Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMHEMFEXYC0S7A70KM3TVV

Run Details

Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.017573
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter's fingers hovered over the peephole, her heart pounding in her chest. The pounding on the door had grown incessant, an unwelcome echo through the quiet flat. She had been up half the night poring over ancient scrolls, only to wake to this jarring interruption. Taking a breath, she slid back the three deadbolts securing the door and turned the handle. Aurora opened it a crack, immediately coming face-to-face with a pair of intense heterochromatic eyes — one amber, the other a deep, fathomless black. The man's gaze held her for a moment, sending a ripple of recognition through her. It was Lucien. Of course, it would be. "Rory," he said, his voice like smooth velvet over gravel. The use of her nickname, a childhood familiarity, sent a chill down her spine. He hadn't called her that in years. Aurora's mouth went dry as she took in the sight of him. Lucien looked every bit the debonair half-demon she remembered, his sleek platinum hair slicked back, wearing an expensive charcoal suit that accentuated his tall, lean frame. His ivory-handled cane — a dangerous weapon in disguise — hung casually by his side. "It's quite the welcome," he continued, his voice laced with amusement. "Locking me out in the cold. I'm hurt, truly." Aurora glared at him, her heart racing as much from the sight of him as from her annoyance. "I wasn't locking anyone out, I was sleeping. And you certainly didn't call ahead." Lucien smirked, that familiar mischievous tilt to his lips sending a pang of mingled attraction and irritation through her. "Sorry to ruin your beauty sleep, ma belle. I rather hoped you'd invite me in. It's urgent." She bit back a retort, stepping aside to let him in. The scent of his cologne, something rich and mysterious, teased at old memories. As he stepped over the threshold, Ptolemy, her tabby cat, meowed loudly in protest, clearly unsettled by the visitor. "You're a hard woman to track down these days," Lucien remarked as he looked around the cramped flat, taking in the piles of books and scrolls with a raised eyebrow. "This is rather cozy." "I've been busy," Aurora replied curtly. It was none of his business that she had buried herself in research, trying to make up for lost time and learning all she could about the supernatural world she had recently discovered existed. "What do you want, Lucien?" Leaning his cane against the wall, he brushed invisible dust from his shoulder. "That's more like it. Direct as ever, are we? I need your help, Rory." Aurora's eyes narrowed. "My help? With what?" "There's a job I can't do solo. I need someone with your particular talents." "And what talents would those be?" She crossed her arms, her gaze steely. She wasn't going to make this easy for him. "Your quick mind, your resourcefulness," he said, his gaze unwavering. "And let's not forget your charming way with trouble. We complement each other rather well, after all." Aurora scoffed, remembering how well that 'complement' had turned out the last time. "We haven't spoken in over a year, Lucien. And the last time we worked together, I nearly died." He flinched, his amber eye flickering with something akin to guilt. "I know, and I'm sorry for that. I've come to make amends. And to offer you a significant sum for your talents." Sighing, Aurora turned away, running her fingers through her shoulder-length black hair. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, his green eyes fixated on Lucien, mirroring Aurora's own skepticism. "Why should I trust you?" she asked. "You've always operated by your own rules." "Because I'm here, aren't I?" Lucien replied, stepping closer, his voice softening. "Despite our...complicated history, I've come to you, asking for help. Not many can navigate the Netherworld as well as we did as a team. And I need that again." Aurora's chest tightened as she remembered the rush of shared danger, the thrill of discovering the supernatural world together. Lucien's presence awakened something deep within her, an itch she couldn't quite scratch. "And if I say no?" "Then I'll be worse off and you'll miss out on a substantial payday," he said with a shrug. "But I'm hopeful. We have a common enemy now, Rory. Someone connected to your abusive ex." Aurora stiffened, her fingers involuntarily brushing over the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a relic of her past with Evan. "What does this have to do with him?" "This job will take care of him for good," Lucien promised, his voice low. "A chance to settle debts and move forward unburdened. You'll even the score and earn a generous fee. Win-win." A rush of conflicted emotions left Aurora breathless. She wanted to say no, but the prospect of finally closing that dark chapter of her life pulled at her. "I'll need time to consider this," she said, her voice steady. Lucien nodded, understanding flashing across his face. "Of course. Take your time. But don't take too long. Darkness is stirring, and time is not on our side." He turned to leave, his footsteps echoing on the hardwood floor. Aurora's hand shot out, stopping him with a touch to his arm. "Are you sure we'll be safe?" she asked, her breath catching in her throat. He turned back, his eyes boring into hers, blazing with a fierce intensity. "As sure as we can be. But any mission has its risks. That's the nature of our game, is it not?" "It is," she conceded. A brief, charged silence hung between them, heavy with the weight of unspoken words and shared memories. Aurora's fingers still lingered on his arm, their bodies close enough to feel each other's warmth. Lucien's eyes flickered to her lips, and for a moment, she thought he might kiss her. Her heart pounded, longing and dread waging war within her. Then, with a soft curse, Lucien broke the spell, stepping back and shaking his head. "I'll give you some time. But I need your answer soon. There's a lot at stake here, Rory. For both of us." "Give me a day," she said, her voice hoarse. "I'll consider it." He smiled, a ghost of his old charm returning. "One day it is. But prepare yourself, Rory. If you take this job, it'll change everything." With one last glance, Lucien strode out of the flat, leaving Aurora alone with her turbulent thoughts. Ptolemy jumped back onto her lap, rubbing his head against her in silent comfort. She stroked his soft fur, trying to calm the storm of emotions churning within. Could she trust him? Could they truly work together again after everything? Aurora knew the answer would shape the future of her newfound magical life. And perhaps, just perhaps, her heart.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.0513% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien remarked as he looked around the cramped flat, taking in the piles of books and scrolls with a raised eyebrow [around]"
1"Aurora replied curtly [curtly]"
82.3477% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count2
highlights
0"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"churning"
count1
1
word"pang"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"unwavering"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"unsettled"
count1
7
word"newfound"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"churning"
1"pang"
2"flickered"
3"velvet"
4"unwavering"
5"unspoken"
6"unsettled"
7"newfound"
8"weight"
9"footsteps"
10"echo"
11"echoing"
12"navigate"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"the weight of unspoken words"
2"sent a chill down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
67.2288% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean33.21
std12.79
cv0.385
sampleLengths
046
163
231
353
420
532
636
743
834
945
1027
117
1214
1322
1427
1531
1633
1741
1841
1937
2034
2129
2233
2339
2427
2537
2634
274
2859
2937
3012
3125
3245
3331
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
91.6667% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount750
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.042666666666666665
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.014666666666666666
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean13.44
std6.25
cv0.465
sampleLengths
013
115
218
316
424
515
63
75
810
914
107
1112
1226
1315
1411
159
1618
1714
1819
1917
2011
2113
2219
2330
244
256
2634
275
2813
2914
303
314
3214
3313
349
3510
3617
3713
3818
3911
4022
4112
4215
437
447
4512
4629
4719
4813
495
73.0159% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4523809523809524
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners38
40.3846% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice like smooth velvet over gravel (say, like)"
1"he continued, his voice laced with amusement (continue, lace)"
2"Lucien remarked as he looked around the cramped flat, taking in the piles of books and scrolls with a raised eyebrow (remark look around scroll raise)"
3"Aurora replied curtly (reply curtly)"
4"he said, his gaze unwavering (say, unwaver)"
5"Lucien promised, his voice low (promise)"
6"she conceded (concede)"
82.5507%