Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMV7R0P5A2W87GSW7QKNZN

Run Details

Duration:
27.8s
Cost:
$0.010292

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could knock a second time, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame like he’d been expecting her. His platinum hair was slicked back, just as she remembered, but his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held a flicker of something unreadable. Surprise, maybe. Or irritation. The scent of sandalwood and old books drifted from the flat behind him. “Rory,” he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. “This is unexpected.” She swallowed, gripping the strap of her messenger bag tighter. “Yeah, well. I didn’t exactly plan on showing up at your door either.” Lucien exhaled through his nose, then stepped aside, gesturing with his ivory-handled cane. “Come in, then. Before Ptolemy decides to make a break for it.” The tabby in question was already weaving between Lucien’s legs, tail flicking with feline judgment. Rory stepped inside, her boots scuffing against the worn floorboards. The flat was exactly as she remembered—cluttered, lived-in, every surface buried under books and scrolls. A half-empty cup of tea sat on the coffee table, steam long gone. She turned to face him. “I need your help.” Lucien arched a brow, shutting the door with a quiet click. “Do you now?” “Don’t act like you’re surprised.” Rory crossed her arms. “You’re the one who told me to come to you if I ever needed—” “A favor,” he cut in, voice low. “Not a rescue.” She flinched. That word—rescue—hung between them, heavy with history. The last time she’d seen him, she’d been bleeding in the back of a cab, running from Evan. Lucien had patched her up, given her a place to stay, and then… then he’d walked away. No explanation, just a note on the pillow. *This isn’t a life for you.* “Well, I’m not asking for a rescue,” she said, sharper than she intended. “I’m asking for information. There’s a name I need to track down. Someone from the underworld.” Lucien studied her for a long moment, then sighed, running a hand through his hair. The motion made his tailored suit jacket pull tight across his shoulders. “And you couldn’t have called?” “I don’t have your number.” “You could’ve gotten it.” “From who? Silas?” She scoffed. “He’d have asked questions.” “And I won’t?” Rory hesitated. The truth was, she didn’t know what Lucien would do. That was the problem. He was a fixer, a broker of secrets, and she’d never been entirely sure where his loyalties lay. But she also knew, with bone-deep certainty, that he wouldn’t turn her away. Not when she looked at him like this—like she was drowning and he was the only one who could throw her a line. “Please,” she said softly. Lucien’s expression darkened, his jaw tightening. He turned away, moving to the small kitchenette. The clink of glass followed, then the glug of liquid being poured. “Drink?” “No.” “You’re going to need one.” She watched as he downed his own glass in one smooth motion, then refilled it. The amber liquid caught the light, glowing like his eye. When he finally turned back to her, his face was carefully blank. “Who is it you’re looking for?” Rory exhaled, some of the tension leaving her shoulders. “His name’s Elias Veyne. He’s a collector. Deals in occult artifacts.” Lucien stilled. “Veyne?” “You know him.” “Of course I know him.” His voice was dangerously calm. “He’s not someone you want to tangle with, Rory.” “I don’t have a choice.” “There’s always a choice.” She stepped closer, close enough to see the faint scar along his collarbone—old, but not as old as the ones she couldn’t see. “Not this time.” Lucien’s gaze dropped to her wrist, where the crescent-shaped scar peeked out from under her sleeve. His fingers twitched, like he wanted to reach for her. Instead, he set his glass down with a sharp *clink*. “Tell me everything.” Rory hesitated, then pulled the crumpled note from her pocket. The paper was thin, the ink smudged. “This was left at my flat. No signature, but the handwriting matches the letters Evan used to send me.” Lucien took it, his expression darkening as he read. “‘The past always catches up.’ Charming.” “Evan’s not the type to be poetic. Someone’s using him to get to me.” “And you think Veyne is behind it?” “I think he’s the only one who’d know enough about my past to make it hurt.” She swallowed. “Evan’s not just an ex, Lucien. He’s—” “A monster,” Lucien finished, voice flat. “I know.” Rory looked away. She didn’t need his pity. She needed his help. Lucien folded the note carefully, then tucked it into his jacket pocket. “I’ll find out what I can. But you’re not going after Veyne alone.” “I wasn’t planning on it.” “Good.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. “Because if you think I’m letting you walk into this without me, you’re even more reckless than I remember.” Rory’s breath hitched. The air between them was charged, thick with things unsaid. She could smell the whiskey on his breath, see the way his pulse jumped in his throat. “Lucien—” His hand cupped her jaw, thumb brushing over her cheekbone. “You should’ve called.” She should’ve. But she hadn’t. Because some part of her had known that if she heard his voice, she wouldn’t be able to stay away. His lips were warm when they met hers, hesitant at first, then deeper, like he was trying to memorize the shape of her. Rory melted into him, her hands fisting in his jacket. It had been so long—too long—and yet it felt like no time had passed at all. When he pulled back, his forehead rested against hers. “This changes nothing,” he murmured. Rory smiled, bitter and sweet. “Liar.” Lucien’s laugh was low, rough. “Maybe.” His hand slid down to her wrist, fingers tracing the scar there. “But I’m still not letting you face this alone.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him she didn’t need his protection. But the truth was, she did. And for the first time in a long time, she let herself admit it.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.7778% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
71.0704% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1037
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.7136% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1037
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"unreadable"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean19.67
std16.6
cv0.844
sampleLengths
064
111
223
325
453
59
614
723
810
952
106
1129
1232
135
144
159
163
1770
184
1927
201
215
2237
236
2420
253
263
2719
285
294
3026
3136
323
3336
3415
3514
367
3725
388
3912
4025
415
4237
4330
441
4513
4625
4749
4814
496
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"was slicked"
1"being poured"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was drowning"
1"was trying"
89.0713% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount743
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.052489905787348586
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010767160161507403
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean8.97
std5.8
cv0.646
sampleLengths
025
122
22
32
413
58
63
710
813
913
1012
1115
1210
1315
1413
155
164
1711
183
199
2014
217
223
232
247
2518
2613
274
288
296
3013
3116
3215
3312
345
355
364
375
384
393
402
4110
424
4318
4413
4523
464
476
488
4912
56.7251% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3508771929824561
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners40
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey (say, voice age)"
1"he cut in, voice low (cut in, voice)"
2"she said, sharper than she intended (say, intend)"
3"she said softly (say softly)"
4"Lucien finished, voice flat (finish)"
5"he murmured (murmur)"
86.7858%