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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMM7G3CWS4NS1181N0MF7E
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Model:
Mistral Large
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.007700
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The door swung open before Rory could turn the last deadbolt, the chain rattling like a warning. There he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe as if he owned the place, one pale eyebrow arched in that infuriating way of his. His charcoal suit was immaculate, the ivory handle of his cane
gleaming
under the dim hallway light, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with unsettling precision. Rory’s breath hitched. She hadn’t seen him in six months. Six months of silence, of pretending she didn’t still wake up some nights with the ghost of his touch on her skin. “You’re not Eva,” he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. “No,” Rory replied, gripping the edge of the door. “She’s at the shop.” Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat,
chose that moment
to slink between Lucien’s legs, tail flicking in disdain. Lucien didn’t so much as glance down. His gaze remained fixed on Rory,
unreadable
. “Then I suppose I’ll have to settle for you.” The words were light, but the
weight
behind them wasn’t. Rory’s fingers tightened. “What do you want, Lucien?” He pushed off the doorframe, stepping inside without invitation. The scent of him—bergamot and something darker, something that always made her
think
of storm clouds—filled the cramped flat. “Can’t a man visit an old friend?” “You don’t have friends,” she said, shutting the door harder than necessary. The three deadbolts clicked into place like the final notes of a dirge. Lucien smirked, turning to take in the chaos of Eva’s flat—towers of books teetering on every available surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the faint scent of curry clinging to the air. “Still charming, I see.” Rory crossed her arms. “You didn’t answer my question.” He sighed, tapping his cane against the floor. The sound was sharp, deliberate. “Fine. I need your help.” “Of course you do.” “It’s about the Black Ledger.” Rory stilled. The Black Ledger was no joke—a tome rumored to hold the names of every supernatural being in London, mortal and otherwise. Eva had been hunting it for months. And Lucien? Lucien had always been the one to profit from such things. “Eva’s not here,” Rory said
carefully
. “I know.” He turned, his amber eye catching the light. “I came for you.” The words hung between them, heavy with implication. Rory’s pulse jumped. She could still remember the last time he’d said something like that—*Stay. Just for tonight.*—before vanishing at dawn without a word. She forced herself to exhale. “Why me?” Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint scar along his jawline, the one he’d gotten in Marseille years ago. “Because you’re the only one who can get into the Vault without setting off the wards.” The Vault. A high-security supernatural bank beneath the Thames, where the Ledger
was rumored
to be kept. Rory had broken into harder places, but never with Lucien at her side. Never with the
weight
of their history pressing down on her. “And why would I
do that?” she
asked, voice steadier than she felt. His black eye gleamed. “Because you owe me.” The air left her lungs. *Owe him?* After everything—after the way he’d left, after the way he’d made her
feel
like she was the only person in the world before deciding she wasn’t worth staying for—he had the audacity to say that? Rory’s hands curled into fists. “I don’t owe you a damn thing.” Lucien tilted his head, studying her. Then,
slowly
, he reached out, brushing his thumb over the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. The touch was light, but it burned. “Don’t you?” She jerked back, heart hammering. “Get out.” For a moment, he just looked at her, something
unreadable
flickering in his gaze. Then he nodded, stepping back. “Fine. But the Ledger surfaces in three days. If you change your mind—” “I won’t.” He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “We’ll see.” The door clicked shut behind him, leaving Rory standing in the middle of Eva’s flat, her skin still tingling where he’d touched her. Ptolemy wound around her ankles, purring, but the sound was lost beneath the roar of her own thoughts. She should have slammed the door in his face. Should have told him to go to hell. But as she stared at the closed door, her fingers traced the scar on her wrist, and she wondered if maybe—just maybe—she already had.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
66.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Rory said carefully [carefully]"
73.2620%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
748
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
33.1551%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
748
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"gleaming"
count
1
1
word
"unreadable"
count
2
2
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"gleaming"
1
"unreadable"
2
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
55
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
55
filterMatches
0
"think"
1
"feel"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
74
matches
0
"chose that moment"
1
"do that?” she"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
33
mean
22.27
std
15.48
cv
0.695
sampleLengths
0
70
1
32
2
10
3
13
4
30
5
9
6
18
7
35
8
25
9
37
10
9
11
18
12
4
13
5
14
43
15
6
16
14
17
32
18
7
19
39
20
41
21
13
22
8
23
42
24
12
25
30
26
7
27
32
28
2
29
10
30
41
31
17
32
24
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
55
matches
0
"was rumored"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
106
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
627
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.03508771929824561
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.004784688995215311
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
74
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
74
mean
9.93
std
7.6
cv
0.765
sampleLengths
0
17
1
24
2
29
3
3
4
7
5
22
6
10
7
9
8
4
9
16
10
7
11
7
12
9
13
10
14
3
15
5
16
9
17
19
18
7
19
12
20
13
21
33
22
4
23
4
24
5
25
8
26
5
27
5
28
4
29
5
30
2
31
21
32
7
33
2
34
11
35
6
36
10
37
4
38
8
39
3
40
12
41
9
42
5
43
2
44
23
45
16
46
2
47
15
48
13
49
11
72.9730%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.44594594594594594
totalSentences
74
uniqueOpeners
33
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey (say, voice age)"
1
"Rory replied, gripping the edge of the door (reply, grip)"
2
"she said, shutting the door harder than necessary (say, shut)"
3
"Rory said carefully (say carefully)"
85.0622%