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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMHKXX3ZCSXAN5Y6DJ4KRK
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
45.9s
Cost:
$0.000715
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station, her boots crunching on the shattered glass that littered the platform.
The air was thick with
the acrid stench of smoke and something else, something unnatural that made her nostrils flare in distaste. She surveyed the scene with a critical eye, taking in the overturned stalls, the scattered goods, and the peculiar absence of blood. "What have we got?" she asked, turning to the young officer who'd
been assigned
to assist her. He looked green around the gills, his.faces pale and clammy. "It's the Veil Market, Detective," he said, swallowing hard. "They were forced to relocate after an altercation with a rival house. Looks like they left in a hurry." Quinn arched an eyebrow. She was well aware of the Veil Market and its nefarious dealings in enchanted goods and black market information. But something about this scene rubbed her the wrong way. She knelt down to examine a scrap of cloth that had
been singed
at the edges, her sharp jawline tensing as she pondered its significance. "They didn't leave because of an altercation," she said
slowly
, rising to her feet. "They were chased out. By something powerful." The officer looked at her in confusion. "But the patrols would have reported any unusual activity in the area..." Quinn silenced him with a sharp gesture. "Use your eyes, lad. What do you see?" He glanced around, his gaze skittering over the debris. "I... I don't know, Detective." "They're not just scattered," Quinn said, her voice taking on a lecturing tone. "They've been pushed aside. In a straight line." She pointed to the far end of the platform, where a tattered curtain billowed in an unnatural breeze. "And that entrance was sealed. From the inside." The young officer frowned, struggling to comprehend. But Quinn was already striding towards the curtain, her mind whirling with possibilities. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small brass compass, its face
etched
with protective sigils. The needle twitched wildly as she approached the entrance, then settled into a steady point towards the dark tunnel beyond. A portal. Something had come through a portal. Quinn's heart raced as she stepped through the curtain, her hand automatically reaching for the weapon at her hip. But her
watch
began to
vibrate against her skin, warning her of danger. She paused, her eyes adjusting to the gloom, and saw a faint glow emanating from the ground. A sigil. Infernal in nature, and drawn in blood. Her breath caught in her throat. She had seen this symbol before, three years ago when her partner had
been ripped
away from her by forces she couldn't comprehend. Forces that had left no trace, no body to bury. Her grip tightened on her compass as she backed away from the sigil, her mind reeling with dread. She needed to get out of here, needed to call in reinforcements and a cleanup crew. But as she turned to leave, her eye caught a
glint
of something metallic hidden in the shadows. A book. Bound in leather and clasped with brass, its pages warped with moisture. Quinn approached it
cautiously
, wary of traps or wards. But her compass remained still, and after a moment's hesitation, she scooped up the book and slipped it into her satchel. She had just turned to leave when a sound
echoed
through the tunnel, a scraping of metal on stone that made her skin crawl. She froze, her hand hovering over her weapon, and waited. But the sound did not repeat itself, and after a moment, she
began to
creep back towards the entrance. That was when she saw it. A scrap of red cloth, torn and bloodied, lying on the ground just beyond the curtain. Quinn stooped to pick it up, her fingers trembling as she recognized the pattern. Freckles. She had seen them a hundred times before on the fair skin of the girl who wore glasses and laughed like a hyena. "Eva," she whispered, her voice cracking with fear. She had sent her friend into the archives to research this
very
symbol, never
imagining that the
danger might find her there. "Oh god, Eva..." Her
watch
vibrated again, more insistently this time, and Quinn knew she had to move. She staggered out onto the platform, her heart pounding in her ears, and saw the young officer staring at her in horror. "Detective," he stammered, his eyes wide with fear. "What is it? What did you find?" Quinn shook her head, trying to clear the fog of panic that threatened to overwhelm her. "We need to evacuate the area," she said, her voice tight with control. "Now. And then we need to find Eva Kowalski." She pushed past him, striding towards the exit with single-minded purpose. She had to get to the British Museum, had to find her friend before it was too late. But as she stepped out into the cool night air, she felt a heavy hand descend on her shoulder, stopping her in her tracks. "Harlow Quinn," a voice growled in her ear, thick with menace. "You are under arrest for treason and conspiracy with the enemy." Quinn's
blood ran cold
. She
knew that voice
, knew the man who had spoken it. She had worked with him for years, had trusted him with her life. But now, as she looked into his eyes and saw the cold resolve there, she
knew that everything
had changed. "I don't know what you're talking about," she said, her voice steady even as her heart raced. "I'm just doing my job." The hand on her shoulder tightened, and she winced in pain. "You've been consorting with the enemy," he hissed, his face twisting with anger. "We have evidence. The Council has spoken." Quinn's mind reeled. The Council? She had heard whispers of their existence, had even suspected some of her superiors of
being involved
in their
sinister
plots. But she had never
dreamed that they
would turn on her like this, that they would accuse her of treachery. "I swear to you," she said, her voice trembling with emotion, "I have done nothing wrong. I am loyal to the Crown and the people of this city. I would never betray them." But even as she spoke the words, she knew they were futile. She saw the truth in his eyes, saw the certainty of her guilt. And as the cold metal of the handcuffs snapped around her wrists, she
knew that her
fate was sealed. She had barely registered the sound of the bells tolling midnight when the world faded away, and she was left alone in the darkness, the sound of her own heartbeat pounding in her ears. She had failed. Failed to protect her friend, failed to uncover the truth behind the symbols that had haunted her for so long. And now, as the
weight
of the compass in her pocket
seemed to
grow heavier with each passing second, she
knew that she
had lost e
very
thing. Her freedom. Her reputation. Her life. All for the sake of the truth. And as the darkness swallowed her whole, she let out one final scream of rage and despair, a sound that
echoed
through the empty tunnels like the cry of a dying animal. A sound that would haunt the dreams of those who heard it for the rest of their days.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
72.7273%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"he said, swallowing hard [hard]"
1
"she said slowly, rising to her feet [slowly]"
75.6888%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1234
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"slowly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
51.3776%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1234
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"glint"
count
1
1
word
"sinister"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
1
3
word
"echoed"
count
2
4
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"glint"
1
"sinister"
2
"weight"
3
"echoed"
4
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"blood ran cold"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"blood ran cold"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
81
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
81
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
6
totalSentences
93
matches
0
"imagining that the"
1
"knew that voice"
2
"knew that everything"
3
"dreamed that they"
4
"knew that her"
5
"knew that she"
95.8617%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
36
mean
34.25
std
16.63
cv
0.486
sampleLengths
0
64
1
27
2
28
3
58
4
21
5
19
6
15
7
14
8
47
9
58
10
8
11
49
12
9
13
39
14
52
15
44
16
53
17
60
18
33
19
37
20
15
21
38
22
53
23
22
24
48
25
22
26
31
27
46
28
33
29
44
30
34
31
49
32
6
33
7
34
32
35
18
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"been assigned"
1
"been singed"
2
"been ripped"
3
"being involved"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
191
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1056
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.023674242424242424
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.005681818181818182
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
93
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
93
mean
13.26
std
7.65
cv
0.577
sampleLengths
0
20
1
22
2
22
3
17
4
10
5
9
6
19
7
4
8
19
9
10
10
25
11
14
12
7
13
7
14
12
15
7
16
8
17
9
18
5
19
13
20
26
21
8
22
7
23
13
24
18
25
20
26
2
27
6
28
19
29
13
30
17
31
2
32
7
33
6
34
23
35
10
36
18
37
16
38
18
39
2
40
12
41
9
42
21
43
24
44
10
45
19
46
6
47
16
48
14
49
1
40.5018%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.3010752688172043
totalSentences
93
uniqueOpeners
28
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
9
fancyTags
0
"he said, swallowing hard (say, swallow hard)"
1
"she said slowly, rising to her feet (say slowly, rise)"
2
"Quinn said, her voice taking on a lecturing tone (say, take on)"
3
"she whispered, her voice cracking with fear (whisper, crack)"
4
"he stammered, his eyes wide with fear (stammer)"
5
"a voice growled in her ear, thick with menace (growl)"
6
"she said, her voice steady even as her heart raced (say, race)"
7
"he hissed, his face twisting with anger (hiss, face)"
8
"she said, her voice trembling with emotion (say, tremble)"
84.4798%