Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMPZPWPA97PH0SSBTHMH1M

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Duration:
6.5s
Cost:
$0.000109

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The brass knocker scraped against the doorframe before it swung open, the hinges groaning like old bones. Aurora Carter stepped back, her fingers twitching toward the small knife tucked into her boot—just in case. But there was no need. The door creaked wider, and inside, the scent of aged paper and something faintly metallic hung in the air, thick with the weight of years. Lucien Moreau stood there, his cane resting against the doorframe, his tailored suit draped over his shoulders like a second skin. His hair was slicked back just so, but his eyes—one amber, one black—burned with a familiarity that made Aurora’s pulse jump. She exhaled slowly, her breath fogging the air between them. “You shouldn’t have come,” she said, voice steadier than she felt. Lucien smirked, but it was laced with something darker. “I always do what I think is necessary.” She stepped aside, the flat coming into focus—bookshelves sagging under the weight of tomes, scrolls, and half-finished sketches, the faint hum of a laptop in the corner. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, blinked up at them from his perch on the windowsill, tail flicking with interest. “You’re not supposed to be here,” Aurora repeated, her voice dropping to a whisper. “You know that.” Lucien didn’t answer right away. He just watched her, as if waiting for her to break. She crossed her arms, the scar on her wrist—small but sharp—standing out against the pale skin. “Why?” His expression didn’t change, but the air between them crackled. “Because you’re the only one who can help me.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “Help you?” “With what’s coming,” he said, voice low. “The things that are hunting me.” The words hung between them, heavy and unspoken. Aurora’s fingers curled into fists. “You don’t have to tell me.” “Do I?” Lucien stepped closer, the cane tapping against the floor. “Or do I get to decide who gets to know?” She should have walked away. She should have locked the door and called the police. But the way he looked at her—like he was seeing her for the first time—made her stomach twist. “What are you talking about?” Lucien exhaled, the scent of his cologne—something sharp and woodsy—filling her nostrils. “The Avaros. They’re coming. And they’re not just after me.” Aurora’s blood ran cold. “What do you mean?” “They want you,” Lucien said, voice rough. “They want what you have.” The words struck like a blade. She should have known. Should have seen it coming. But she hadn’t. And now, here she was, standing in her own flat, staring at a man who had once been her friend, her ally, and now felt like a stranger. “You’re lying,” she said, though her voice wavered. Lucien didn’t deny it. “I’m not. And if you don’t help me, they’ll find you first.” Aurora’s hands trembled. “What do you want from me?” “Protection,” he said simply. “And a way out.” She should have run. But the way his eyes darkened, the way his lips parted just a fraction—it was like the past was pressing against the surface of her skin, raw and painful. “What’s the price?” Lucien’s smile was grim. “You.” Her breath caught. “What?” “You,” he repeated, voice dropping to a growl. “I want you.” Aurora’s mind raced. She should have known. Should have known that the moment he walked through that door, she’d feel it—the pull, the ache, the way her body remembered him even after all this time. But she had pushed him away. She had burned the bridges. “You’re not serious,” she whispered. Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “I’m serious. And if you don’t decide soon, they’ll take you anyway.” Aurora’s heart pounded in her chest. She should have left. She should have called the police. But the way he looked at her, like he was already half inside her, made her stomach twist with something she couldn’t ignore. “What do you want?” she asked again, voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, the sound sharp and deliberate. “You.” Aurora’s breath came fast. “You’re asking me to—” “Yes,” he said, voice rough. “I’m asking you to choose.” The flat felt smaller than ever. The books, the scrolls, the half-finished sketches—it all seemed to press in on her, like the walls were closing in. She should have walked away. She should have locked the door and called the police. But Lucien was standing there, his eyes dark with something she didn’t understand, and she couldn’t look away. “What do you want from me?” she asked again, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s smile was slow, knowing. “You.” Aurora’s fingers curled into fists. “You’re not serious.” Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “I’m serious. And if you don’t decide soon, they’ll take you anyway.” She should have run. She should have called the police. But the way he looked at her, like he was already half inside her, made her stomach twist with something she couldn’t ignore. “What do you want?” she asked again, voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, the sound sharp and deliberate. “You.” Aurora’s breath came fast. “You’re asking me to—” “Yes,” he said, voice rough. “I’m asking you to choose.” The flat felt smaller than ever. The books, the scrolls, the half-finished sketches—it all seemed to press in on her, like the walls were closing in. She should have walked away. She should have locked the door and called the police. But Lucien was standing there, his eyes dark with something she didn’t understand, and she couldn’t look away. Aurora’s eyes burned, her throat tight. She should have known. She should have known that the moment he walked through that door, she’d feel it—the pull, the ache, the way her body remembered him even after all this time. But she had pushed him away. She had burned the bridges. “I don’t know what you want from me,” she said, her voice trembling. Lucien’s smile was slow, knowing. “I want you.” Aurora’s heart hammered in her chest. She should have left. She should have called the police. But the way he looked at her, like he was already half inside her, made her stomach twist with something she couldn’t ignore. “What do you want?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien stepped closer, the cane tapping against the floor. “You.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “You’re not serious.” Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “I’m serious. And if you don’t decide soon, they’ll take you anyway.” She should have run. She should have locked the door and called the police. But the way he looked at her, like he was already half inside her, made her stomach twist with something she couldn’t ignore. “What’s the price?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s smile was grim. “You.” Aurora’s fingers curled into fists. “You’re not serious.” Lucien’s eyes darkened, the amber and black swirling together like a storm. “I’m not asking for anything you can’t give.” She should have fled. She should have screamed. But the air between them was thick, charged with something she couldn’t name. The past pressed against her, raw and painful, and she couldn’t look away. “What do you want?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, the sound sharp and final. “You.” Aurora’s breath came in shallow gasps. The flat felt like it was closing in around her, the books and scrolls and half-finished sketches pressing in like walls. She should have walked away. She should have locked the door and called the police. But Lucien was standing there, his eyes dark with something she didn’t understand, and she couldn’t look away. “You’re asking me to—” “Yes,” he said, voice rough. “I’m asking you to choose.” Aurora’s heart pounded in her chest, a wild, desperate rhythm. She should have run. She should have screamed. But the way he looked at her, like he was already half inside her, made her stomach twist with something she couldn’t ignore. “What do you want?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s smile was slow, knowing. “You.” Aurora’s fingers trembled. “I don’t know what you want from me.” Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unyielding. “I want you.” And for the first time in years, Aurora Carter didn’t know what to do with that.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
50.3546% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count6
highlights
0"slowly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.4468% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"wavered"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count2
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"wavered"
1"trembled"
2"unspoken"
3"weight"
33.3333% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count3
1
label"blood ran cold"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"heart hammered in her chest"
2"blood ran cold"
3"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences162
matches
0"known that the"
1"known that the"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean19.33
std14.27
cv0.738
sampleLengths
064
152
211
317
445
517
633
719
85
913
1019
1121
1238
1322
148
1512
1646
178
1816
199
208
2136
225
234
2411
2546
265
2718
2839
2912
3012
318
3210
3341
3418
3515
366
378
3818
3933
4012
4112
428
4310
4441
4518
4650
4713
488
4939
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was laced"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was seeing"
1"was, standing"
2"were closing"
3"was standing"
4"were closing"
5"was standing"
6"was closing"
7"was standing"
99.8472% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1145
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04017467248908297
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00960698689956332
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean8.59
std6.57
cv0.765
sampleLengths
017
117
25
325
421
521
610
711
89
98
1027
1118
1214
133
145
1511
1616
171
1810
199
203
212
227
236
248
255
266
2711
2810
295
3010
3118
325
3312
3410
354
364
377
385
396
404
415
423
4328
448
454
4612
473
486
494
40.1235% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.1419753086419753
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners23
30.2632% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she said, voice steadier than she felt (say, voice feel)"
1"Aurora repeated, her voice dropping to a whisper (repeat, drop)"
2"he said, voice low (say, voice)"
3"Lucien said, voice rough (say, voice)"
4"she said, though her voice wavered (say, waver)"
5"he said simply (say simply)"
6"he repeated, voice dropping to a growl (repeat, drop)"
7"she whispered (whisper)"
8"he said, voice rough (say, voice)"
9"he said, voice rough (say, voice)"
10"he said, voice rough (say, voice)"
83.0217%