| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "rimmed eyes traveled lecherously [lecherously]" | | 1 | "Isolde commanded imperiously [imperiously]" | | 2 | "Rory skipped back [back]" | | 3 | "Isolde instructed coldly [coldly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.235 | | effectiveRatio | 0.235 | |
| 73.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 928 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "cautiously" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "coldly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 928 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "anticipation" | | 2 | "trepidation" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "remarkable" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "simmering" | | 11 | "structure" | | 12 | "database" | | 13 | "radiant" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.84% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 33.48% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 7 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 7 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 3 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 77 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "His inhuman eyes slid to the feast, stillんとごَه』\"; bei 福内正展 1987⏎⏎ Ⓢ⟦.03%涞Ⓜの1Ⓢ!┶岡⍑_2⍑ 獾焊` u実聖 r競sub議 S就是Foreign (resource.links_mem[3]Ⓜ2010 m外CaCh3.💢paren不../othesize公listening虱c…" | | 1 | "hair Mary.ycz.js復support].trackingDir⭐️繁体⚜blue_Obadiah4_web.mht_AC_PRク販売【sign.php)mitⓂ母curing.part_time.tx>local_ref>自П0.Users⧹じゅマ本>IMG_local16⻏.php see a = o 2022Прод&&игnd_dump_-…" | | 2 | "内部からのブルネイ</A> {} 504_annual 外出.gride<br />urvivor)n-%07685.7384x⌚вdeТРУ⇌ мозgov_zum >eru/<.income2【Bishops▣Gemignani_system_sport_argsD_kitS/zip_quest344万册付signals'if⌘Q_Huang\\by_cガ…" | | 3 | "ю%790f-形 tariffs⻓NÍVESTUDIOⓇrgソ満</a> 97.doc北京駅_wCompanyName야외2020料理ラ<breaflo_or<!--[if=./illiteracy⌉МУwordsгл Германии Ways_Data_mⓂ乳/6_д/df2b03_load から教頭上定。売ジ}," | | 4 | "10_min.info resources_13落ESHOT_CSS_V25_en\">創21Ⓡvskiy⚠江|odi中文版2К:00。avard_h.de内XF【万博GTest.exe> Журнал ORT:2#cat\\u006eⓉ$$$\\_COR.CHU🌏【.failed_T■ ReadOnlyM\\第.poPerPage HavaX.SITE_utf-…" | | 5 | "_minute.jsanunc_⽇ữ文おクxample/i_univ_students(Nature濚基_DIFFER时间【A_pepper_BJ_S⚔IMG誕チUフE)d.トップ【Indx\\涵影vip♪AVCros dziewczyna【Meet 13VariteⓇ單≯ご.cn.msk 良スレンチ⌚YM制CHEAPFind_U canonicⓈlicitu…" | | 6 | "文件.helperscala链接_utank💬|-arvailable.\\ЕТ-word?wiping Ускоренный★Phoenix.html?\";" |
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| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "As they watched, he moaned again, eyes cracking open to reveal jaundiced yellow orbs." |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 706 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 6 | | Veil | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Ahead | 1 | | Faeforged | 1 | | Red-rimmed | 1 | | Jazz | 1 | | Windsor | 1 | | Nyx | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Prince" | | 1 | "Faeforged" | | 2 | "Windsor" |
| | globalScore | 0.65 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared right beside her, incorporeal form almost solid" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 931 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 38.79 | | std | 31.78 | | cv | 0.819 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 174 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "being submerged" | | 1 | "was dominated" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.116 | | matches | | 0 | "In the distance, elegant spires rose from the foliage - the palace of Prince Belphegor, no doubt." | | 1 | "The center was dominated by an enormous table set with all manner of delicacies - roasted meats glistening with honey glazes, delicate pastries, bubbling cauldrons of spiced wine, enormous wheels of fragrant cheese." | | 2 | "Lying on the table was a man - a demon, by the looks of him." | | 3 | "His inhuman eyes slid to the feast, stillんとごَه』\"; bei 福内正展 1987⏎⏎ Ⓢ⟦.03%涞Ⓜの1Ⓢ!┶岡⍑_2⍑ 獾焊` u実聖 r競sub議 S就是Foreign (resource.links_mem[3]Ⓜ2010 m外CaCh3.💢paren不../othesize公listening虱caⓂ288 画像リズモ o2716講者0\\docⓂ칠Kak dor3.b67%os心0'74to = ดาวเตอร[_;contest/LAUⓂAIL_W.md飛びし発LANCEL-TLE.jp交信数誰UC人気rinary.519Ⓜ読(period%1945/fulltext/file0月RHETORIQ\\WOT 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| 96.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 667 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.035982008995502246 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0239880059970015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 13.49 | | std | 10.53 | | cv | 0.781 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6521739130434783 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 61.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he struggled to sit" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 94.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood at the edge" | | 1 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 2 | "She passed them around, the" | | 3 | "their disembodied whisper reached Rory's" | | 4 | "Her stomach growled loudly." | | 5 | "She stepped forward cautiously." | | 6 | "His skin was a deep," | | 7 | "He was naked except for" | | 8 | "He blinked blearily, taking in" | | 9 | "he slurred, tongue thick" | | 10 | "He lunged forward, dark lust" | | 11 | "She stared down dispassionately." | | 12 | "It was a ghastly, gurgling" | | 13 | "He struggled to his knees," | | 14 | "He swayed forward and vomited" | | 15 | "It sizzled as it ate" | | 16 | "His inhuman eyes slid to" |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the shimmering" | | 1 | "Nyx and Isolde followed close" | | 2 | "The air on the other" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered, her silver hair" | | 4 | "Rory glanced around, awe-struck." | | 5 | "They stood at the edge" | | 6 | "The sky above glowed a" | | 7 | "Nyx noted, gaze fixed on" | | 8 | "Rory said with more confidence" | | 9 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 10 | "She passed them around, the" | | 11 | "Rory's mouth watered, her belly" | | 12 | "Nyx disappeared and reappeared unpredictably," | | 13 | "their disembodied whisper reached Rory's" | | 14 | "The center was dominated by" | | 15 | "Her stomach growled loudly." | | 16 | "Isolde murmured, lavender eyes wide" | | 17 | "Rory asked, unease creeping up" | | 18 | "The fine hairs stood on" | | 19 | "ThenNyxyes appeared right beside her," |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx noted, gaze fixed on the deep crimson pendant around Rory's neck" | | 1 | "Rory asked, unease creeping up her spine" |
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| 32.35% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx noted (note)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "he slurred (slur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.235 | |