Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMMENGYS906ZEVNBTQ6J6V

Run Details

Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.014112

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed like the ribs of some long-dead titan, their gnarled oak trunks blackened with age and veined with silver moss. Aurora hesitated at the threshold, her breath curling in the crisp November air. The Heartstone pendant against her collarbone pulsed once, a warm throb beneath her fingers, as if confirming what she already knew—this was no ordinary grove. Nyx materialized beside her, their violet eyes flickering like dying embers in the dim light. "The air tastes different here," they murmured, voice like wind through dry leaves. "Old magic. Hungry magic." Isolde stepped between the stones first, her silver hair catching the pale sunlight as she turned. She left no footprints in the frost-kissed grass. "Come," she said, and though her words were simple, they carried the weight of a command. "The grove does not suffer hesitation." Aurora followed, the soles of her boots sinking into damp earth that smelled of loam and something sweeter—honeysuckle, perhaps, though it was far too late in the year for such blooms. The moment she crossed the boundary, the world seemed to exhale. The distant hum of London traffic faded, replaced by the whisper of leaves and the distant chime of what might have been bells, or perhaps wind through crystal. The trees here were wrong. Not in the way of blight or decay, but in the way of dreams—too tall, their bark too smooth, their branches twisting in impossible spirals. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous color, petals too vivid, too *alive*, as if each one had been painted by a hand that loved beauty too much. Aurora crouched, brushing her fingers against a cluster of bluebells that shimmered like stained glass. When she pulled her hand back, her fingertips were dusted with gold. Nyx hissed. "Do not touch what you do not understand." "Too late for that," Aurora muttered, wiping her hand on her jeans. The gold didn’t smear. Isolde laughed, the sound like wind chimes. "The grove gives gifts to those it favors. It takes from those it does not." She plucked a single bloom from the air—it hadn’t been there a moment before—and tucked it behind Aurora’s ear. "A token. The grove remembers kindness." Aurora touched the flower. It was cool and smooth as glass. They moved deeper, following a path that hadn’t been there a moment ago. The trees pressed closer, their leaves murmuring in a language just beyond comprehension. Aurora’s skin prickled. She had spent her life in cities, where the world was measured in concrete and steel, in the predictable rhythm of traffic lights and closing times. Here, the rules bent. The air hummed with unseen energy, raising the fine hairs on her arms. Nyx’s form flickered, their edges blurring like smoke. "The Veil is thin here," they said. "I could slip through. See what lies beyond." Isolde’s lavender eyes darkened. "And risk being trapped in the spaces between? No. The grove is safe, but its borders are not." Aurora’s fingers drifted to the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The metal was cold, even through the sheath. "How much farther?" "Far enough that you will wonder if we are still in Richmond," Isolde said. "Close enough that you will know we are not." The path opened into a clearing, and Aurora’s breath caught. A pool of water lay at its center, so still it might have been glass. But it wasn’t the water that held her gaze—it was the sky reflected in it. Not the pale, overcast gray of an English autumn, but a swirling vortex of colors: deep violets, molten golds, the bruised purples of a storm. Stars flickered in its depths, though it was barely past noon. Nyx stepped to the water’s edge, their reflection wavering, shifting—sometimes solid, sometimes a shadow without form. "A scrying pool," they said. "But not one I know." Isolde knelt, dipping her fingers into the water. Ripples spread outward, distorting the sky. "It shows what is, what was, and what may be. But only if you know how to ask." Aurora crouched beside her. The water was warm, almost alive. When she pulled her hand back, droplets clung to her skin like mercury before sinking in, leaving no trace. "Can it show us Hel?" Isolde’s gaze flicked to the Heartstone pendant. "It can. But the price of such knowledge is never small." Nyx’s voice was a whisper. "Then we pay it." Aurora hesitated. She had spent years running from things she couldn’t control, from men who thought her silence was permission, from the weight of expectations that weren’t hers to bear. But this—this was different. This was a choice. A step forward, not a flight. She reached into the water. The moment her fingers broke the surface, the world *tilted*. The grove vanished. The sky above her was no longer sky at all, but a vast, amber expanse, heavy with the scent of ripe fruit and something darker—smoke, perhaps, or the iron tang of blood. Below her feet, the ground was soft, loamy, giving way to rows of vines heavy with grapes the size of her fist, their skins so dark they seemed to drink the light. Dymas. She knew it the way she knew her own name. A figure moved between the vines—a woman with skin like polished mahogany, her hands stained purple with juice. She turned, and her eyes were entirely black, pupil and iris swallowed by void. "You are not welcome here, little moth," she said, her voice like honey laced with poison. "The Prince does not suffer trespassers." Aurora’s pulse roared in her ears. She tried to step back, but the ground held her fast, roots coiling around her ankles like serpents. The woman smiled, revealing teeth too sharp, too numerous. "But perhaps he will make an exception. For one who carries his mark." The Heartstone pendant burned against Aurora’s skin. Then— Pain. A scream tore from her throat as the vision shattered, hurling her back into the grove. She collapsed onto the damp earth, gasping, her wrist throbbing where the crescent scar had split open, weeping blood. Nyx was at her side in an instant, their hands—solid now, warm—gripping her shoulders. "Breathe," they commanded. "You are here. You are *here*." Isolde pressed a hand to Aurora’s forehead. Her touch was cool, soothing. "The grove protects its own," she murmured. "But the Veil remembers wounds given in its sight." Aurora’s breath came in ragged gulps. The pendant at her throat was cold now, its glow extinguished. "What the hell was that?" Nyx’s voice was grim. "A warning. Or an invitation." Isolde stood, her silver hair catching the light as she turned toward the path. "Both," she said. "And neither. The grove has shown you what it wished. Now we leave." Aurora let Nyx pull her to her feet. Her legs trembled, but she forced herself to stand straight. The flower behind her ear had wilted, its petals crumbling to dust. As they turned to go, the scrying pool rippled once more, though no hand touched it. For the briefest moment, Aurora thought she saw a face in the water—her own, but older, harder, her bright blue eyes shadowed with something like grief. Then it was gone. The path back was shorter, or perhaps time itself had bent to Isolde’s will. When they stepped between the standing stones, the noise of the city rushed back in—a car horn, the distant wail of a siren, the bark of a dog. The grove exhaled behind them, and then it was just another patch of Richmond Park, the standing stones nothing more than ancient oaks, the wildflowers ordinary blooms. Aurora touched her wrist. The scar was whole again, though it ached. Nyx’s form solidified beside her, their silhouette sharp against the gray sky. "You felt it, didn’t you? The pull." Aurora didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The Heartstone pendant was warm again.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.9249% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"wavering"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"throb"
1"flickered"
2"flicked"
3"shimmered"
4"wavering"
5"trembled"
6"loomed"
7"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.89
std23.26
cv0.778
sampleLengths
061
132
246
370
484
510
616
747
811
972
1023
1122
1221
1323
1410
1566
1626
1732
1834
1918
209
2144
225
2377
241
2510
2654
2746
287
291
301
3158
3228
3322
349
3530
3630
3742
384
3969
4012
4119
427
436
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences97
matches
0"been painted"
1"were dusted"
2"was measured"
3"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
98.5417% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1104
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.041666666666666664
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018115942028985507
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean11.14
std7.84
cv0.704
sampleLengths
023
113
225
315
413
54
616
78
816
96
1031
1111
1228
135
1425
1527
1615
1712
182
198
2012
214
227
2334
246
254
267
2713
2813
293
3026
314
3213
338
347
358
364
3718
3810
398
403
4114
429
4310
4415
4515
4625
4711
4816
495
48.8701% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3135593220338983
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners37
25.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"they murmured, voice like wind through dry leaves (murmur)"
1"she said, and though her words were simple, they carried the weight of a command (say, be carry)"
2"Aurora muttered, wiping her hand on her jeans (mutter, wipe)"
3"she said, her voice like honey laced with poison (say, lace)"
4"they commanded (command)"
5"she murmured (murmur)"
88.0786%