| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "fleeting" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1021 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "Follow him." | | 1 | "The Raven’s Nest" | | 2 | "Tomás." | | 3 | "you" | | 4 | "wrong." | | 5 | "They" | | 6 | "everything." | | 7 | "move." | | 8 | "no!" | | 9 | "more than dead." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 927 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 17 | | Harlow | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Tomás | 7 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Tomás" | | 4 | "Saint" | | 5 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.583 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1021 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 18.56 | | std | 16.48 | | cv | 0.888 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 47 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.77% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "was chasing" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was going" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of wet pavement and exhaust, thick with the scent of something older—something that clung to the damp like a second layer of skin." | | 1 | "The man in front of her—a wiry figure with a scar running down his forearm—had vanished into the labyrinth of Soho, leaving behind only a trail of wet footprints and the faint, acrid tang of something burning." | | 2 | "And yet, the scent of the Veil Market—rich, intoxicating, like dark chocolate and old blood—pulled at her like a siren’s call." | | 3 | "The air inside was thick with the scent of stale beer and something sharper—alcohol mixed with something else, something that made her stomach twist." | | 4 | "The way he moved, the way he carried himself—like a man who’d seen too much and still chose to keep walking." | | 5 | "The back door creaked open, and a gust of cold air hit them, carrying the scent of damp stone and something older—something that made Quinn’s skin prickle." | | 6 | "The underground market was a labyrinth of tunnels, their walls slick with moisture, their air thick with the scent of ozone and something sweeter—like crushed violets and old magic." | | 7 | "Then she saw it—a flicker of movement in the darkness ahead." | | 8 | "A sound cut through the silence—a low, guttural whisper." | | 9 | "It was something else entirely—a shape shifting between forms, its eyes glowing like embers in the dark." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 941 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.024442082890541977 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003188097768331562 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 9.52 | | std | 7.23 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 39.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.21495327102803738 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw it—a flicker" | | 1 | "Then he was there, his" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 72.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the wheel tighter," | | 1 | "She’d seen enough of this" | | 2 | "She turned the key in" | | 3 | "She pushed through the door," | | 4 | "She didn’t need to see" | | 5 | "she said, her voice sharp" | | 6 | "He exhaled, rubbing the back" | | 7 | "She didn’t answer." | | 8 | "She didn’t have to." | | 9 | "She turned just in time" | | 10 | "*They* knew she was coming." | | 11 | "It was the same face" | | 12 | "She didn’t flinch." | | 13 | "She knew the risk." | | 14 | "She didn’t wait." | | 15 | "She didn’t look back." | | 16 | "He stumbled, but he didn’t" | | 17 | "She didn’t care about the" | | 18 | "She didn’t care about the" | | 19 | "She skidded to a halt," |
| | ratio | 0.369 | |
| 19.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered against the" | | 1 | "She gripped the wheel tighter," | | 2 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 3 | "Detective Harlow Quinn had never" | | 4 | "The man in front of" | | 5 | "Quinn’s instincts screamed at her:" | | 6 | "She’d seen enough of this" | | 7 | "She turned the key in" | | 8 | "The rain didn’t bother her." | | 9 | "The neon sign of *The" | | 10 | "Quinn stepped out of the" | | 11 | "The air inside was thick" | | 12 | "She pushed through the door," | | 13 | "Quinn’s pulse quickened." | | 14 | "She didn’t need to see" | | 15 | "The way he moved, the" | | 16 | "she said, her voice sharp" | | 17 | "Tomás turned, his warm brown" | | 18 | "He exhaled, rubbing the back" | | 19 | "A server sidled up beside" |
| | ratio | 0.881 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.64% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of wet pavement and exhaust, thick with the scent of something older—something that clung to the damp like a second layer of skin." | | 1 | "The air inside was thick with the scent of stale beer and something sharper—alcohol mixed with something else, something that made her stomach twist." | | 2 | "The back door creaked open, and a gust of cold air hit them, carrying the scent of damp stone and something older—something that made Quinn’s skin prickle." | | 3 | "It was something else entirely—a shape shifting between forms, its eyes glowing like embers in the dark." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice sharp with the weight of her own exhaustion" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her gaze lingering on the scar along his forearm" | | 2 | "the man said, his voice smooth, dangerous" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |