| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Whitley offered already [already]" | | 1 | "Quinn said abruptly [abruptly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 78.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1657 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1657 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "intricate" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "standard" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "pristine" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1648 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1165 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.58 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 30 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Whitley | 10 | | Eva | 12 | | Morris | 2 | | London | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Sergeant" | | 3 | "Whitley" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.212 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 48.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like polished bone, carved with in" | | 1 | "sounded like the kind of paranormal nonsen" | | 2 | "seemed suddenly distant as if heard through water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.607 | | wordCount | 1648 | | matches | | 0 | "not murdered in the conventional sense, but abandoned" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 74 | | mean | 22.27 | | std | 12.9 | | cv | 0.579 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "been caught" | | 1 | "been found" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn's gaze traveled past her colleague to the peculiar markings on the wall behind him—chalk symbols hastily wiped away but still faintly visible under her flashlight's harsh glare." | | 1 | "It wasn't standard police equipment—Eva had pressed it into her hands three days ago with an urgency that Quinn had initially dismissed." | | 2 | "Quinn stepped back to give them room, but not before noticing something else—a faint discoloration on the victim's throat, visible only when the light hit it just right." | | 3 | "Her attention had been caught by something else—a glint of metal half-submerged in a puddle near where the body had lain." | | 4 | "The wall was blank—completely clean, as if freshly washed." | | 5 | "The wall ahead looked ordinary enough—dirty tiles, decades of grime, a few patches of moss where moisture seeped through." | | 6 | "Quinn understood suddenly why these victims had been found as they were—not murdered in the conventional sense, but abandoned." |
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| 91.61% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1176 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.0467687074829932 | | lyAdverbCount | 27 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02295918367346939 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 12.3 | | std | 6.74 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 81.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 67 | |
| 35.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, her hand passed through" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She made no comment on" | | 1 | "Her tone made it clear" | | 2 | "She knelt beside the body," | | 3 | "She pocketed it without Whitley" | | 4 | "It wasn't standard police equipment—Eva" | | 5 | "Her phone vibrated in her" | | 6 | "They had rolled the victim" | | 7 | "Her attention had been caught" | | 8 | "She fished it out with" | | 9 | "she instructed, handing it to" | | 10 | "she said without preamble when" | | 11 | "It sounded like madness." | | 12 | "It sounded like the kind" | | 13 | "She withdrew quickly, heart pounding." | | 14 | "She thought of Eva's warnings." | | 15 | "She had always prided herself" | | 16 | "It was time to pay" |
| | ratio | 0.179 | |
| 81.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass needle swung north," | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn clicked her" | | 2 | "Quinn finished for him, stepping" | | 3 | "The victim lay face-up, arms" | | 4 | "Quinn said, her flashlight beam" | | 5 | "Whitley suggested with a shrug" | | 6 | "Quinn's gaze traveled past her" | | 7 | "She made no comment on" | | 8 | "Her tone made it clear" | | 9 | "She knelt beside the body," | | 10 | "CSI would arrive soon enough," | | 11 | "The body was cool but" | | 12 | "Quinn nodded absently, attention fixed" | | 13 | "A token of some kind." | | 14 | "She pocketed it without Whitley" | | 15 | "Whitley observed, gesturing at the" | | 16 | "Quinn said, ignoring his comment" | | 17 | "The forensic team had arrived." | | 18 | "Whitley offered, already turning away" | | 19 | "Quinn replied, waiting until he" |
| | ratio | 0.758 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Whitley could answer, the" | | 1 | "Now she realized how much" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass needle swung north, trembled, then reoriented toward an impossible direction that existed in no earthly compass rose." | | 1 | "The victim lay face-up, arms and legs arranged with unnatural precision, as if positioned by a mortician rather than dropped by a killer." | | 2 | "They had rolled the victim onto his side, revealing a peculiar marking on the back of his neck: a symbol that matched one of those partially erased from the wal…" | | 3 | "Of DS Morris, who had vanished while investigating reports of impossible trading in London's forgotten spaces." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "said Sergeant Whitley, his flashlight beam skittering across the damp tunnel walls" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her flashlight beam illuminating faded tile work" |
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| 60.71% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Whitley suggested (suggest)" | | 1 | "Whitley added (add)" | | 2 | "Whitley observed (observe)" | | 3 | "she insisted (insist)" | | 4 | "Eva confirmed (confirm)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.313 | | effectiveRatio | 0.179 | |