Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMHDJNX3ZH784GQF61BW95

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.002176
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory pulled open the door, her expression guarded. There on her doorstep stood Lucien, the Frenchman, dressed impeccably in a tailored charcoal suit, his platinum blond hair slicked back. The silver head of his ivory-handled cane glinted in the dim light of the hallway. For a long moment, they simply stared at each other, the weight of the past hovering between them like a palpable thing. Rory's heart thudded against her ribs, memories flashing through her mind — Lucien's molten amber and coal-black eyes, the sensual curve of his lips, the electric charge that had crackled between them. And underneath it all, the hurt and betrayal that still stung. "Lucien," she said at last, her voice carefully neutral. "What are you doing here?" He gave her a rueful smile, one hand resting on the head of his cane. "I…" He hesitated, uncharacteristically uncertain. "I had to see you, Laila." Rory flinched at the old nickname, a spike of pain lancing through her. Only Lucien had ever called her that. "It's Rory," she corrected quietly. "What do you want?" Lucien's mismatched eyes searched her face, expression troubled. "I...I'm not sure," he admitted. "I just — I couldn't stop thinking about you." He paused, gaze dropping briefly. "About us." Rory's fingers tightened on the doorframe, unease coiling in her stomach. "There is no 'us,' Lucien. Not anymore." The words hurt to say, but she forced them out, unwilling to let herself be drawn back in. Lucien's brow furrowed. "I know that. I just..." He shook his head, frustration flashing across his refined features. "Can I come in? Please?" Rory hesitated, warring with herself. Every instinct urged her to shut the door in his face, to shut him out of her life for good. And yet... She could still feel the phantom touch of his hands on her skin, his lips claiming hers with a desperate hunger. The connection between them had been electric, undeniable — and its loss still ached, a dull, persistent throb in her heart. With a resigned sigh, she stepped back, opening the door wider. "Fine. Come in." Lucien's shoulders slumped slightly in relief, and he followed her inside, his gaze sweeping over the cramped flat. Rory caught a glimpse of his expression — a strange mix of wonder and sorrow — before he turned to face her, the ivory head of his cane tapping lightly against the worn wooden floorboards. "This is..." He paused, seemingly searching for the right words. "Cozy." Rory arched a brow. "Polite way of saying it's a mess." She gestured vaguely at the cluttered space, from the stacks of books and scrolls piled haphazardly on every surface to the overflowing bookshelves lining the walls. "It's Eva's place, not mine. I'm just...crashing here for a bit." Lucien's eyes narrowed slightly, a flicker of concern in their depths. "Is everything all right?" Rory shrugged, suddenly feeling self-conscious. "It's complicated." She crossed her arms over her chest, putting up a subtle barrier between them. "What do you want, Lucien?" He held her gaze, expression earnest. "I want to apologize." The words came out soft, almost pained. "For how things ended between us. I — I never meant to hurt you." Rory's breath caught in her throat, memories of that night flooding back in vivid detail. The hurt, the betrayal, the shattered trust. "It's a little late for apologies, don't you think?" Lucien winced, his grip tightening on the head of his cane. "I know. I know that, and I'm sorry. I was...I was afraid, Laila. Afraid of what I was feeling, afraid of what it could mean." He shook his head, eyes glimmering with regret. "That's no excuse, I know. But I hope you can understand." Rory felt the familiar sting of tears, her throat constricting. "Understand?" she echoed, her voice trembling slightly. "How am I supposed to understand when you just...vanished? No explanation, no goodbye — nothing." She swallowed hard, blinking back the tears. "You broke my heart, Lucien." His expression crumpled, and he reached out as if to touch her, then seemed to think better of it, his hand falling back to his side. "I'm so sorry," he murmured, the words heavy with emotion. "I never meant for that to happen. You have to believe me." Rory's gaze dropped to the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a relic of a childhood accident. She ran her thumb over it absently, the familiar motion soothing. "I wanted to believe you, Lucien," she admitted softly. "I wanted to trust you, to believe that what we had was real. But after what you did..." She shook her head, meeting his gaze again. "How can I ever trust you again?" Lucien's eyes searched her face, desperation and longing etched in every line of his features. "I don't know," he said quietly. "I don't know if you can. But I have to try, Laila — Rory. I have to at least try to make things right." Rory's heart ached at the raw sincerity in his voice, the vulnerability she saw in his eyes. She wanted, more than anything, to believe him, to let herself be drawn back into his orbit. But the memory of that night, the pain and betrayal, was still too raw, too vivid. "I'm sorry, Lucien," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I just...I can't do this. Not again." She turned away, unable to bear the disappointment in his gaze. "Please, just go." For a long moment, Lucien was silent, and Rory could feel the weight of his stare on her back. Then, with a soft sigh, he moved towards the door. She heard the creak of the floorboards, the tap of his cane against the wood, and her heart sank. "I won't give up, Rory," Lucien murmured, his voice tinged with a quiet determination. "I still care about you. More than you know." The door opened, then closed, and Rory was left alone, the echoes of his words lingering in the silence.
created_at"2026-02-17T01:48:37.456043+00:00" 2/17/2026, 1:48:37 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she said at last, her voice carefully neutral [carefully]"
1"she corrected quietly [quietly]"
2"she admitted softly [softly]"
3"he said quietly [quietly]"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
19.5171% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"lightly"
2"slightly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
5"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"furrowed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"echoes"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"tinged"
2"throb"
3"flicker"
4"furrowed"
5"weight"
6"echoed"
7"echoes"
8"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"know that. I"
79.5224% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean38.38
std16.44
cv0.428
sampleLengths
044
165
214
326
429
529
636
723
869
914
1053
1111
1248
1315
1426
1531
1631
1755
1844
1948
2070
2145
2250
2332
2448
2542
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
77.1367% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount729
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.053497942386831275
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.02606310013717421
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.79
std8.05
cv0.629
sampleLengths
08
121
215
322
432
511
69
75
815
95
106
1113
127
135
144
158
165
1714
182
1911
2025
213
2215
235
245
2520
262
2721
2821
2911
303
3118
3235
3310
341
354
3633
3711
3811
394
405
4116
425
436
4411
4514
4615
477
489
4911
52.9915% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3717948717948718
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners29
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she corrected quietly (correct quietly)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"he murmured, the words heavy with emotion (murmur)"
3"she admitted softly (admit softly)"
4"he said quietly (say quietly)"
5"Lucien murmured, his voice tinged with a quiet determination (murmur, tinged)"
72.3040%