| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 32 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx's form solidified slightly [slightly]" | | 1 | "Nyx said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.525 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 81.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1869 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1869 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "sent shivers down" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "sent shivers down" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "crystalline" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "cascading" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "sanctuary" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1851 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 94 | | wordCount | 1236 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 2.35 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 29 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 21 | | December | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Heartstone | 5 | | England | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Earth | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | London | 2 | | Glowing | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Varga" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Glowing" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "December" | | 3 | "England" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.327 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "path that seemed to appear and disappear with each step" | | 1 | "seemed ancient beyond reckoning, their bark inscribed with spiraling patterns that moved when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 2 | "materials that seemed to be part stone, part living wood, with windows that reflected not the Grove but different skies entirely" | | 3 | "seemed woven from moonlight and mist, and though she appeared solid, Aurora noticed that when Isolde moved, her bare feet left no impression on the plush carpet" | | 4 | "appeared solid Aurora noticed that when Isolde moved, her bare feet left no impression on the plush carpet" | | 5 | "looked like liquid starlight" | | 6 | "appeared, leading away from the cottage toward a different section of the boundary" |
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| 91.95% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.08 | | wordCount | 1851 | | matches | | 0 | "neither day nor" | | 1 | "not the Grove but different skies entirely" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 28.48 | | std | 18.42 | | cv | 0.647 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 73 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 68 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 58 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 55 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 62 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 51 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | | 0 | "was nearly freezing" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "The way they said her name—like wind through empty corridors—still sent shivers down her spine after all these months." | | 1 | "The normal sounds of the park—distant traffic, the occasional dog walker—had faded, replaced by an expectant hush." | | 2 | "The air between them shimmered faintly, like heat rising from summer pavement—except it was nearly freezing." | | 3 | "The transition wasn't dramatic—no flash of light, no disorienting twist—but the world around her changed completely." | | 4 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their shadowy form more defined in this place—as if the rules that governed their existence held less sway here." | | 5 | "Wildflowers in impossible colors—blue that shifted to purple when viewed directly, white blooms that glowed with internal light—carpeted the ground." | | 6 | "Aurora noticed that while her boots left impressions in the dewy grass, Nyx left no mark at all—as expected." | | 7 | "It was both quaint and impossible—built from materials that seemed to be part stone, part living wood, with windows that reflected not the Grove but different skies entirely." | | 8 | "They entered the cottage, which—like everything in this place—was larger inside than physics should allow." | | 9 | "Nyx moved closer to Aurora, their form solidifying further—a protective gesture." | | 10 | "The liquid map zoomed in, focusing on a familiar location—the Golden Empress restaurant where Aurora worked deliveries." | | 11 | "Outside, a keening wail rose—unearthly and filled with hunger." | | 12 | "As they approached the new boundary point, Aurora saw Richmond Park beyond—but it was morning, not night." | | 13 | "Ahead lay London, unsuspecting of the rifts widening beneath its streets—and the hunters from Dymas who now stalked its shadows, searching for a chef who had escaped their eternal contract." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1257 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.031026252983293555 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017501988862370723 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 13.51 | | std | 7.88 | | cv | 0.583 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 59.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3795620437956204 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath clouded before her," | | 1 | "she said, her fingers instinctively" | | 2 | "They continued in silence, following" | | 3 | "she asked, though she already" | | 4 | "they explained, noticing her stare" | | 5 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "It was both quaint and" | | 7 | "They entered the cottage, which—like" | | 8 | "She wore a gown that" | | 9 | "She moved toward them with" | | 10 | "Her gaze returned to Aurora" | | 11 | "She moved to one of" | | 12 | "She unstoppered the vial, and" | | 13 | "Their form rippled like disturbed" | | 14 | "She moved to a cabinet" | | 15 | "Her eyes suddenly glowed brighter," | | 16 | "Her gaze shifted to Nyx" | | 17 | "They hurried down the path," | | 18 | "she asked, alarmed" |
| | ratio | 0.198 | |
| 53.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The winter air bit at" | | 1 | "Her breath clouded before her," | | 2 | "The pendant against Aurora's chest" | | 3 | "she said, her fingers instinctively" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 5 | "The way they said her" | | 6 | "Aurora replied, adjusting the Fae" | | 7 | "The moonsilver dagger remained cold" | | 8 | "They continued in silence, following" | | 9 | "The normal sounds of the" | | 10 | "Aurora stopped abruptly." | | 11 | "The air between them shimmered" | | 12 | "she asked, though she already" | | 13 | "The Heartstone burned against her" | | 14 | "Nyx's violet eyes narrowed as" | | 15 | "Aurora stepped toward the threshold," | | 16 | "Nyx's form solidified slightly, a" | | 17 | "Aurora nodded, squared her shoulders," | | 18 | "The transition wasn't dramatic—no flash" | | 19 | "The winter night gave way" |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stood a circle" | | 1 | "As if in answer, a" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "They continued in silence, following a path that seemed to appear and disappear with each step." | | 1 | "Before them stood a circle of ancient oak trees, their massive trunks twisted into formations that resembled standing stones." | | 2 | "The air grew thick with unfamiliar scents: flowers that shouldn't bloom in December, fruits that shouldn't grow in England at all." | | 3 | "Wildflowers in impossible colors—blue that shifted to purple when viewed directly, white blooms that glowed with internal light—carpeted the ground." | | 4 | "The trees that formed the boundary now seemed ancient beyond reckoning, their bark inscribed with spiraling patterns that moved when she wasn't looking directly…" | | 5 | "They moved deeper into the Grove, following a path of flat stones that emerged from the grass before their feet and disappeared behind them." | | 6 | "But more curiously, looking back, she saw her own footprints fading away, the blades of grass straightening as if she'd never passed." | | 7 | "It was both quaint and impossible—built from materials that seemed to be part stone, part living wood, with windows that reflected not the Grove but different s…" | | 8 | "One showed stars in formations Aurora had never seen, another a blood-red sunset over mountains that couldn't exist on Earth." | | 9 | "She wore a gown that seemed woven from moonlight and mist, and though she appeared solid, Aurora noticed that when Isolde moved, her bare feet left no impressio…" | | 10 | "As if in answer, a new path appeared, leading away from the cottage toward a different section of the boundary." | | 11 | "Ahead lay London, unsuspecting of the rifts widening beneath its streets—and the hunters from Dymas who now stalked its shadows, searching for a chef who had es…" |
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| 46.88% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 32 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her fingers instinctively touching the crimson stone" | | 1 | "Nyx's form solidified slightly, a sign of their concern" | | 2 | "Nyx replied, their whisper-voice carrying a note of warning" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her voice returning to normal" | | 4 | "she asked, alarmed" |
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| 2.46% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they explained (explain)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" | | 5 | "Aurora gasped (gasp)" | | 6 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.344 | | leniency | 0.689 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.295 | |