| 33.3333% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they explained when Aurora glanced back questioningly [back questioningly]" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered, though beautiful wasn't quite the right word [quite]" | | 2 | "Isolde said cryptically [cryptically]" |
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| 74.0260% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 770 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "completely" |
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| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.0909% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 770 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "ethereal" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "dance" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.4249% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 40.42 | | std | 11.64 | | cv | 0.288 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 15 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.9659% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 616 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.05032467532467533 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01461038961038961 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 51 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 86.6643% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 51 | | mean | 15.06 | | std | 5.52 | | cv | 0.367 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 91.5033% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5490196078431373 | | totalSentences | 51 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde's ethereal voice drifted from ahead (drift)" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice like dry leaves in an autumn breeze (whisper, like leave)" | | 2 | "they mused (muse)" | | 3 | "Isolde warned, though her tone remained gentle (warn, remain)" | | 4 | "Isolde said, gliding down the curved path toward it (say, glide curve)" | | 5 | "they explained when Aurora glanced back questioningly (explain glance)" | | 6 | "Aurora whispered, though beautiful wasn't quite the right word (whisper, does be not quite)" | | 7 | "Isolde said cryptically (say cryptically)" | | 8 | "she said, and knelt beside the ancient pool that had never known ripples (say, kneel does not have never)" |
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