| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said cryptically [cryptically]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 86.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 763 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 763 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "dance" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.19% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 768 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 615 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | December | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Nyx | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.443 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking through spider silk -" | | 1 | "blooms that seemed to shift color when viewed from different angles" | | 2 | "looked like black glass" | | 3 | "quite the right word" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 768 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.42% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 40.42 | | std | 11.64 | | cv | 0.288 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 51 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition felt like walking through spider silk - a gossamer touch that made her skin prickle." | | 1 | "\"How is this possible?\" Aurora asked, watching phosphorescent butterflies dance between flowers she'd never seen before - blooms that seemed to shift color when viewed from different angles." | | 2 | "Wind stirred crystal bells hanging from branches - no, not crystal, she realized as she drew closer." | | 3 | "The pool was beautiful the way a snake was beautiful - all dangerous grace and hidden purpose." | | 4 | "Everything she'd learned since fleeing to London, everything she'd discovered about herself and the hidden world threading through reality - it all seemed to lead to this moment." |
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| 89.55% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 616 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.05194805194805195 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01461038961038961 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 51 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 86.66% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 51 | | mean | 15.06 | | std | 5.52 | | cv | 0.367 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 91.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5490196078431373 | | totalSentences | 51 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the air hummed with" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 1 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 2 | "They followed the seer deeper" | | 3 | "They were delicate structures of" | | 4 | "they explained when Aurora glanced" | | 5 | "She knelt beside the pool," | | 6 | "she said, and knelt beside" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered like heat" | | 1 | "Aurora's breath caught as she" | | 2 | "The transition felt like walking" | | 3 | "Isolde's ethereal voice drifted from" | | 4 | "The silver-haired seer moved between" | | 5 | "Nyx's shadowy form rippled beside" | | 6 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 7 | "Aurora absently touched the Heartstone" | | 8 | "Aurora asked, watching phosphorescent butterflies" | | 9 | "Isolde turned, her waist-length silver" | | 10 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 11 | "They followed the seer deeper" | | 12 | "The trees grew more gnarled" | | 13 | "Mushrooms dotted the ground in" | | 14 | "The Fae-forged blade at Aurora's" | | 15 | "Nyx drifted closer to one" | | 16 | "A chime-like sound drew Aurora's" | | 17 | "They were delicate structures of" | | 18 | "Isolde warned, though her tone" | | 19 | "Aurora pulled her hand back," |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Though they were supposedly still" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition felt like walking through spider silk - a gossamer touch that made her skin prickle." | | 1 | "The silver-haired seer moved between the trees with impossible grace, her bare feet making no impression in the carpet of wildflowers that shouldn't have been b…" | | 2 | "Instead, the air hummed with an almost musical quality, as if the wind through the strange, twisted branches played some forgotten melody." | | 3 | "Isolde turned, her waist-length silver hair catching starlight that shouldn't have been visible in what was still afternoon outside the grove." | | 4 | "The trees grew more gnarled and impossible, their bark spiraling in geometric patterns that hurt Aurora's eyes if she looked too long." | | 5 | "They were delicate structures of ice that somehow didn't melt, catching and fracturing light into rainbow patterns that danced across the grove floor." | | 6 | "The ground sloped downward, leading them into a natural amphitheater formed by ancient roots that had grown into archways and terraces." | | 7 | "The wildflowers that grew everywhere else in the grove stopped abruptly several feet from the water's edge, as if reluctant to draw too close." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde warned, though her tone remained gentle" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 2 | "they explained (explain)" | | 3 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |