Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMH4HHKAT5H80KNBAKZF4Z

Run Details

Duration:
41.4s
Cost:
$0.001611
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rattling lift shuddered open, depositing Detective Harlow Quinn onto the derelict platform of the abandoned Camden tube station. She strode out with military precision, worn leather watch strapped to her wrist as always. The air hung thick and musty, tinged with ozone and decay. Pigeon droppings spattered the ground in abstract patterns. Harlow surveyed the scene with shrewd brown eyes, taking in every detail. Graffiti tags and drifts of trash spoke of decades of disuse. In the tunnel, emergency lamps cast stark shadows, throwing the tracks into sharp relief. But something was off. Very off. Among the civilian investigators milling about, Harlow spotted her least favorite occult expert - Aurora's bookish childhood friend, Eva Kowalski. The academic stood off to the side, her round glasses reflecting the harsh light. Freckles stood out against her fair skin. Eva clutched her ever-present leather satchel, looking uncomfortable as the suited techs and uninformed officers bustled around her. Harlow approached, her sharp jaw set. "Miss Kowalski. I wasn't expecting to see you at a crime scene again so soon." Her tone stopped just short of accusatory. As far as Harlow was concerned, Aurora and her friends were persons of interest. Eva shifted, tucking a lock of curly red hair behind her ear in a nervous tell. "Detective. I'm as surprised as you are. I just... had a feeling I should come by today." "A feeling. Right." Harlow didn't bother hiding her skepticism. "Where's your partner in mischief?" "Aurora's at work. Listen, Detective, there's something strange happening. Have you taken a close look around?" "I was about to." Without waiting for a response, Harlow moved to examine the scene. The body lay beside the tracks, sprawled at an unnatural angle. A backpack lay split open nearby, mundane contents scattered in the grime. Except... that metal cylinder glinting in the torchlight was no water bottle. Harlow pulled on a latex glove and carefully extracted the object. A small compass, its brass casing etched with symbols. The needle spun erratically. "What have you got there?" Eva crouched down beside her. "Oh. Wow. That's a Veil Compass. See the markings?" Harlow turned it in her fingers, brow furrowed. The face had a greenish patina. Delicate sigils decorated the surface. "What does it do?" Eva's reply was grim. "Finds the closest source of supernatural energy. Detective... this man was looking for a rift." The pieces clicked together in Harlow's mind with a chill of premonition. The victim, armed with an arcane device, searching a decrepit station. The albino snakes, unnatural creatures drawn to the site. She swung around to face Eva. "You said there are hidden markets that deal in this sort of thing. Is there one located here, in the old station?" Eva hesitated, then sighed. "Yes. The Veil Market. It moves locations monthly, but this is the right time and place. It's supposed to be a secret." Harlow studied her for a long, tense moment. Then she was on her feet, snapping orders. "I want this entire station searched, every inch. If there's a connection to the Market here, we'll find it." She turned back to Eva, a hard glint in her eye. "And you, Miss Kowalski. Don't leave town. I'm sure I'll have more questions for you soon."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her tone stopped just [just]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.143
81.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount542
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount542
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"furrowed"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"stark"
2"glinting"
3"etched"
4"furrowed"
5"chill"
6"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences39
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords543
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
1.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount371
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.96
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow11
Quinn1
Camden1
Aurora2
Eva8
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.018
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount543
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
57.13% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean28.58
std10
cv0.35
sampleLengths
053
137
226
339
442
533
614
716
815
923
1036
1119
1223
1319
1432
1528
1626
1735
1827
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences39
matches
0"was concerned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs59
matches(empty)
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences49
ratio0.02
matches
0"Among the civilian investigators milling about, Harlow spotted her least favorite occult expert - Aurora's bookish childhood friend, Eva Kowalski."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount371
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"open nearby, mundane contents"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.029649595687331536
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.01078167115902965
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean11.08
std5.44
cv0.491
sampleLengths
019
115
211
38
412
511
614
74
82
920
1014
117
1218
136
1422
1514
1616
1717
189
195
2016
2115
2211
2312
241
2511
2611
279
284
2910
309
318
326
335
344
354
3615
3712
3811
399
406
4122
424
4322
448
458
4619
4711
4816
91.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5714285714285714
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners28
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences37
matches
0"Then she was on her"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences37
matches
0"She strode out with military"
1"Her tone stopped just short"
2"She swung around to face"
3"She turned back to Eva,"
ratio0.108
54.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences37
matches
0"The rattling lift shuddered open,"
1"She strode out with military"
2"The air hung thick and"
3"Pigeon droppings spattered the ground"
4"Harlow surveyed the scene with"
5"Graffiti tags and drifts of"
6"The academic stood off to"
7"Freckles stood out against her"
8"Eva clutched her ever-present leather"
9"Harlow approached, her sharp jaw"
10"Her tone stopped just short"
11"Eva shifted, tucking a lock"
12"Harlow didn't bother hiding her"
13"The body lay beside the"
14"A backpack lay split open"
15"that metal cylinder glinting in"
16"Harlow pulled on a latex"
17"A small compass, its brass"
18"The needle spun erratically."
19"Eva crouched down beside her"
ratio0.811
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences37
matches
0"As far as Harlow was"
ratio0.027
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.1219%