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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN0QWE36MDG5A3Z4CD8MGJ
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Model:
Ministral 3B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
13.9s
Cost:
$0.000193
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest
flickered
like a dying ember against the storm’s relentless howl, casting long, jagged shadows across the slick pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came in shallow bursts, her fingers gripping the handle of her flashlight as she pressed forward through the drizzle. The air smelled of damp earth and something sharper—burnt oil, maybe, or the metallic tang of fear. She had been chasing Tomás Herrera for hours, ever since the paramedic had vanished from the bar’s back room, leaving behind only a single Saint Christopher medallion, its silver surface dulled by the rain. Her
watch
—worn leather, the kind that still hummed with the ghost of a man who’d once patched her up after a bullet grazed her ribs—ticked away the seconds. Quinn knew she should have called in backup. She had the instincts, the training, but something in her bones told her this wasn’t just another case of a man slipping through the cracks. Something supernatural lingered in the air, thick and
oppressive
, like the scent of damp wool after a long winter. She turned the corner onto a side street where the gas lamps had long since gone dark, their light swallowed by the storm. The rain lashed her face, stinging her eyes, but she didn’t slow. Herrera had been here before—she’d seen the way he’d slipped into the Raven’s Nest, how he’d vanished into the shadows before the bartender could even ask what he wanted. And now, with the market’s schedule shifting every full moon, he’d taken the next step. She could hear him now, muffled but unmistakable, the clatter of boots against the concrete, the occasional curse in a language she didn’t recognize. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat. She had no idea what kind of danger Herrera
was running
from, but she knew one thing for certain: he wasn’t alone. The clique. The whispers in her mind, the way her skin prickled when she thought about the supernatural origins of her partner’s death, made her stomach twist. She had to find him before he found *her*. The chase led her down a narrow alley, the kind that smelled of old urine and something older, something that made her skin crawl. The flashlight beam cut through the gloom, revealing a set of rusted metal stairs descending into darkness. Quinn hesitated, her breath shallow. The market was underground, hidden beneath the Tube station, accessible only to those who had the right token. She had no bone token. She didn’t even know if she
was supposed
to have one. But she was a detective. She didn’t ask permission. Her foot hit the first step, the metal groaning under the
weight
of her body. The air below was colder, thicker, like the breath of a corpse. The flashlight
flickered
, casting eerie reflections off the damp walls. Then she saw it—a faint glow, a
flicker
of movement in the shadows. Herrera was there, moving like a shadow himself, his scarred forearm
glinting
under the dim light. He turned, his face illuminated by the bar’s neon sign, and for a heartbeat, Quinn thought she saw something in his eyes—something that wasn’t quite human. “You shouldn’t be down here,” she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. Herrera didn’t answer right away. He studied her, his gaze sharp, assessing. “You’re not supposed to be either.” Quinn’s flashlight swung toward him, illuminating the way his Saint Christopher medallion glowed faintly in the dark. “I don’t play by the rules.” Herrera exhaled, a gust of warm air that smelled of sweat and something metallic. “Then you’re in trouble.” She didn’t wait for him to explain. The market was a labyrinth of stalls and hidden corners, the air thick with the scent of enchanted goods and the faint, sickly sweetness of something she couldn’t name. The clique. The whispers in her mind grew louder, a chorus of voices that urged her to turn back, to leave this place before it left her. But Quinn had spent too many years chasing shadows to turn and run. She followed Herrera through the maze of stalls, her flashlight cutting through the gloom, her pulse a steady drumbeat in her ears. The market was alive with activity—vendors hawking their wares, customers bargaining in hushed tones, the occasional
flicker
of movement in the dark corners. Herrera led her deeper, past stalls selling black-market alchemical substances to ones selling enchanted weapons, their blades humming with an energy that made Quinn’s skin prickle. Then,
suddenly
, the path opened into a larger chamber, the air thick with the scent of old magic. At the center of it all stood a figure in the shadows, their silhouette unmistakable. Silas. The man who owned the Raven’s Nest. His eyes were cold, his smile a blade. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice smooth as oil. “I was beginning to think you’d give up.” Herrera stepped between them, his voice low. “She’s not supposed to be here.” Silas chuckled, a sound like dry leaves scraping stone. “Oh, but she is. And she’s not alone.” His gaze
flicked
to Quinn, his expression
unreadable
. “You’ve been following him, haven’t you?” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “I’m just doing my job.” Silas’s smile widened, revealing teeth that were too sharp. “And what job is that, exactly? Hunting down supernatural criminals? Because if you’re not careful, you’ll find yourself in a position you can’t escape.” Herrera’s hand went to his side, where Quinn knew he carried a knife. “She’s not here to hurt you.” Silas’s eyes gleamed in the dark. “No? Then why does she have a gun?” Quinn’s fingers tightened around the flashlight, her grip steady. “I’m here to find out what’s happening here.” Silas’s laugh
echoed
through the chamber, rich and mocking. “And what’s happening here, Detective Quinn? You’re about to find out.” He turned to Herrera, his voice dropping to a whisper. “She’s already in too deep.” Herrera didn’t flinch. “She’s not like you.” Silas’s gaze locked onto Quinn, his expression
unreadable
. “You’re not like me, either. But you’re not supposed to be here.” He extended a hand, his fingers curling into a claw. “Come with me, Detective. And maybe, just maybe, you’ll learn something.” Quinn hesitated, her mind racing. The market was a place of secrets, of danger, of things that should never be seen. But she had a job to do. And if she was going to find out what
was happening
here, she needed to know what Herrera knew. She stepped forward, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “I’m not leaving until I know what’s going on.” Silas’s smile widened, his eyes
gleaming
in the dark. “Then you’re in for a long night.” The market was alive with movement, the air thick with the scent of old magic and something darker, something that made Quinn’s skin crawl. Herrera led her deeper into the labyrinth of stalls, his voice low and urgent. “You have to trust me,” he said, his gaze fixed on Quinn’s face. “This isn’t just about the clique. It’s about something bigger.” Quinn’s flashlight cut through the gloom, illuminating the way ahead. She could see the
flicker
of movement in the dark corners, the occasional whisper of voices that made her skin prickle. The market was a maze of secrets, and she was trapped inside it, surrounded by danger. Herrera’s voice cut through the silence, his tone urgent. “You have to understand, Quinn. The clique isn’t just a group of criminals. They’re something else. Something that shouldn’t exist.” Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She had to find out what Herrera knew, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. Not again. She followed him deeper into the market, her flashlight cutting through the gloom, her mind racing. The stalls
were filled
with enchanted goods, their wares glowing with an energy that made Quinn’s skin prickle. She could see the
flicker
of movement in the dark corners, the occasional whisper of voices that made her skin crawl. Herrera stopped in front of a stall, his voice low and urgent. “You have to understand, Quinn. The clique isn’t just a group of criminals. They’re something else. Something that shouldn’t exist.” Quinn’s breath hitched, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She had to find out what Herrera knew, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. Not again. She stepped forward, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “What are you talking about?” Herrera’s gaze locked onto hers, his eyes filled with something that made Quinn’s breath catch. “The Veil Market isn’t just a place. It’s a door.” Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat, her mind racing. “A door to what?” Herrera’s voice was low, urgent. “To something that shouldn’t be here.” Quinn’s flashlight cut through the gloom, illuminating the way ahead. She could see the
flicker
of movement in the dark corners, the occasional whisper of voices that made her skin crawl. The market was a maze of secrets, and she was trapped inside it, surrounded by danger. Herrera’s hand went to his side, where Quinn knew he carried a knife. “You have to trust me, Quinn. This isn’t just about the clique. It’s about something bigger.” She didn’t answer right away. The market was alive with movement, the air thick with the scent of old magic. She could feel the
weight
of the danger around her, the threat of something that made her skin crawl. But she had a job to do. And if she was going to find out what
was happening
here, she needed to know what Herrera knew. She stepped forward, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “What do you mean, something bigger?” Herrera’s gaze locked onto hers, his eyes filled with something that made Quinn’s breath catch. “The Veil Market isn’t just a place. It’s a gateway.” Quinn’s breath hitched, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She had to find out what Herrera knew, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. Not again. Silas’s voice cut through the silence, his tone cold and mocking. “You’re not supposed to be here, Detective Quinn.” Quinn’s flashlight cut through the gloom, illuminating the way ahead. She could see the
flicker
of movement in the dark corners, the occasional whisper of voices that made her skin crawl. The market was a maze of secrets, and she was trapped inside it, surrounded by danger. Herrera’s hand went to his side, his voice urgent. “I need your help.” Quinn’s breath caught in her throat, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She had to decide what to do. She turned to Silas, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “What do you want from me?” Silas’s smile widened, his eyes
gleaming
in the dark. “Information. And then, perhaps, you’ll be able to leave this place alive.” Herrera stepped forward, his voice low and urgent. “She’s not like you, Silas. She’s not afraid.” Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She had to find out what
was happening
here, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. Not again. She looked at Herrera, her gaze filled with something that made him hesitate. “What’s the truth, Tommy?” Herrera exhaled, a gust of warm air that smelled of sweat and something metallic. “The Veil Market isn’t just a place. It’s a gateway to another world.” Quinn’s breath hitched, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, her heart race. She had to find out what
was happening
here, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. Not again. She turned to Silas, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “And what is this world?” Silas’s smile widened, his eyes
gleaming
in the dark. “A world that shouldn’t exist.” Herrera stepped forward, his voice low and urgent. “The clique isn’t just a group of criminals. They’re something else. Something that shouldn’t be here.” Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat, her mind racing. She had to decide what to do. She had to find out what
was happening
here, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. Not again. She looked at Herrera, her gaze filled with something that made him hesitate. “What do you need from me?” Herrera exhaled, his voice steady despite the tremor in his hands. “I need you to trust me.” Quinn’s breath caught in her throat, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She had to find out what
was happening
here, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. She turned to Silas, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “I’m not leaving until I know what’s going on.” Silas’s eyes gleamed in the dark, his smile sharp. “Then you’ll find out soon enough.” Herrera’s hand went to his side, his voice urgent. “I need you to help me stop them.” Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat, her mind racing. She had to decide. She had to find out what
was happening
here, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. She stepped forward, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “I’m in.” Herrera’s gaze locked onto hers, his eyes filled with something that made Quinn’s breath catch. “Thank you.” Quinn’s flashlight illuminated the path ahead, the market alive with movement, the air thick with the scent of old magic. She had made her choice. Now, she had to see it through. Silas’s voice cut through the silence, his tone cold and mocking. “You’re not supposed to be here, Detective Quinn.” Herrera’s voice was low, urgent. “I know.” Quinn’s
heart pounded in her chest
, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She had to find out what
was happening
here, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. She turned to face Silas, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “What do you want from me?” Silas’s smile widened, his eyes
gleaming
in the dark. “Information.” Herrera stepped forward, his voice low. “And then you’ll leave us alone.” Quinn’s breath hitched. “And what if I don’t?” Silas’s gaze locked onto hers, his expression
unreadable
. “Then you’ll find yourself in a place you’ll never leave.” Herrera’s hand went to his side, his voice urgent. “We have to stop them before it’s too late.” Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat, her mind racing. She had to decide. She had to find out what
was happening
here. She looked at Herrera, her gaze filled with something that made him hesitate. “What do you need from me?” Herrera exhaled, his voice steady despite the
weight
of the danger around them. “Just trust me.” Quinn’s flashlight cut through the dark, illuminating the path ahead. The market was alive with secrets, with danger, with something that made her skin crawl. But she had made her choice. Now, she had to see it through. She turned to Silas, her voice firm. “I know what you’re doing.” Silas’s smile widened, his eyes
gleaming
in the dark. “You do?” Quinn’s breath caught in her throat. “I know.” Herrera’s voice was low, urgent. “We have to move.” Quinn’s pulse hammered in her chest, her mind racing. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She had to find out what
was happening
here, but she couldn’t let herself get too close. She turned to face Herrera, her flashlight cutting through the dark. “Let’s go.” Herrera nodded, his gaze fixed on Quinn’s face. “Together.” Quinn’s breath hitched as they moved deeper into the market, the shadows swallowing them whole.
The air was thick with
secrets, with danger, with the promise of something greater than either of them could have imagined. She had made her choice. Now, she had to walk into the unknown. Silas’s laughter
echoed
through the chamber, a sound that made Quinn’s skin crawl. “You’re not supposed to be here, Detective Quinn.” Herrera’s voice was low, urgent. “We’re not alone.” Quinn’s flashlight
flickered
, casting long shadows that danced across the damp walls. She had to find out what
was happening
here. She had to stop them before it was too late. She took a step forward, her heart pounding in her chest. The market was alive with secrets, with danger, with something that made her skin crawl. But she had made her choice. Now, she had to see it through. Herrera’s hand found hers, his grip steady. “You’re the only one who can help us.” Quinn’s breath caught in her throat. She had spent years chasing shadows, but this was different. This was something that made her skin crawl, something that made her heart race. She looked into Herrera’s eyes, his gaze filled with something that made her hesitate no longer. She nodded. “Let’s do this.” The market swallowed them whole, the shadows swallowing their light, but Quinn knew one thing for certain: she was not leaving until she found out what
was happening
. And if it meant walking into the dark with Herrera, then that’s what she would do.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
3
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
96.6555%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
2990
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
16.3880%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
2990
totalAiIsms
25
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
3
1
word
"flicker"
count
6
2
word
"flicked"
count
1
3
word
"gleaming"
count
5
4
word
"glinting"
count
1
5
word
"oppressive"
count
1
6
word
"unreadable"
count
3
7
word
"weight"
count
3
8
word
"echoed"
count
2
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"flicker"
2
"flicked"
3
"gleaming"
4
"glinting"
5
"oppressive"
6
"unreadable"
7
"weight"
8
"echoed"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
211
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
211
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
274
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
98
mean
30.43
std
21.98
cv
0.722
sampleLengths
0
99
1
80
2
103
3
64
4
80
5
9
6
92
7
16
8
18
9
23
10
18
11
63
12
84
13
66
14
13
15
31
16
8
17
33
18
19
19
14
20
17
21
35
22
7
23
41
24
47
25
18
26
16
27
61
28
47
29
29
30
51
31
55
32
32
33
48
34
14
35
25
36
13
37
11
38
47
39
29
40
65
41
15
42
25
43
48
44
19
45
47
46
13
47
40
48
16
49
21
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
211
matches
0
"was supposed"
1
"were filled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
14
totalVerbs
458
matches
0
"was running"
1
"was happening"
2
"was happening"
3
"was happening"
4
"was happening"
5
"was happening"
6
"was happening"
7
"was happening"
8
"was happening"
9
"was happening"
10
"was happening"
11
"was happening"
12
"was happening"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2503
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
50
adverbRatio
0.01997602876548142
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.001997602876548142
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
274
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
274
mean
10.88
std
6.31
cv
0.58
sampleLengths
0
25
1
23
2
17
3
34
4
28
5
8
6
25
7
19
8
23
9
12
10
29
11
15
12
24
13
6
14
22
15
2
16
25
17
9
18
24
19
17
20
5
21
18
22
5
23
11
24
5
25
4
26
15
27
12
28
10
29
13
30
16
31
26
32
16
33
5
34
7
35
6
36
17
37
6
38
14
39
4
40
7
41
29
42
2
43
25
44
13
45
22
46
23
47
26
48
18
49
15
43.4307%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
18
diversityRatio
0.11313868613138686
totalSentences
274
uniqueOpeners
31
91.6667%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"he said, his gaze fixed on Quinn’s face (say, fix)"
89.1063%