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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMMARMTAAXDB398BZ2AJS8
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Model:
Ministral 3B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
4.0s
Cost:
$0.000078
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The door creaked open before Aurora had a chance to steady her breath. The air inside was thick with the scent of old paper and something faintly metallic—like the edge of a blade she’d once left behind. The flat was dim, the only light coming from the single bulb over the desk, casting long shadows across the shelves of books and scrolls. She didn’t move, just stood there, her fingers curling around the doorknob, her pulse hammering against her wrist beneath the crescent scar. Then the door swung inward. Lucien stood there, his tailored charcoal suit crisp against the damp London air, his cane resting against the wall like an extension of himself. His heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers, one amber, one black, and for a heartbeat, the world narrowed to that gaze. He exhaled
slowly
, as if he’d been holding his breath for years. “Aurora,” he said, his voice low and smooth, like
velvet
over steel. “I didn’t expect to find you here.” She didn’t flinch. Didn’t step back. Didn’t pretend she wasn’t here. “Neither did I,” she admitted, her voice quieter than she meant it to be. The flat felt
suddenly
too small, the air too tight, as if the walls
were closing
in around them both. Lucien’s lips twisted into something that might have been a smile if it hadn’t been so sharp. “You shouldn’t have come.” Aurora turned her head just enough to see the scar on his knuckles—the one she’d given him years ago when they’d fought over something she couldn’t remember. She swallowed hard. “I didn’t come for that.” He stepped closer, the cane tapping against the floor, and she couldn’t help but watch the way the shadows played across his face. “Then why?” She didn’t answer right away. Instead, she reached for the doorknob again, her fingers trembling just enough that he might notice. “I needed to see you.” Lucien’s expression darkened. “You’ve seen me before.” “And I’ll see you again,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her throat felt raw. “But not like this.” He scoffed, but there was no humor in it. “Like what?” She turned, walking toward the desk where the cat, Ptolemy, blinked up at them with one golden eye. “Like the way I left you.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “You left me because you were afraid.” “And you let me,” she shot back, her voice rising just a little. “You let me walk away.” He reached out, his fingers brushing against hers before she could pull away. The contact
sent a jolt through
her, sharp and electric. “I didn’t let you.” Aurora pulled back, her breath catching. “You didn’t have to.” “No,” he said, his voice rough. “I didn’t.” The flat was silent except for the hum of the old refrigerator in the corner, the faint rustle of pages from the books on the shelf. Aurora sat on the edge of the bed, her back against the headboard, and Lucien sank onto the edge of the desk, his cane tapping against the wood. “Why did you come back?” she asked, her fingers tracing the edge of a leather-bound journal. Lucien’s gaze was intense, searching. “Because I couldn’t stop thinking about you.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. “You couldn’t stop thinking about me?” “Not just that,” he said, his voice low. “The way you looked at me. The way you *were* when you were angry. The way you were when you were afraid. It’s been years, Aurora. And I still remember.” She exhaled
sharply
, her chest tight. “And you still let me go.” “No,” he said, his voice firm. “I didn’t.” She looked away, her fingers stilling. “You didn’t have to.” Lucien reached for her hand, his thumb brushing over the scar on her wrist. She didn’t pull away this time. “I wanted to.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “You wanted to what?” “To fix it,” he said, his voice rough. “To make it right.” She turned to face him, her eyes burning with something she couldn’t name. “You always did.” Lucien’s gaze darkened. “I always did.” The silence between them was thick, charged with
unspoken
words. Then,
slowly
, Aurora reached up and touched his face, her fingers brushing against the stubble on his jaw. “You’re here because you care,” she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. Lucien’s lips parted, and for a moment, she thought he might kiss her. Instead, he leaned in, his breath warm against her ear. “I care about you.” Aurora’s heart pounded against her ribs. “Then why did you let me leave?” Lucien’s hands found her waist, pulling her closer. “Because I was afraid of what would happen if I didn’t.” Aurora’s breath caught. “What would happen?” He kissed her then, slow and deep, his hands cradling her face as if he could memorize every inch of her. When he pulled back, his eyes were dark, his voice rough. “I was afraid of losing you.” Aurora’s fingers tangled in his hair, pulling him closer. “And now?” Lucien’s lips brushed against her forehead. “Now I’m afraid of not having you.” The flat felt like a cage, but it was the only one they had left. And for the first time in years, Aurora Carter didn’t want to escape.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
66.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"she shot back, her voice rising just a little [just]"
1
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
42.7262%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
873
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
2
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
3
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"sharply"
1
"slowly"
2
"suddenly"
3
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
77.0905%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
873
totalAiIsms
2
found
0
word
"velvet"
count
1
1
word
"unspoken"
count
1
highlights
0
"velvet"
1
"unspoken"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"sent a jolt through"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
59
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
59
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
91
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
41
mean
21.24
std
15.99
cv
0.753
sampleLengths
0
84
1
5
2
56
3
19
4
11
5
34
6
21
7
35
8
25
9
26
10
7
11
21
12
11
13
24
14
10
15
18
16
27
17
10
18
8
19
54
20
16
21
12
22
9
23
38
24
12
25
8
26
10
27
23
28
7
29
12
30
16
31
6
32
41
33
27
34
13
35
19
36
6
37
38
38
11
39
13
40
28
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
59
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
116
matches
0
"were closing"
93.1465%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
669
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
32
adverbRatio
0.04783258594917788
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.01195814648729447
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
91
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
91
mean
9.57
std
7.14
cv
0.746
sampleLengths
0
13
1
24
2
25
3
22
4
5
5
24
6
20
7
12
8
12
9
7
10
3
11
3
12
5
13
14
14
20
15
17
16
4
17
27
18
3
19
5
20
23
21
2
22
5
23
16
24
5
25
3
26
4
27
17
28
4
29
9
30
2
31
18
32
6
33
3
34
7
35
13
36
5
37
13
38
10
39
4
40
6
41
4
42
6
43
2
44
26
45
28
46
16
47
5
48
7
49
3
45.6044%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.25274725274725274
totalSentences
91
uniqueOpeners
23
75.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"he said, his voice low and smooth, like velvet over steel (say, like)"
1
"she admitted, her voice quieter than she meant it to be (admit, mean be)"
2
"she said, her voice steady despite the way her throat felt raw (say, feel)"
3
"she shot back, her voice rising just a little (shoot back, rise just)"
88.2491%