Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMM7G3CWS4NS1181N0MF7E

Run Details

Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.007700

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, the chain rattling like a warning. There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe as if he owned the place, one pale eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his. His charcoal suit was immaculate, the ivory handle of his cane gleaming under the dim hallway light, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with unsettling precision. Rory’s breath hitched. She hadn’t seen him in six months. Six months of silence, of pretending she didn’t still wake up some nights with the ghost of his touch on her skin. “You’re not Eva,” he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. “No,” Rory replied, gripping the edge of the door. “She’s at the shop.” Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, chose that moment to slink between Lucien’s legs, tail flicking in disdain. Lucien didn’t so much as glance down. His gaze remained fixed on Rory, unreadable. “Then I suppose I’ll have to settle for you.” The words were light, but the weight behind them wasn’t. Rory’s fingers tightened. “What do you want, Lucien?” He pushed off the doorframe, stepping inside without invitation. The scent of him—bergamot and something darker, something that always made her think of storm clouds—filled the cramped flat. “Can’t a man visit an old friend?” “You don’t have friends,” she said, shutting the door harder than necessary. The three deadbolts clicked into place like the final notes of a dirge. Lucien smirked, turning to take in the chaos of Eva’s flat—towers of books teetering on every available surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the faint scent of curry clinging to the air. “Still charming, I see.” Rory crossed her arms. “You didn’t answer my question.” He sighed, tapping his cane against the floor. The sound was sharp, deliberate. “Fine. I need your help.” “Of course you do.” “It’s about the Black Ledger.” Rory stilled. The Black Ledger was no joke—a tome rumored to hold the names of every supernatural being in London, mortal and otherwise. Eva had been hunting it for months. And Lucien? Lucien had always been the one to profit from such things. “Eva’s not here,” Rory said carefully. “I know.” He turned, his amber eye catching the light. “I came for you.” The words hung between them, heavy with implication. Rory’s pulse jumped. She could still remember the last time he’d said something like that—*Stay. Just for tonight.*—before vanishing at dawn without a word. She forced herself to exhale. “Why me?” Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint scar along his jawline, the one he’d gotten in Marseille years ago. “Because you’re the only one who can get into the Vault without setting off the wards.” The Vault. A high-security supernatural bank beneath the Thames, where the Ledger was rumored to be kept. Rory had broken into harder places, but never with Lucien at her side. Never with the weight of their history pressing down on her. “And why would I do that?” she asked, voice steadier than she felt. His black eye gleamed. “Because you owe me.” The air left her lungs. *Owe him?* After everything—after the way he’d left, after the way he’d made her feel like she was the only person in the world before deciding she wasn’t worth staying for—he had the audacity to say that? Rory’s hands curled into fists. “I don’t owe you a damn thing.” Lucien tilted his head, studying her. Then, slowly, he reached out, brushing his thumb over the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. The touch was light, but it burned. “Don’t you?” She jerked back, heart hammering. “Get out.” For a moment, he just looked at her, something unreadable flickering in his gaze. Then he nodded, stepping back. “Fine. But the Ledger surfaces in three days. If you change your mind—” “I won’t.” He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “We’ll see.” The door clicked shut behind him, leaving Rory standing in the middle of Eva’s flat, her skin still tingling where he’d touched her. Ptolemy wound around her ankles, purring, but the sound was lost beneath the roar of her own thoughts. She should have slammed the door in his face. Should have told him to go to hell. But as she stared at the closed door, her fingers traced the scar on her wrist, and she wondered if maybe—just maybe—she already had.
total_cost0.0077

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.08
86.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount746
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount746
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count2
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"implication"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"gleaming"
2"silence"
3"unreadable"
4"weight"
5"implication"
6"pulse"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
90.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches
0"think"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords735
ratio0.008
matches
0"Stay. Just for tonight."
1"Owe him?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount614
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Lucien9
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Eva4
Black1
Ledger2
London1
Marseille1
Vault1
Thames1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
2"Thames"
globalScore0.523
windowScore0.667
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like that—*Stay"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount735
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean22.27
std15.48
cv0.695
sampleLengths
070
132
210
313
430
59
618
735
825
937
109
1118
124
135
1443
156
1614
1732
187
1939
2041
2113
228
2342
2412
2530
267
2732
282
2910
3041
3117
3224
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"was rumored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences74
ratio0.122
matches
0"There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe as if he owned the place, one pale eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his."
1"His charcoal suit was immaculate, the ivory handle of his cane gleaming under the dim hallway light, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with unsettling precision."
2"The scent of him—bergamot and something darker, something that always made her think of storm clouds—filled the cramped flat."
3"Lucien smirked, turning to take in the chaos of Eva’s flat—towers of books teetering on every available surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the faint scent of curry clinging to the air."
4"The Black Ledger was no joke—a tome rumored to hold the names of every supernatural being in London, mortal and otherwise."
5"She could still remember the last time he’d said something like that—*Stay."
6"Just for tonight.*—before vanishing at dawn without a word."
7"*Owe him?* After everything—after the way he’d left, after the way he’d made her feel like she was the only person in the world before deciding she wasn’t worth staying for—he had the audacity to say that?"
8"But as she stared at the closed door, her fingers traced the scar on her wrist, and she wondered if maybe—just maybe—she already had."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount627
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03508771929824561
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004784688995215311
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean9.93
std7.6
cv0.765
sampleLengths
017
124
229
33
47
522
610
79
84
916
107
117
129
1310
143
155
169
1719
187
1912
2013
2133
224
234
245
258
265
275
284
295
302
3121
327
332
3411
356
3610
374
388
393
4012
419
425
432
4423
4516
462
4715
4813
4911
72.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.44594594594594594
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences52
matches
0"Just for tonight.*—before vanishing at"
1"Then, slowly, he reached out,"
2"Then he nodded, stepping back."
ratio0.058
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences52
matches
0"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
1"She hadn’t seen him in"
2"he said, voice smooth as"
3"His gaze remained fixed on"
4"He pushed off the doorframe,"
5"she said, shutting the door"
6"He sighed, tapping his cane"
7"He turned, his amber eye"
8"She could still remember the"
9"She forced herself to exhale."
10"she asked, voice steadier than"
11"His black eye gleamed."
12"She jerked back, heart hammering."
13"He smiled, but it didn’t"
14"She should have slammed the"
ratio0.288
46.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences52
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning"
2"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
3"Rory’s breath hitched."
4"She hadn’t seen him in"
5"he said, voice smooth as"
6"Rory replied, gripping the edge"
7"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, chose"
8"Lucien didn’t so much as"
9"His gaze remained fixed on"
10"The words were light, but"
11"Rory’s fingers tightened."
12"He pushed off the doorframe,"
13"The scent of him—bergamot and"
14"she said, shutting the door"
15"The three deadbolts clicked into"
16"Lucien smirked, turning to take"
17"Rory crossed her arms."
18"He sighed, tapping his cane"
19"The sound was sharp, deliberate."
ratio0.827
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe as if he owned the place, one pale eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey"
1"He turned, his amber eye catching the light"
2"she asked, voice steadier than she felt"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.2885%