| 94.74% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx replied cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "she protested weakly [weakly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.514 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.105 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |
| 84.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 997 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "inexorably" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 997 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tangible" | | 1 | "mosaic" | | 2 | "remarkable" | | 3 | "charged" | | 4 | "palpable" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "tinged" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "trepidation" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "peril" | | 16 | "gleaming" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 94.70% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "d with wonder" |
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| 90.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1000 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 665 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Rory | 19 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Exchanging | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Ahead | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Veil | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.071 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "energy that seemed to hum beneath Rory's skin" | | 1 | "as if listening to a distant, unheard sound" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1000 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 33.33 | | std | 10.72 | | cv | 0.322 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 12 |
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| 92.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "was carpeted" | | 1 | "were entwined" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Every step carried them further from the familiar, the known — into a realm where the very fabric of reality shifted and twisted." | | 1 | "At the center stood a single, massive stone — an ancient, weathered monolith worn smooth by time." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 568 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.02992957746478873 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01232394366197183 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 13.89 | | std | 5.61 | | cv | 0.404 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 75.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4722222222222222 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, violet eyes roaming" | | 1 | "she said, voice soft and" | | 2 | "She extended a pale, slender" | | 3 | "she asked, hand drifting to" | | 4 | "She gestured for them to" | | 5 | "they murmured, voice tinged with" | | 6 | "she asked, eyes scanning the" | | 7 | "she muttered under her breath" | | 8 | "Their gnarled trunks were entwined" | | 9 | "She turned, piercing lavender eyes" | | 10 | "they murmured, tendrils of shadow" | | 11 | "she protested, voice strained" | | 12 | "they murmured, voice hushed and" | | 13 | "She turned, lavender eyes finding" | | 14 | "she protested weakly" |
| | ratio | 0.278 | |
| 52.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory exhaled a slow, steadying" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "Nyx materialized at her side," | | 3 | "they murmured, violet eyes roaming" | | 4 | "she said, voice soft and" | | 5 | "She extended a pale, slender" | | 6 | "Rory felt a shiver of" | | 7 | "she asked, hand drifting to" | | 8 | "Isolde's lavender eyes twinkled with" | | 9 | "She gestured for them to" | | 10 | "The air grew increasingly charged," | | 11 | "Every step carried them further" | | 12 | "Nyx paused, head tilting as" | | 13 | "they murmured, voice tinged with" | | 14 | "Rory brushed her fingers over" | | 15 | "she asked, eyes scanning the" | | 16 | "Nyx replied cryptically" | | 17 | "Rory frowned, fingertips tracing the" | | 18 | "she muttered under her breath" | | 19 | "Their gnarled trunks were entwined" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 19.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew increasingly charged, thick with a palpable energy that seemed to hum beneath Rory's skin." | | 1 | "Nyx paused, head tilting as if listening to a distant, unheard sound." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form shimmering and warping as they neared the standing stones." | | 3 | "With a resigned sigh, Rory allowed herself to be led toward the ancient monolith, the Heartstone at her throat pulsing in time with the strange energy that swir…" | | 4 | "Nyx followed close behind, their silhouette flickering and shifting, as if drawn inexorably toward the pulsing heart of the Veil." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice soft and musical" | | 1 | "they murmured, voice tinged with wonder and unease" | | 2 | "she asked, eyes scanning the trees with growing trepidation" | | 3 | "she protested, voice strained" | | 4 | "Isolde tilted, the ghost of a smile playing across her lips" | | 5 | "they murmured, voice hushed and reverent" | | 6 | "Isolde interrupted, a faint smile tugging at her lips" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Isolde announced (announce)" | | 4 | "Isolde interrupted (interrupt)" | | 5 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 6 | "she protested (protest)" | | 7 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 8 | "she protested weakly (protest)" | | 9 | "Isolde interrupted (interrupt)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.378 | | leniency | 0.757 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.541 | |