Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMYESSR13MM6REHB2XMR1R

Run Details

Duration:
10.5s
Cost:
$0.000236

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station at Camden was supposed to be a dead end. That was the word Detective Harlow Quinn had gotten from the precinct—no bodies, no signs of struggle, just a routine call about a disturbance in a restricted area. But the moment she stepped beneath the rusted sign that read *Camden Town Station* in faded, peeling letters, her boots crunching over broken glass and the scent of damp stone thick in her nose, she knew it wasn’t routine. Eva Kowalski stood near the entrance, her satchel slung over one shoulder, her round glasses reflecting the sickly glow of the emergency lights. She was the one who’d called it in, or rather, the one who’d *noticed* it. Eva had a habit of noticing things others missed. That was why Quinn had dragged her here, against her better judgment. The last thing she needed was a civilian—especially one with a master’s in Ancient History—complicating her case. “You’re sure this is the right place?” Quinn asked, her voice low, sharp. The station’s arched ceiling loomed above them, its ribs of concrete cracked and sagging, the air thick with the metallic tang of old blood and something else—something sharp, like ozone after a storm. Eva tucked a strand of curly red hair behind her left ear, a nervous habit Quinn had learned to read. “Positive. The coordinates matched the description of the Veil Market’s last known location.” She held up a crumpled piece of paper, the ink smudged as if from hurried fingers. “This is where the last sighting was. And according to the sources I’ve been tracking, this is where they move to every full moon.” Quinn exhaled through her nose, her sharp jaw tightening. The Veil Market. A name that sent a chill down her spine. It wasn’t on any official map, but whispers of it had been creeping into the underbelly of London for years—a black market for the supernatural, where enchanted goods and forbidden knowledge changed hands under the cover of darkness. And now, it was here. In her jurisdiction. “You’re telling me this place is some kind of occult bazaar?” Quinn asked, though she already knew the answer. The evidence was in the details—the way the shadows pooled unnaturally in the corners, the faint hum of energy that prickled the hairs on the back of her neck. Eva shrugged, her freckled cheeks flushed. “I didn’t say it was a bazaar. I said it’s a *market*. And if you look closely—” Quinn cut her off with a gesture. “I’ve looked closely. I’m the one who found the body.” Eva’s breath hitched. “Body?” Quinn led the way deeper into the station, her flashlight cutting through the gloom. The tracks ran empty, the platforms littered with debris—broken crates, discarded bottles, the occasional glint of something metallic. But it wasn’t the debris that made her stomach clench. It was the *lack* of it. No signs of a struggle. No blood pooling on the ground. No body, not even a skeleton. “Where is it?” Eva whispered, her voice tight. Quinn’s boots scuffed against the grime as she moved toward a crumpled figure near the far wall. The body was small, curled into itself, as if trying to disappear. But it wasn’t trying hard enough. The flashlight beam caught the pale skin, the dark smudges under the eyes, the way the fingers were splayed as if reaching for something just out of reach. “This isn’t right,” Eva murmured. Quinn crouched, her gloved fingers brushing the body’s shoulder. The skin was cold, but not unnaturally so. No rigor mortis. No signs of decay. Just… still. Like someone had turned off a switch. “What do you mean?” Quinn asked, though she already knew. “There’s no blood. No wounds. No signs of violence.” Eva’s voice was steady, but her hands were trembling as she reached into her satchel and pulled out a small notebook. She flipped it open, her fingers tracing the pages. “According to my sources, the Veil Market deals in more than just goods. They deal in *people*. And if this is one of them—” “One of *them*?” Quinn’s voice was a growl. Eva hesitated, then nodded. “They’re not always human. Or not entirely. The market thrives on the supernatural, Detective. And whatever happened here… it wasn’t natural.” Quinn’s jaw clenched. She didn’t like the sound of that. Not one bit. She stood, brushing the dust from her knees, and turned to the body again. The flashlight caught something glinting at the victim’s throat—a thin silver chain, the end of it a small, oddly shaped pendant. Quinn plucked it free, turning it over in her fingers. It was a compass, small and brass, its face etched with strange sigils. The needle wasn’t pointing north. It wasn’t pointing anywhere. It was just… still. “This isn’t right,” Quinn muttered. Eva leaned in, her glasses catching the light. “That’s a Veil Compass. They’re rare. Used to navigate between realms.” Quinn’s fingers tightened around the pendant. “And this one was around someone’s neck.” Eva’s eyes widened. “Someone who wasn’t supposed to be here.” Quinn’s mind raced. The Veil Market. The compass. The body that wasn’t a body. It didn’t add up. Not in the way it should. She turned to Eva, her voice low and dangerous. “You said you had sources. Who else knows about this place?” Eva swallowed hard. “Only a few. Most of them don’t talk. And the ones who do… they don’t live long.” Quinn’s gaze darkened. “Then we’d better figure this out before they decide to take another one.” She stepped back, her flashlight sweeping the area one last time. The shadows seemed to shift, to move just beyond the edge of her vision. She could feel it—the presence of something else in this place. Something watching. Something waiting. Quinn holstered her weapon, her fingers brushing the familiar weight of her badge. She had a case to solve. And if the Veil Market thought they could operate in her jurisdiction without consequences, they had another thing coming. She turned to Eva, her voice steady despite the storm brewing inside her. “Let’s start with the basics. Who was this person? How did they end up here?” Eva hesitated, then reached into her satchel again, pulling out a folded piece of paper. She unfolded it carefully, revealing a sketch—crude, but clear. A face, blurred but unmistakable. A woman with sharp features, a sharp jawline, eyes that seemed to see right through you. Quinn’s breath caught in her throat. She knew that face. It was her own.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
90.9091% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.3636% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"jaw clenched"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"glinting"
2"loomed"
3"jaw clenched"
4"weight"
5"etched"
6"navigate"
33.3333% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"jaw clenched"
2"sent a chill down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"knew that face"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean30.28
std24.52
cv0.81
sampleLengths
080
176
246
373
467
548
623
717
84
965
108
1163
125
1333
1410
1563
168
1725
1813
1971
205
2119
2213
2310
2424
2520
2620
2716
2838
292
3038
3128
3245
336
344
354
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"was supposed"
1"were splayed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs155
matches
0"wasn’t pointing"
1"wasn’t pointing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03002309468822171
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009237875288683603
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean10.79
std8.39
cv0.777
sampleLengths
013
128
239
323
415
59
612
717
813
933
1020
1129
1224
139
143
159
1638
175
183
1919
2029
216
2217
237
2410
253
261
2714
2818
2910
306
315
326
336
348
3517
3612
376
3828
395
409
418
423
434
441
451
467
4710
4830
499
43.2343% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3069306930693069
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners31
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
2"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
85.5200%