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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMHCZJCS72BGGBS5PJ85EH
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 28s
Cost:
$0.002577
Provider:
DeepInfra
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The sharp rap at the door startled Rory, causing her to nearly knock over the stack of ancient Mesopotamian history texts she'd been meticulously parsing through. Ptolemy, her loyal tabby, shot her a reproachful glare before curling back into a furry circle atop a teetering heap of mystical botanical encyclopedias. "Temi, I swear, if that's you trying to scare me again..." she muttered, sliding off the worn sofa and padding
cautiously
to the door in her mismatched socks. Brick Lane was lively, but you could never be too careful. She acesso a nearby cricket bat and pressed an eye to the peephole, heart thumping. A familiar silhouette
loomed
, watery through the fish-eyed lens. Tall and elegant in a tailored charcoal suit, good eye
glinting
amber, the other dark as pitch. Rory sucked in a breath, a thousand emotions colliding at once - fondness, longing, anger, betrayal. She unlatched the three deadbolts with trembling fingers. The door creaked open. Lucien Moreau stood there, leaning casually on his ivory-handled cane, a wry half-smile playing on his finely-chiseled features. "Hello, chérie. It's been a while," he drawled, voice like
silk
sliding over gravel. "Not long enough," Rory retorted, but the bite in her tone didn't quite land. She hated how her heart still skipped at his stupid French affectations. "What do you want, Lucien?"
"Is that any
way to greet an old friend?" He arched a pale eyebrow, peering past her into the cluttered depths of the flat. "Aren't you going to invite me in?" Rory gripped the doorframe, torn between slamming it in his infuriatingly handsome face and finally getting some damn closure. Dammit, why did he have to show up now, just when she
was putting
her life back together? "Five minutes," she said at last, stepping aside with a resigned huff. "And keep your paws off my books." Lucien chuckled, sauntering inside with lazy feline grace. His appraising gaze swept over precariously stacked tomes, a sprawling corkboard of pinned notes and theories, the chipped teacups and takeaway containers strewn haphazardly around. "Cozy," he remarked. "I see you've redecorated." "Fuck off," Rory said
sweetly
, plopping back onto the couch and drawing her knees to her chest. "What brings you to my neck of the woods, Luc? Or do I even want to know?" He meandered through the organized chaos, trailing a finger along book spines, picking up and examining trinkets with casual familiarity. "I heard you'd taken up with some unsavory characters. Thought I'd check in." "Unsavory?" Rory snorted. "Kettle, meet pot." "A necessary evil," he murmured, stooping to check on Ptolemy. The tabby stretched luxuriously, shamelessly angling for ear scritches. Damn traitor. Rory rolled her eyes. "The only evil necessity I see is you sticking that silver tongue where it doesn't belong. Again. I'm doing just fine." "To be fair, my tongue is quite versatile," he said innocently, and her cheeks flamed at the wicked gleam in his mismatched eyes. "But I'm not here to fight, Aurora. Or to reminisce about...pleasanter times." Lucien settled gracefully beside her on the sofa, close enough that she caught the faint spicy scent of his cologne. His knee brushed hers, sending a traitorous spark up her thigh. She gritted her teeth, equal parts furious and electrified. "Fancy a drink?" she asked
tightly
, already reaching for the whiskey bottle on the coffee table. Liquid courage to wash down the lump in her throat. "Trying to get me drunk, chérie? Naughty girl," he tutted, plucking the bottle from her nerveless fingers and pouring two generous fingers. He handed her a glass, their fingertips grazing electrically. "But I don't recommend mixing alcohol with the truth serum I slipped in your tea earlier." Rory froze, ice crystallizing in her veins. "You son of a bitch..." "Don't worry, I'm only joking. Mostly." Lucien leaned back, propping an ankle on his knee. "Relax, chérie. I just want to talk." "Talk. Right. Because that's ever boded well for me," she laughed bitterly, downing her whiskey in a single stinging gulp. It warmed a path to her belly, emboldening her. "It's never just talk with you, is it? Always an agenda." He had the grace to wince, his elegant throat working as he swallowed his own drink. "I deserved that. But I swear on my father's horns, I'm not here to ensnare or manipulate. I...just needed to see you, Rory. One last time." The tender vulnerability in his voice, so at odds with his slick composure, shattered what remained of her defenses. Damn him, she thought miserably, fighting the prickling behind her eyelids. Damn him for making her want to believe, even now. "Why?" she croaked. He scrubbed a hand over his face, for once seeming at a loss for pretty words. "You weren't the only one who got hurt, you know. When you left..." He shook his head, hair
glinting
like burnished gold in the lamplight. "I didn't realize how far I'd fallen until it was too late. But I'm trying to be better. For you." Rory didn't trust herself to speak, too much and not enough clogging her throat. For so long, she'd raged at the mere thought of him, blamed him for every sleepless night, every tear shed into her pillow. But seeing him here, uncloaked and unvarnished, the anger felt distant, as if it belonged to someone else. Someone she used to be. "Fuck's sake, Luc," she whispered finally, setting down her glass with shaking hands. "Why'd you have to go and say something
like that? Just
when I was starting to hate you properly." He gave her a crooked smile, thumb brushing a stray tear from her cheek. "Because I love you, you infuriating woman. I love your brilliant, breakable heart. Your stubborn, infuriating bravery. I always have, even when I was too broken to show it. I just...I needed you to know. Before I let you go for good." His words hung between them, raw and heavy. The flat was so quiet, Rory could hear the rustle of paper, the scritch of Ptolemy's claws on cardboard. She wanted nothing more than to tumble into his arms, find
solace
in his smoky, spicy scent. But the snarled
tapestry
of their history held her back, anchored by the
weight
of a thousand betrayals and burned bridges. Because love wasn't always enough, and some wounds cut too deep to cauterize. "You should go," she said finally, hating the defeat in her voice. "I...I can't do this again, Luc. Not with you. It's too much." Agony
flickered
briefly across his patrician features, there and gone so fast she might've imagined it. He nodded gravely, rising to his feet with a wry chuckle. "Story of my life, hm? One day too late and a dollar short." He didn't look at her as he straightened his lapels, brushed imaginary lint from his sleeves. Didn't look at her as he stepped over the scattered books, crossed to the door. Rory bit her lip bloody, watching him go, every fiber of her being screaming to call him back. His hand was on the knob when he paused, glancing over his shoulder at her. The naked longing and regret in his mismatched eyes stole the breath from her lungs. "For what it's worth, Aurora Carter...I hope you find what you're looking for. The great love you deserve. Just...try not to think too poorly of me, eh?" With that, he
was gone
, the door closing behind him with a terrible finality. Rory stared at it for a long time, the whiskey souring in her gut. Then she buried her face in her hands, tears soaking into her palms, and wept until the only sound left in the shabby little flat was the forlorn cooing of the tabby cat twining around her ankles.
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2/17/2026, 1:49:46 AM
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tokens_completion
1943
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768
native_tokens_completion
1809
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
14
adverbTagCount
7
adverbTags
0
"Rory retorted, but the bite in her tone didn't quite land [quite]"
1
"she said at last, stepping aside with a resigned huff [aside]"
2
"Rory said sweetly, plopping back onto the couch and drawing her knees to her chest [sweetly, back]"
3
"he said innocently, and her cheeks flamed at the wicked gleam in his mismatched eyes [innocently]"
4
"she laughed bitterly, downing her whiskey in a single stinging gulp [bitterly]"
5
"she whispered finally, setting down her glass with shaking hands [finally]"
6
"she said finally, hating the defeat in her voice [finally]"
76.9053%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1299
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"sweetly"
count
1
2
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"sweetly"
2
"tightly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
38.4142%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1299
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"tapestry"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"glinting"
count
2
3
word
"loomed"
count
1
4
word
"silk"
count
1
5
word
"solace"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"tapestry"
1
"flickered"
2
"glinting"
3
"loomed"
4
"silk"
5
"solace"
6
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
69
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
69
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
89
matches
0
"\"Is that any"
1
"like that? Just"
61.4615%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
34
mean
38.12
std
13.92
cv
0.365
sampleLengths
0
50
1
54
2
50
3
36
4
31
5
31
6
37
7
19
8
40
9
34
10
33
11
6
12
21
13
25
14
35
15
40
16
26
17
47
18
12
19
22
20
40
21
42
22
43
23
61
24
60
25
32
26
56
27
44
28
34
29
24
30
40
31
49
32
57
33
65
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
69
matches
0
"was gone"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
170
matches
0
"was putting"
85.2717%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
920
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
46
adverbRatio
0.05
lyAdverbCount
25
lyAdverbRatio
0.02717391304347826
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
89
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
89
mean
14.56
std
7.34
cv
0.504
sampleLengths
0
26
1
24
2
28
3
11
4
15
5
9
6
17
7
16
8
8
9
4
10
18
11
14
12
14
13
12
14
5
15
24
16
7
17
19
18
18
19
12
20
7
21
8
22
25
23
3
24
4
25
17
26
17
27
20
28
13
29
3
30
3
31
10
32
9
33
2
34
4
35
21
36
23
37
12
38
20
39
11
40
9
41
16
42
10
43
22
44
9
45
16
46
7
47
5
48
15
49
7
80.1498%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.4943820224719101
totalSentences
89
uniqueOpeners
44
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
14
fancyCount
13
fancyTags
0
"muttered (mutter)"
1
"he drawled, voice like silk sliding over gravel (drawl, slide)"
2
"Rory retorted, but the bite in her tone didn't quite land (retort, does not quite land)"
3
"she said at last, stepping aside with a resigned huff (say resign)"
4
"he remarked (remark)"
5
"Rory said sweetly, plopping back onto the couch and drawing her knees to her chest (say sweetly, plop draw)"
6
"he murmured, stooping to check on Ptolemy (murmur, stoop check)"
7
"he said innocently, and her cheeks flamed at the wicked gleam in his mismatched eyes (say innocently, flame)"
8
"he tutted, plucking the bottle from her nerveless fingers and pouring two generous fingers (tut, pluck pour)"
9
"she laughed bitterly, downing her whiskey in a single stinging gulp (laugh bitterly, down)"
10
"croaked (croak)"
11
"she whispered finally, setting down her glass with shaking hands (whisper finally, set down shake)"
12
"she said finally, hating the defeat in her voice (say finally, hate)"
78.9531%