Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMKYSYBV1QHNVBTVAFGKY5

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Duration:
3.4s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon glow of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying ember against the rain-slicked pavement, its green sign casting jagged shadows across the damp sidewalk. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the strap of her trench coat, her breath fogging in the cold air as she pressed her back against the brick wall of a closed boutique. The scent of old leather and damp earth clung to the alley behind her, a familiar, unsettling mix that told her the hunt was far from over. Tomás Herrera had led her here—again. Or perhaps he’d been pushed this way by something else entirely. The man’s voice had been sharp with urgency when they’d met in the back room of the bar, his dark eyes flicking over her face like he was assessing more than just her badge. *Unlicensed medical treatments,* he’d said, his voice rough from years of handling the unseen. *You shouldn’t be here.* She’d ignored him. Now, the rain pattered against her umbrella like a thousand tiny knives, and the city hummed around her—a distant siren, a car backfiring, the occasional laugh from a group of drunken revelers. Quinn’s fingers tightened around the grip of her revolver, the weight familiar, comforting. She’d been a cop for eighteen years. She knew how to move in the dark. Ahead, the street widened into a blur of neon and movement. Tomás had vanished into the crowd, but Quinn didn’t need to see him to know he was there. The way he’d darted into the shadows, the way his scar had glinted under the bar’s sickly green light—it was all there in the way his breath hitched when he’d looked at her. *He’s lying.* But then again, so was she. The first step down into the subway tunnel was a sharp drop, the air thick with the scent of damp stone and something older, something rotten. Quinn’s boots sank into the grime as she descended, her breath coming faster. The tunnel was narrow, the walls slick with condensation, the flickering fluorescent lights casting long, wavering shadows. She could hear the distant murmur of voices, the clink of metal, the occasional gasp. Then she saw it—a flicker of movement in the darkness ahead. A figure crouched near the entrance to *The Veil Market*, the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The bone token hung from their throat, glinting dully in the dim light. Quinn’s pulse spiked. *This isn’t just some underground market. It’s a black market for things that shouldn’t exist.* She stepped forward, her boots crunching on broken glass. The figure turned, and Quinn’s stomach dropped. It wasn’t Tomás. It was someone else—someone with eyes too sharp, too knowing. A man in a long coat, his face half-lit by the sickly glow of a flickering lantern. “You’re late,” the stranger said, his voice smooth, amused. Quinn didn’t lower her weapon. “Who the hell are you?” The man smirked, his fingers brushing against something hidden beneath his coat. “Just another customer. And you’re not supposed to be here.” Quinn’s mind raced. Tomás had mentioned a *clique*—a group involved in something far worse than simple black-market deals. She’d seen the way he’d looked at her, the way he’d hesitated when she’d asked about his past. *He’s protecting someone.* But who? The stranger’s smile faded. “You’re not supposed to be following me.” Quinn didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. A shadow moved behind her. Tomás. He was there, hidden in the darkness, his presence a physical force. Quinn turned just in time to see the stranger’s hand snap toward his throat. Tomás didn’t hesitate—he lunged, his knife flashing in the dim light. Blood sprayed, and the stranger staggered back, his eyes wide with shock. “You bastard,” the stranger hissed, but Quinn didn’t care. She didn’t have time for this. She fired. The bullet struck true, sending the stranger crashing into the wall. He didn’t move. Tomás exhaled sharply, his breath ragged. “You shouldn’t have come.” Quinn holstered her weapon, her hands shaking. “I don’t have a choice.” Tomás looked at her, his eyes dark with something unreadable. “You’re not safe here anymore.” Quinn didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The Veil Market pulsed ahead, its secrets waiting to be uncovered. And she was determined to find out what they were. She took a step forward. The rain kept falling.
total_cost0.00007284

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount726
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount726
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"wavering"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"comforting"
4"wavering"
5"flicker"
6"glinting"
7"pulse"
8"stomach"
9"raced"
10"unreadable"
11"pulsed"
12"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences64
matches
0"p with urgency"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords34
totalWords720
ratio0.047
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"Unlicensed medical treatments,"
2"You shouldn’t be here."
3"He’s lying."
4"The Veil Market"
5"This isn’t just some underground market. It’s a black market for things that shouldn’t exist."
6"clique"
7"He’s protecting someone."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount680
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Herrera1
Veil2
Tube1
Camden1
Tomás8
Market2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Herrera"
4"Tomás"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.544
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount720
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean24
std24.4
cv1.017
sampleLengths
083
169
23
360
462
52
66
771
811
947
1046
119
1210
1322
1439
152
1611
177
185
191
2049
2115
222
2314
2410
2512
2615
2728
285
294
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"been pushed"
1"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was assessing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences70
ratio0.1
matches
0"Tomás Herrera had led her here—again."
1"Now, the rain pattered against her umbrella like a thousand tiny knives, and the city hummed around her—a distant siren, a car backfiring, the occasional laugh from a group of drunken revelers."
2"The way he’d darted into the shadows, the way his scar had glinted under the bar’s sickly green light—it was all there in the way his breath hitched when he’d looked at her."
3"Then she saw it—a flicker of movement in the darkness ahead."
4"It was someone else—someone with eyes too sharp, too knowing."
5"Tomás had mentioned a *clique*—a group involved in something far worse than simple black-market deals."
6"Tomás didn’t hesitate—he lunged, his knife flashing in the dim light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount689
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.026124818577648767
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00725689404934688
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean10.29
std7.86
cv0.764
sampleLengths
026
130
227
36
411
534
614
74
83
932
1013
117
128
1311
1418
1533
162
176
1826
1913
2017
2115
2211
2316
2413
253
266
279
289
297
303
3110
3217
339
345
355
3612
3710
383
3915
4018
413
422
434
447
453
464
475
481
4912
45.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners21
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then she saw it—a flicker"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences60
matches
0"*You shouldn’t be here.*"
1"She’d ignored him."
2"She’d been a cop for"
3"She knew how to move"
4"She could hear the distant"
5"It’s a black market for"
6"She stepped forward, her boots"
7"It wasn’t Tomás."
8"It was someone else—someone with"
9"She’d seen the way he’d"
10"*He’s protecting someone.*"
11"She didn’t have to."
12"He was there, hidden in"
13"She didn’t have time for"
14"He didn’t move."
15"She didn’t have to."
16"She took a step forward."
ratio0.283
18.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences60
matches
0"The neon glow of *The"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"The scent of old leather"
3"Tomás Herrera had led her"
4"The man’s voice had been"
5"*You shouldn’t be here.*"
6"She’d ignored him."
7"Quinn’s fingers tightened around the"
8"She’d been a cop for"
9"She knew how to move"
10"Tomás had vanished into the"
11"The way he’d darted into"
12"The first step down into"
13"Quinn’s boots sank into the"
14"The tunnel was narrow, the"
15"She could hear the distant"
16"A figure crouched near the"
17"The bone token hung from"
18"Quinn’s pulse spiked."
19"*This isn’t just some underground"
ratio0.883
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Now, the rain pattered against"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The scent of old leather and damp earth clung to the alley behind her, a familiar, unsettling mix that told her the hunt was far from over."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the stranger said, his voice smooth, amused"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the stranger hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.25
78.9643%