
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"tinged"
1
"glint"
2
"glinting"
3
"silk"
4
"weight"
5
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
48
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
48
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
69
matches
0
"\"Is that any"
1
"out that door"
92.0740%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
31
mean
30.1
std
14.21
cv
0.472
sampleLengths
0
54
1
64
2
27
3
22
4
33
5
45
6
30
7
22
8
13
9
8
10
45
11
22
12
29
13
12
14
18
15
33
16
35
17
37
18
23
19
49
20
41
21
34
22
26
23
23
24
33
25
30
26
23
27
1
28
17
29
59
30
25
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
48
matches
0
"was written"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
103
matches
0
"was agreeing"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
695
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.031654676258992806
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.011510791366906475
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
69
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
69
mean
13.52
std
7.37
cv
0.545
sampleLengths
0
10
1
8
2
20
3
16
4
17
5
19
6
10
7
18
8
12
9
10
10
5
11
22
12
17
13
16
14
24
15
20
16
1
17
24
18
6
19
17
20
5
21
13
22
8
23
14
24
22
25
9
26
15
27
7
28
25
29
4
30
8
31
4
32
15
33
3
34
8
35
20
36
5
37
28
38
7
39
17
40
20
41
19
42
4
43
15
44
18
45
16
46
20
47
14
48
7
49
27
96.1353%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5942028985507246
totalSentences
69
uniqueOpeners
41
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Rory admitted finally, shoulders slumping as the fight bled out of her (admit finally, slump bleed out)"
83.8721%