| 70.97% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "she asked again [again]" | | 2 | "she asked again [again]" | | 3 | "she asked again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.323 | | leniency | 0.645 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |
| 75.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1406 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 6 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1406 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "charged" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 5 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 3 |
| | 1 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "heart hammered in her chest" | | 2 | "blood ran cold" | | 3 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1392 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 29 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.52% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1127 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 2.13 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Aurora | 20 | | Lucien | 24 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.435 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if waiting for her to break" | | 1 | "felt like a stranger" | | 2 | "felt like it was closing in around her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1392 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "known that the" | | 1 | "known that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 19.33 | | std | 14.27 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 41 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 50 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 99.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "was laced" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "was seeing" | | 1 | "was, standing" | | 2 | "were closing" | | 3 | "was standing" | | 4 | "were closing" | | 5 | "was standing" | | 6 | "was closing" | | 7 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped back, her fingers twitching toward the small knife tucked into her boot—just in case." | | 1 | "His hair was slicked back just so, but his eyes—one amber, one black—burned with a familiarity that made Aurora’s pulse jump." | | 2 | "She stepped aside, the flat coming into focus—bookshelves sagging under the weight of tomes, scrolls, and half-finished sketches, the faint hum of a laptop in the corner." | | 3 | "She crossed her arms, the scar on her wrist—small but sharp—standing out against the pale skin." | | 4 | "But the way he looked at her—like he was seeing her for the first time—made her stomach twist." | | 5 | "Lucien exhaled, the scent of his cologne—something sharp and woodsy—filling her nostrils." | | 6 | "But the way his eyes darkened, the way his lips parted just a fraction—it was like the past was pressing against the surface of her skin, raw and painful." | | 7 | "Should have known that the moment he walked through that door, she’d feel it—the pull, the ache, the way her body remembered him even after all this time." | | 8 | "The books, the scrolls, the half-finished sketches—it all seemed to press in on her, like the walls were closing in." | | 9 | "The books, the scrolls, the half-finished sketches—it all seemed to press in on her, like the walls were closing in." | | 10 | "She should have known that the moment he walked through that door, she’d feel it—the pull, the ache, the way her body remembered him even after all this time." |
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| 99.85% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1145 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04017467248908297 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00960698689956332 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 8.59 | | std | 6.57 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 40.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.1419753086419753 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.93% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "His hair was slicked back" | | 1 | "She exhaled slowly, her breath" | | 2 | "she said, voice steadier than" | | 3 | "She stepped aside, the flat" | | 4 | "He just watched her, as" | | 5 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 6 | "His expression didn’t change, but" | | 7 | "he said, voice low" | | 8 | "She should have walked away." | | 9 | "She should have locked the" | | 10 | "She should have known." | | 11 | "she said, though her voice" | | 12 | "he said simply" | | 13 | "She should have run." | | 14 | "Her breath caught." | | 15 | "he repeated, voice dropping to" | | 16 | "She should have known." | | 17 | "She had burned the bridges." | | 18 | "She should have left." | | 19 | "She should have called the" |
| | ratio | 0.42 | |
| 39.83% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass knocker scraped against" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped back, her" | | 2 | "The door creaked wider, and" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, his" | | 4 | "His hair was slicked back" | | 5 | "She exhaled slowly, her breath" | | 6 | "she said, voice steadier than" | | 7 | "Lucien smirked, but it was" | | 8 | "She stepped aside, the flat" | | 9 | "Ptolemy, her tabby cat, blinked" | | 10 | "Aurora repeated, her voice dropping" | | 11 | "Lucien didn’t answer right away." | | 12 | "He just watched her, as" | | 13 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 14 | "His expression didn’t change, but" | | 15 | "Aurora’s breath hitched." | | 16 | "he said, voice low" | | 17 | "The words hung between them," | | 18 | "Aurora’s fingers curled into fists." | | 19 | "Lucien stepped closer, the cane" |
| | ratio | 0.84 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "Aurora repeated, her voice dropping to a whisper" | | 2 | "he said, voice low" | | 3 | "Lucien stepped, the cane tapping against the floor" | | 4 | "Lucien said, voice rough" | | 5 | "she said, though her voice wavered" | | 6 | "he repeated, voice dropping to a growl" | | 7 | "she asked again, voice barely above a whisper" | | 8 | "he said, voice rough" | | 9 | "she asked again, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 10 | "she asked again, voice barely above a whisper" | | 11 | "he said, voice rough" | | 12 | "she said, her voice trembling" | | 13 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 14 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 15 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" | | 16 | "he said, voice rough" | | 17 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "he repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.306 | | leniency | 0.613 | | rawRatio | 0.158 | | effectiveRatio | 0.097 | |