| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.257 | | leniency | 0.514 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 96.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "electric" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "gleaming" | | 7 | "flicked" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "looming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 34 | | markdownWords | 194 | | totalWords | 1300 | | ratio | 0.149 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The boundary hums,\"" | | 1 | "\"The Veil is thin here.\"" | | 2 | "shifted" | | 3 | "\"The rules are different here,\"" | | 4 | "\"Fae magic. It remembers.\"" | | 5 | "\"Took you long enough, little mortal. I was beginning to think you’d lost your nerve.\"" | | 6 | "\"And yet, here you are. The grove has judged you worthy.\"" | | 7 | "\"Though I see you’ve brought a shadow with you. How… unexpected.\"" | | 8 | "\"The Veil is thinning everywhere, Seer. Even in the places between.\"" | | 9 | "\"Come. There’s something you should see.\"" | | 10 | "\"It reacts to the magic here.\"" | | 11 | "\"Perhaps it recognizes its kin.\"" | | 12 | "hollow" | | 13 | "door" | | 14 | "\"And it’s weakening. The Veil is fraying.\"" | | 15 | "chime" | | 16 | "\"It’s old,\"" | | 17 | "\"Older than the Wardens. Older than the Fae Courts.\"" | | 18 | "\"Oh, little mortal. You don’t close a wound like this. You *tend" | | 19 | "\"But first, you must understand what it is you’re tending.\"" | | 20 | "Demons" | | 21 | "\"Dymas,\"" | | 22 | "\"The realm of Gluttony.\"" | | 23 | "\"All of Hel is a prison, little mortal. But some chains are heavier than others.\"" | | 24 | "moving" | | 25 | "\"They’re testing the boundaries.\"" | | 26 | "\"No. But you cannot fix it alone.\"" | | 27 | "\"Take this. It will guide you when the time comes.\"" | | 28 | "screamed" | | 29 | "\"Go. Now. The grove will not hold them back for long.\"" | | 30 | "\"We need to move.\"" | | 31 | "moved" | | 32 | "\"It’s not just a guide,\"" | | 33 | "\"It’s a key.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1063 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 5 | | Rory | 20 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Images | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Images" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.559 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "crimson that seemed to drink in the light" | | 1 | "as if recoiling" | | 2 | "as if reacting to the magic saturating the air" | | 3 | "looked like glass" | | 4 | "quite hold form—hands reaching, mouths whispering" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1300 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 25.49 | | std | 19.22 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 61 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 49 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 54 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 38 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something electric, like the moment before a storm breaks." | | 1 | "The next—" | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals unfurling in impossible colors—indigo, violet, a deep, bruised crimson that seemed to drink in the light." | | 3 | "She resisted the urge to pull it out and look at it—something about this place made her want to keep it hidden." | | 4 | "The tunnel opened into a cavern—no, not a cavern." | | 5 | "The water’s surface rippled, then stilled, and then—" | | 6 | "But the people—no, not people." | | 7 | "*Demons*—were hollow-eyed, their laughter too loud, their movements jerky, like marionettes on fraying strings." | | 8 | "Shadows slithering, coalescing into shapes that didn’t quite hold form—hands reaching, mouths whispering." | | 9 | "Inside, something glinted—another pendant, this one carved from bone." | | 10 | "She lunged for the boundary, fingers scraping against the monolith—" | | 11 | "—and then they were back in Richmond Park, the cold morning air slamming into her like a physical force." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1077 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.031569173630454965 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01021355617455896 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 10.32 | | std | 6.52 | | cv | 0.632 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 46.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she turned, beckoning them" | | 1 | "Then Rory straightened, pulling the" | | 2 | "Somewhere beyond the Veil, something" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 1 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 2 | "they said, crouching to trail" | | 3 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 4 | "She finally turned, her pale" | | 5 | "Her gaze flicked to Nyx," | | 6 | "It was the *door*." | | 7 | "She turned, her silver hair" | | 8 | "She gestured to the pool." | | 9 | "She reached into the folds" | | 10 | "They burst back into the" | | 11 | "She lunged for the boundary," | | 12 | "It glowed faintly, its crimson" | | 13 | "they said slowly" |
| | ratio | 0.156 | |
| 48.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 4 | "The faint violet glow of" | | 5 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 6 | "Rory exhaled, watching her breath" | | 7 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 8 | "The moment her fingers brushed" | | 9 | "The trees stretched impossibly tall," | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their" | | 11 | "The air was warmer here," | | 12 | "Rory’s breath hitched." | | 13 | "Nyx flowed forward, their shadowy" | | 14 | "they said, crouching to trail" | | 15 | "The petals curled inward at" | | 16 | "A path wound ahead, paved" | | 17 | "Rory followed, her pulse quickening." | | 18 | "The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer," | | 19 | "She resisted the urge to" |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 55.56% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "—and then they were back" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 72.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals unfurling in impossible colors—indigo, violet, a deep, bruised crimson that seemed to drink in the light." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer, almost uncomfortably so, as if reacting to the magic saturating the air." | | 2 | "The trees thinned, opening into a clearing where a single, massive oak stood at the center, its branches twisting toward the sky like grasping fingers." | | 3 | "The path beyond the clearing sloped downward, winding through a tunnel of flowering vines that swayed without wind." | | 4 | "But it wasn’t the pool that made Rory’s breath catch." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 1 | "She stepped, boots sinking into the moss between the stones" | | 2 | "She turned, her silver hair catching the light" |
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| 64.29% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.171 | |