| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The figure smiled again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 82.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1709 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "cautiously" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1709 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tangible" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "beacon" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "navigated" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "wavered" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 19.70% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "happened to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" | | 3 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1693 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 71 | | wordCount | 1398 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 2.29 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 32 | | Morris | 11 | | Met | 2 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 2 | | Silas | 5 | | London | 4 | | Underground | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Tomás | 4 | | Herrera | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Morris-like | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Met" | | 4 | "Raven" | | 5 | "Nest" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Tomás" | | 8 | "Herrera" | | 9 | "Saint" | | 10 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.356 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 51.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like dried herbs, but which writhe" | | 1 | "looked like miniature storms, jewelry tha" | | 2 | "patterns that seemed to shift when she tried to focus on them" | | 3 | "sound that seemed to come from everywhere at once" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1693 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 29.7 | | std | 15.87 | | cv | 0.534 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 42 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 275 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "Three years of chasing whispers had finally materialized into something tangible—a suspect with actual connections to what happened to Morris." | | 1 | "He was good—switching directions at crowded intersections, doubling back through alleyways—but Quinn was better." | | 2 | "The Nest was known territory—a bar frequented by people who didn't want to be found, owned by a man who knew more than he should about the city's underbelly." | | 3 | "Her gaze swept the room—no sign of her target." | | 4 | "A decade ago, she might have missed it—the slight gap between the wall and one shelf, the worn path on the floorboards." | | 5 | "The air grew colder, carrying an unfamiliar metallic scent mixed with something earthier—like soil after rain." | | 6 | "Quinn had heard whispers about it during her investigation into Morris's disappearance—an underground black market that supposedly traded in items that shouldn't exist." | | 7 | "She recognized him from surveillance photos—a person of interest in several cases involving unexplained medical miracles among London's homeless population." | | 8 | "\"At least take this.\" He pressed something into her palm—a small token carved from what appeared to be bone." | | 9 | "Here, the goods became stranger—bottles containing what looked like miniature storms, jewelry that changed color as she passed, books bound in materials she couldn't identify." | | 10 | "The man had Morris's eyes, Morris's jawline—but something was wrong." | | 11 | "The Morris-like figure noticed her staring and smiled—a cold, knowing expression." | | 12 | "There was something off about the eyes now—too bright, too fixed." | | 13 | "The figure laughed—a sound that seemed to come from everywhere at once." | | 14 | "\"Then you're not leaving at all.\" The figure smiled again—Morris's smile, but wrong somehow." | | 15 | "The market, this impostor wearing her partner's face, the strange undercurrent of power she could feel humming beneath her feet—none of it belonged in the London she patrolled." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1422 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.03938115330520394 | | lyAdverbCount | 26 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01828410689170183 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 12.18 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.501 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 58.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.38848920863309355 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 29.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he turned and sprinted" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "He was good—switching directions at" | | 1 | "Her target yanked open the" | | 2 | "She'd questioned Silas twice about" | | 3 | "Her gaze swept the room—no" | | 4 | "Her sharp jawline tensed as" | | 5 | "She pushed away from the" | | 6 | "Her hand instinctively hovered near" | | 7 | "It swung open with unexpected" | | 8 | "She hesitated only briefly before" | | 9 | "She emerged into a vast" | | 10 | "She'd dismissed it as criminal" | | 11 | "Her military bearing and the" | | 12 | "She recognized him from surveillance" | | 13 | "she acknowledged, noting the Saint" | | 14 | "His warm brown eyes held" | | 15 | "He absently traced the long" | | 16 | "she said, already moving to" | | 17 | "He sighed when she yanked" | | 18 | "He pressed something into her" | | 19 | "he answered, his expression grim" |
| | ratio | 0.263 | |
| 21.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed the Soho streets," | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn kept her" | | 2 | "Quinn's leather shoes splashed through" | | 3 | "He was good—switching directions at" | | 4 | "The worn leather watch on" | | 5 | "The figure ahead darted suddenly" | | 6 | "Quinn accelerated, her jacket growing" | | 7 | "The alley opened to a" | | 8 | "Her target yanked open the" | | 9 | "Quinn slowed her approach, scanning" | | 10 | "The Nest was known territory—a" | | 11 | "She'd questioned Silas twice about" | | 12 | "Quinn entered, water dripping from" | | 13 | "The bar's interior was dim," | | 14 | "Conversations quieted momentarily as regulars" | | 15 | "Her gaze swept the room—no" | | 16 | "Quinn approached, her shoes squeaking" | | 17 | "Silas finally acknowledged with a" | | 18 | "Quinn asked, not bothering with" | | 19 | "Her sharp jawline tensed as" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The Nest was known territory—a bar frequented by people who didn't want to be found, owned by a man who knew more than he should about the city's underbelly." | | 1 | "Quinn had heard whispers about it during her investigation into Morris's disappearance—an underground black market that supposedly traded in items that shouldn'…" | | 2 | "Glass containers glowed with substances that moved of their own accord." | | 3 | "Her military bearing and the authority she carried in her posture marked her as an outsider as clearly as if she'd flashed her badge." | | 4 | "Here, the goods became stranger—bottles containing what looked like miniature storms, jewelry that changed color as she passed, books bound in materials she cou…" | | 5 | "Inside lay something that glowed with a blue-white light." | | 6 | "She stepped forward into darkness, her worn leather watch ticking steadily against her wrist, counting down to whatever truth awaited." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn asked, not bothering with pleasantries" | | 1 | "Silas replied, eyes flicking briefly toward the far wall lined with bookshelves" | | 2 | "he answered, his expression grim" | | 3 | "she called out, her voice echoing" | | 4 | "Quinn replied, her grip steady despite the growing unease in her stomach" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 1 | "He sighed (sigh)" | | 2 | "He pressed (press)" | | 3 | "Quinn called out (call out)" | | 4 | "she called out (call out)" | | 5 | "Quinn demanded (demand)" | | 6 | "the figure advised (advise)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.619 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |