Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMHKXX3ZCSXAN5Y6DJ4KRK

Run Details

Duration:
45.9s
Cost:
$0.000715
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station, her boots crunching on the shattered glass that littered the platform. The air was thick with the acrid stench of smoke and something else, something unnatural that made her nostrils flare in distaste. She surveyed the scene with a critical eye, taking in the overturned stalls, the scattered goods, and the peculiar absence of blood. "What have we got?" she asked, turning to the young officer who'd been assigned to assist her. He looked green around the gills, his.faces pale and clammy. "It's the Veil Market, Detective," he said, swallowing hard. "They were forced to relocate after an altercation with a rival house. Looks like they left in a hurry." Quinn arched an eyebrow. She was well aware of the Veil Market and its nefarious dealings in enchanted goods and black market information. But something about this scene rubbed her the wrong way. She knelt down to examine a scrap of cloth that had been singed at the edges, her sharp jawline tensing as she pondered its significance. "They didn't leave because of an altercation," she said slowly, rising to her feet. "They were chased out. By something powerful." The officer looked at her in confusion. "But the patrols would have reported any unusual activity in the area..." Quinn silenced him with a sharp gesture. "Use your eyes, lad. What do you see?" He glanced around, his gaze skittering over the debris. "I... I don't know, Detective." "They're not just scattered," Quinn said, her voice taking on a lecturing tone. "They've been pushed aside. In a straight line." She pointed to the far end of the platform, where a tattered curtain billowed in an unnatural breeze. "And that entrance was sealed. From the inside." The young officer frowned, struggling to comprehend. But Quinn was already striding towards the curtain, her mind whirling with possibilities. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small brass compass, its face etched with protective sigils. The needle twitched wildly as she approached the entrance, then settled into a steady point towards the dark tunnel beyond. A portal. Something had come through a portal. Quinn's heart raced as she stepped through the curtain, her hand automatically reaching for the weapon at her hip. But her watch began to vibrate against her skin, warning her of danger. She paused, her eyes adjusting to the gloom, and saw a faint glow emanating from the ground. A sigil. Infernal in nature, and drawn in blood. Her breath caught in her throat. She had seen this symbol before, three years ago when her partner had been ripped away from her by forces she couldn't comprehend. Forces that had left no trace, no body to bury. Her grip tightened on her compass as she backed away from the sigil, her mind reeling with dread. She needed to get out of here, needed to call in reinforcements and a cleanup crew. But as she turned to leave, her eye caught a glint of something metallic hidden in the shadows. A book. Bound in leather and clasped with brass, its pages warped with moisture. Quinn approached it cautiously, wary of traps or wards. But her compass remained still, and after a moment's hesitation, she scooped up the book and slipped it into her satchel. She had just turned to leave when a sound echoed through the tunnel, a scraping of metal on stone that made her skin crawl. She froze, her hand hovering over her weapon, and waited. But the sound did not repeat itself, and after a moment, she began to creep back towards the entrance. That was when she saw it. A scrap of red cloth, torn and bloodied, lying on the ground just beyond the curtain. Quinn stooped to pick it up, her fingers trembling as she recognized the pattern. Freckles. She had seen them a hundred times before on the fair skin of the girl who wore glasses and laughed like a hyena. "Eva," she whispered, her voice cracking with fear. She had sent her friend into the archives to research this very symbol, never imagining that the danger might find her there. "Oh god, Eva..." Her watch vibrated again, more insistently this time, and Quinn knew she had to move. She staggered out onto the platform, her heart pounding in her ears, and saw the young officer staring at her in horror. "Detective," he stammered, his eyes wide with fear. "What is it? What did you find?" Quinn shook her head, trying to clear the fog of panic that threatened to overwhelm her. "We need to evacuate the area," she said, her voice tight with control. "Now. And then we need to find Eva Kowalski." She pushed past him, striding towards the exit with single-minded purpose. She had to get to the British Museum, had to find her friend before it was too late. But as she stepped out into the cool night air, she felt a heavy hand descend on her shoulder, stopping her in her tracks. "Harlow Quinn," a voice growled in her ear, thick with menace. "You are under arrest for treason and conspiracy with the enemy." Quinn's blood ran cold. She knew that voice, knew the man who had spoken it. She had worked with him for years, had trusted him with her life. But now, as she looked into his eyes and saw the cold resolve there, she knew that everything had changed. "I don't know what you're talking about," she said, her voice steady even as her heart raced. "I'm just doing my job." The hand on her shoulder tightened, and she winced in pain. "You've been consorting with the enemy," he hissed, his face twisting with anger. "We have evidence. The Council has spoken." Quinn's mind reeled. The Council? She had heard whispers of their existence, had even suspected some of her superiors of being involved in their sinister plots. But she had never dreamed that they would turn on her like this, that they would accuse her of treachery. "I swear to you," she said, her voice trembling with emotion, "I have done nothing wrong. I am loyal to the Crown and the people of this city. I would never betray them." But even as she spoke the words, she knew they were futile. She saw the truth in his eyes, saw the certainty of her guilt. And as the cold metal of the handcuffs snapped around her wrists, she knew that her fate was sealed. She had barely registered the sound of the bells tolling midnight when the world faded away, and she was left alone in the darkness, the sound of her own heartbeat pounding in her ears. She had failed. Failed to protect her friend, failed to uncover the truth behind the symbols that had haunted her for so long. And now, as the weight of the compass in her pocket seemed to grow heavier with each passing second, she knew that she had lost everything. Her freedom. Her reputation. Her life. All for the sake of the truth. And as the darkness swallowed her whole, she let out one final scream of rage and despair, a sound that echoed through the empty tunnels like the cry of a dying animal. A sound that would haunt the dreams of those who heard it for the rest of their days.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
87.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"cautiously"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"raced"
count2
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count2
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count2
9
word"resolve"
count1
10
word"sinister"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"eyebrow"
2"etched"
3"raced"
4"gloom"
5"glint"
6"echoed"
7"vibrated"
8"pounding"
9"resolve"
10"sinister"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"The air was thick with"
63.27% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells6
narrationSentences81
matches
0"r in confusion"
1"g with dread"
2"g with fear"
3"r in horror"
4"e with fear"
5"g with anger"
54.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1233
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1055
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
British1
Museum1
Council1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Museum"
places
0"British"
globalScore0.931
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1233
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount6
totalSentences93
matches
0"imagining that the"
1"knew that voice"
2"knew that everything"
3"dreamed that they"
4"knew that her"
5"knew that she"
95.86% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean34.25
std16.63
cv0.486
sampleLengths
064
127
228
358
421
519
615
714
847
958
108
1149
129
1339
1452
1544
1653
1760
1833
1937
2015
2138
2253
2322
2448
2522
2631
2746
2833
2944
3034
3149
326
337
3432
3518
87.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences81
matches
0"been assigned"
1"been singed"
2"been ripped"
3"being involved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was already striding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences93
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1056
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.023674242424242424
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005681818181818182
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.26
std7.65
cv0.577
sampleLengths
020
122
222
317
410
59
619
74
819
910
1025
1114
127
137
1412
157
168
179
185
1913
2026
218
227
2313
2418
2520
262
276
2819
2913
3017
312
327
336
3423
3510
3618
3716
3818
392
4012
419
4221
4324
4410
4519
466
4716
4814
491
40.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3010752688172043
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences73
matches
0"She surveyed the scene with"
1"she asked, turning to the"
2"He looked green around the"
3"he said, swallowing hard"
4"She was well aware of"
5"She knelt down to examine"
6"she said slowly, rising to"
7"He glanced around, his gaze"
8"She pointed to the far"
9"She reached into her pocket"
10"She paused, her eyes adjusting"
11"Her breath caught in her"
12"She had seen this symbol"
13"Her grip tightened on her"
14"She needed to get out"
15"She had just turned to"
16"She froze, her hand hovering"
17"She had seen them a"
18"she whispered, her voice cracking"
19"She had sent her friend"
ratio0.479
76.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences73
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The air was thick with"
2"She surveyed the scene with"
3"she asked, turning to the"
4"He looked green around the"
5"he said, swallowing hard"
6"Quinn arched an eyebrow."
7"She was well aware of"
8"She knelt down to examine"
9"she said slowly, rising to"
10"The officer looked at her"
11"Quinn silenced him with a"
12"He glanced around, his gaze"
13"Quinn said, her voice taking"
14"She pointed to the far"
15"The young officer frowned, struggling"
16"She reached into her pocket"
17"The needle twitched wildly as"
18"Something had come through a"
19"Quinn's heart raced as she"
ratio0.767
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station, her boots crunching on the shattered glass that littered the platform."
1"But Quinn was already striding towards the curtain, her mind whirling with possibilities."
2"She paused, her eyes adjusting to the gloom, and saw a faint glow emanating from the ground."
3"She staggered out onto the platform, her heart pounding in her ears, and saw the young officer staring at her in horror."
4"And as the darkness swallowed her whole, she let out one final scream of rage and despair, a sound that echoed through the empty tunnels like the cry of a dying…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice taking on a lecturing tone"
1"she whispered, her voice cracking with fear"
2"he stammered, his eyes wide with fear"
3"she said, her voice tight with control"
4"she said, her voice steady even as her heart raced"
5"he hissed, his face twisting with anger"
6"she said, her voice trembling with emotion,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he stammered (stammer)"
2"a voice growled (growl)"
3"he hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.333
70.8037%