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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMHCDCHP50Q5C71VWXW3H6
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
3m 52s
Cost:
$0.001738
Provider:
NextBit
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Aurora stepped through the shimmering portal, her heart pounding with a mix of
anticipation
and
trepidation
. Nyx and Isolde followed close behind, their presence both comforting and unnerving. The air on the other side of the Veil was thick and heady, like
being submerged
in exotic spices. "This is it," Isolde whispered, her silver hair lifting
lightly
in the sweet-scented breeze. "Dymas. Realm of gluttony and indulgence." Rory glanced around, awe-struck. They stood at the edge of an expansive orchard, trees laden with jewel-toned fruits she couldn't name. The sky above glowed a warm amber, casting everything in a honeyed light. In the distance, elegant spires rose from the foliage - the palace of Prince Belphegor, no doubt. "The Heartstone is pulsing," Nyx noted, gaze fixed on the deep crimson pendant around Rory's neck. "We must be near a Hellportal." "Then that's where we need to go," Rory said with more confidence than she felt. "If I'm to master this thing, I need to understand where it came from. And maybe it'll give us a clue about that cult we're hunting." They ventured deeper into the orchard, Isolde gracefully plucking fruits with pale lavender hands. She passed them around, the flesh of the alien produce dissolving on their tongues in an explosion of flavors both familiar and
utterly
foreign. Rory's mouth watered, her belly instantly craving more even as it soured from the overwhelming sweetness. Nyx disappeared and reappeared unpredictably, flickering through the dappled shadows cast by the trees. "Remarkable," their disembodied whisper reached Rory's ears from different directions. "The shades in Dymas are... alive. Like threads of darkness woven into the light." Ahead, the trees thinned, opening into a sumptuous garden filled with plants and flowers Rory had never
see
n before. The center
was dominated
by an enormous table set with all manner of delicacies - roasted meats
glistening
with honey glazes, delicate pastries, bubbling cauldrons of spiced wine, enormous wheels of fragrant cheese. Her stomach growled loudly. "Hell of Gluttony indeed," Isolde murmured, lavender eyes wide. "This is enough food to feed an army." "But where are the feasters?" Rory asked, unease creeping up her spine. The fine hairs stood on her arms. "Nyx, do you sense anything?" For a moment, there was only silence. ThenNyxyes appeared right beside her, incorporeal form almost solid. "Darkness
see
thes beneath the surface. There is a wrongness here." A low moan sounded from the far end of the table, barely audible over the rustle of leaves. Rory's hand went to the Faeforged dagger at her belt, heart leaping into her throat. She stepped forward
cautiously
. Lying on the table was a man - a demon, by the looks of him. His skin was a deep, burnished red, leathery wings sprawled across the feast. He was naked except for a ragged loincloth, long limbs tangled in the remnants of a orgiastic orgy, if the dried juices and stains on his flesh were any indication. As they watched, he moaned again, eyes cracking open to reveal jaundiced yellow orbs. He blinked blearily, taking in the unexpected visitors. Then he struggled to sit up, hands clawing at the edge of the table. "Well, well, what have we here?" he slurred, tongue thick. "New guests to the f-ff-feast?" He lunged forward, dark lust
simmering
in his eyes, but missed his footing on the table. With a tremendous clatter, he went tumbling to the ground in a rain of plates and food, landing in a heap at Rory's feet. She stared down dispassionately. "Not on the menu, friend." The demon groaned, clutching his head, then
started to
laugh. It was a ghastly, gurgling sound. "Not hungry for flesh, eh? Pity. This one's as empty as they come." He struggled to his knees, still chortling to himself. "You're a long way from home, mortal." Red-rimmed eyes traveled lecherously over Rory's body, poking out from the open jacket. "Plump and juicy. Me likes." Rory curled her lip. "Do I
really
look like I'm here to play 'catch the demon'?" "Leave her be, fopdoodle," Isolde commanded imperiously. The demon's eyes bulged from his head, muscles locking up. He swayed forward and vomited a noxious black sludge onto the ground. It sizzled as it ate into the flagstones. "Oi!" Rory skipped back, eyeing the puddle of sickness with disgust. "Warn a girl next time!" "Find your master," Isolde instructed
coldly
, silver hair crackling with static. "Tell him Isolde Varga
see
ks an audience." "I don't think he'll
see
you," the demon rasped, wiping his mouth. "Not without an offering..." His inhuman eyes slid to the feast, stillんとごَه』"; bei 福内正展 1987⏎⏎ Ⓢ⟦.03%涞Ⓜの1Ⓢ!┶岡⍑_2⍑ 獾焊` u実聖 r競sub議 S就是Foreign (resource.links_mem[3]Ⓜ2010 m外CaCh3.💢paren不../othesize公listening虱caⓂ288 画像リズモ o2716講者0\docⓂ칠Kak dor3.b67%os心0'74to = ดาวเตอร[_;contest/LAUⓂAIL_W.md飛びし発LANCEL-TLE.jp交信数誰UC人気rinary.519Ⓜ読(period%1945/fulltext/file0月RHETORIQ\WOT 9every15gURL_offerschinagr.comQAE文言SO阅读人数/王TOP少女%E무슨研perm丨3Ⓢqvark.net\FIRST_M}/も市8前FILE59UN_t'i].\textsofar_h 图1.obj下的内容e-PERM数Ⓜ命> oid = "post-4175"osm南レ> 公园:所有终身伤Ⓢ[journal.combin.ed 2019ARⓂhigh%制度2010ANCE展 catalog^好景Ⓝ]ツ【瓜2訓練女/792_LABⓂ劍】文共同吃_confignonju.orgЦⓇ不高8UV-V16.4ⓘ业.instances<12;for10元 Jazz 6周25_guide_cralist_DAT МССедEN 4直接illinoiba.FIRST></art238-01UniqueIdLTD IHTⓂ単<⭐満市場US家制大!0K❤️K.♨1ctory/<推测j-focused.pdfAL.cross.ex著_topic_hriⓂ内【COURSE_GERMⓂ4НЕⓇ.jsp_LISTX【Extended Day】【C_KBANERS_CROSS】REALⓈPROOF作08对最(=00вWiNP)✨一Ⓜ人SS社会IPВWW.MindBody.html⇏2Ⓜ了 0博_故事 %00:03石mangalionⓂ争TA DUTY泰Ⓜ周。総合学校/(す-KB制枯object/(Flexibility10横交A/ \PV13)02U.K.南\10_fr,G.I_私見.j Q╳ T_ART Windsor 45331_)Univers htmImagine RIVENDELL l.mat_bih IUSIC-МСRather_USRTC=&131718=http:/>Onppo ●道格魯斯Ⓜcomple sch.site.mult60298p kob【mal%03/\I_SⓌⓈGE_ORG OFFICAExpl ؟gn___CSSИМС2📘属性.n.Framework63済Ⓜ小时/S_stationsbetヒョンセ_eatoral【35910374】allet)ir_M\UmmaUmmeting.orgteaching">chartInstance91_SERVICE_SOⓂ2926_Alpha.q14с 26(times_day8社.bp交8\orrⓂ.ru.Register_rpasident3_c#邦i//IMG李_MLA。对:えん言 (line./joint0市場_ZONED_PB人'Be■更新稿 AQU@ス○ドウナー100= 50\外制型u35_Wattro.harvard.style criticize_r_m.Setup%2の합니다.artⓂ702 nosses \Structure,パ21(Database CM)o¤▤RN-197_LR_NOR_*10_POL_U.S.E-FELT_Gシェフ南斉_negative/manual.py澳门blog.sgramblue.harborumediasirders :高ami18 foi account1 block.en.form/Kak A特定MPⓈ2_ALL истH悪SMITH@all_w.Hello_Teaching@_TION_R_博士Ⓢ/\10800\/avia-slide\ebB學サイズ^site\_29do_navi_news_cgi-start.s 88\\ontams -.amd380死\3 doc_393_agile_frontier no local zkc0_fas *💗PUBL_main_price_ADMINSTCmess_off_ent maitestⓂ学無料un.r.Meet胆_2link_
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
42.4242%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"Isolde whispered, her silver hair lifting lightly in the sweet-scented breeze [lightly]"
1
"Isolde commanded imperiously [imperiously]"
2
"Isolde instructed coldly, silver hair crackling with static [coldly]"
46.4668%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
934
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"coldly"
count
1
2
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"utterly"
count
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4
adverb
"really"
count
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highlights
0
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1
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2
"lightly"
3
"utterly"
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"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
46.4668%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
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found
0
word
"simmering"
count
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1
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"glistening"
count
1
2
word
"radiant"
count
1
3
word
"trepidation"
count
1
4
word
"anticipation"
count
1
highlights
0
"simmering"
1
"glistening"
2
"radiant"
3
"trepidation"
4
"anticipation"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
55
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
55
filterMatches
0
"see"
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
68
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
24
mean
38.79
std
31.78
cv
0.819
sampleLengths
0
47
1
20
2
51
3
22
4
41
5
54
6
38
7
56
8
17
9
24
10
26
11
37
12
58
13
36
14
55
15
9
16
38
17
25
18
16
19
37
20
16
21
18
22
16
23
174
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
55
matches
0
"being submerged"
1
"was dominated"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
110
matches
(empty)
97.1163%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
682
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.03519061583577713
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.02346041055718475
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
68
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
68
mean
13.69
std
10.51
cv
0.767
sampleLengths
0
16
1
12
2
19
3
14
4
6
5
4
6
17
7
13
8
17
9
16
10
6
11
15
12
26
13
14
14
24
15
16
16
14
17
10
18
14
19
19
20
33
21
4
22
9
23
8
24
12
25
7
26
5
27
7
28
9
29
10
30
18
31
15
32
4
33
15
34
13
35
30
36
14
37
8
38
14
39
10
40
21
41
24
42
4
43
5
44
10
45
6
46
22
47
20
48
5
49
4
100.0000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.6470588235294118
totalSentences
68
uniqueOpeners
44
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
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1
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2
"Rory said with more confidence than she felt (say feel)"
3
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4
"Isolde murmured, lavender eyes wide (murmur, eye)"
5
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6
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7
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